30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
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30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
SHIT I GOT COMPETITION THIS WEEK RIGHT ON
YO SIGN IN AND WELL DO 2O LINES MAX
SPIT BY WEDNESDAY MAN ILL SPIT RIGHT AFTER U AND I WONT RECYCLE I JUST MAKIN SURE I DONT WASTE AN IILL VERSE
U UNDERSTAND
ANYWAYS GOOD LUCK
OUT
...Signing in...
TRAVIS is too large to handle- call him the microphone vandal//
i rip Stallone and step into the jungle to kill Rambo//
your styles so phony DIREKT and im the fuckin copyright//
i get more wild than dedicated fans on hockey nights or during a Rocky fight//
u cant touch me i got all sorts of sources to use to seal//
try to breakthru barriers, barracks, barracades and my verbalforce fields//
im eat u like a 4 course meal from a beginner to a veteran/
i count on takin this thing in other words i plan to win//
You tried to shoot TRAV but your gat was not enabled//
And now ima leave DIREKT THREATS body mangled from his ankles to his facial//
The only toast you can relate to are slices-of-bread//
Learn a lesson from this niceness-instead fucker, if i see you bite-this-you're-dead//
Homothuggin' mothafuckah, I flip yo ass, berserk-for-a-cause//
I seen ya last battle, son, you been workin'-ya-jaws//
Youll never be ill in laimens terms You are a dreaming faker//
THREATS a bitch caught red handed like demonic finger painters//
DIREKT U Like knocking over PO Boxes uve had so many male crushes//
and ya verses sucked and ya still more ConSeated then jail buses//
watch as your lines get pushed back as if you were losin ya hair//
this wac kat Couldnt have the crowd standin with an encore of musical chairs/
Loving The Cocks', I'll Put A X On Your Dad's Head;
That's The Only Time You'll Be 'Rubbing The Spot'...!
Won't Even Matter If He's Being 'Summond Or Not'...
He'll Only Be Seeing 'Glory' When It's The 'Comming Of God'...!
I Inherit Tons; This Emcee 'Couldn't Serve Me For Lunch'...
Travezty Won't Be Killing Me; Still He Says: "I MURDER PEEPZ FOR FUN"...
He's On The Homo Tip, This Website Know's 'Dicks Are For Tra-vez'...
'Silly Rabbit', Battling Direkt Is Not A Game; 'Tricks Are For Kid's...!
All Your Lines Are Recycled; From Your First To 'Your Last'...
Only Thing You Produce Fresh Is The Shit From 'Your Ass'...!
Verse's are Soft...Here's My Question, Where's This 'Fag's Aggression?
Trav Has To Snatch Out Pupils; That's The Only Way He 'Grabs Attention'...!
He's rapping; 'Streets Are Hurt'...In That Case Im'a Have To 'Beat This Herb'...
'Cheeks are Curved'...Cut Your Verse And Make You 'Eat Your Words'...
Placing Beat's On HIm, You Got To Be 'Kidding Me Man'...
He Wheres Huggies; He See's Me And Starts 'Shitting His Pants...!
It's Offical, He's Afraid Of Me; It's A Phobia Like To 'Fly On Planes'...
Here's A Rose Selena, Your Always Quick To 'Die On Stage'...
Just Eat My Asshole So I Can Tell Everyone I 'Shit On T'...
I'll Rip Out Your Tonge...Now How You Gonna 'Spit With Me'?
Murder Peepz For Fun-(Thing under his Name)
20 keyed, Peace!
All Your Lines Are Recycled; From Your First To 'Your Last'...
Only Thing You Produce Fresh Is The Shit From 'Your Ass'...!
Verse's are Soft...Here's My Question, Where's This 'Fag's Aggression?
Trav Has To Snatch Out Pupils; That's The Only Way He 'Grabs Attention'...!
I dug that shit from direckt, u had good wordplay and punches, overall a pretty good fuckin verse.
DIREKT U Like knocking over PO Boxes uve had so many male crushes//
and ya verses sucked and ya still more ConSeated then jail buses//
Illest line from tha whole battle, travezty cam ill as fuck too,
Unfortunately, i didnt see much more good shit besides this line. everything else jus looked like fillers with a few scattered punches.
Vote-Direkt
Jus barely though
Peace.
Sorry if you guys think my lines are played...but...I haven't been on the written tip, and you guys have read alot more verses...I mainly freestyle, so it's hard to really convert when half this...or mabey 99% of this site does writtens and the others are freestyling, anyways, let the voting continue
1-0 DIRECT THREAT
Up...
Up!
aiight dis wuz a 7 outta 10 battle..both came ill with sum nice set up punches and great vocab..but direct got my vote cuz when i read his shyt he edged it out fo T..is whole verse wuz banging..t shyt kinda loss me in da middle of it but he still managed to keep it ill..but it want ill enuff to beat da comp..
vote:direck threat
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Direkt was more on point wit the flow and stayed consistent wit the attaccs. He gets my vote although trav came wit some nice punches.
I'm gone have to give it to Direkt Threat because of his punches and his rhyme scheme went better to me..
I liked Trav's Stallone/Rambo line but it didn't go well in this battle but if I was you I'd probably recycle that line in a real song or audio...
UP
Direct threat came better all round, fo show.. he used wordplay far more.. and punchs we're some what equal throught both emcees... flow was equal in my eyes... but the standing out of wordplay says that..
Direck too this one.. thats my vote..: Direct
TRAVEZTY
TRAVIS is too large to handle- call him the microphone vandal//
i rip Stallone and step into the jungle to kill Rambo//
NICE OPENING HERE,I WAS FEELING IT,I THOUGHT THE SETUP COULD OF BEEN BETTER THOUGH.
your styles so phony DIREKT and im the fuckin copyright//
i get more wild than dedicated fans on hockey nights or during a Rocky fight//
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS,PRETTY MUCH FILLER,SETUP DIDNT GO WITH THE PUNCH.
u cant touch me i got all sorts of sources to use to seal//
try to breakthru barriers, barracks, barracades and my verbalforce fields//
OK
im eat u like a 4 course meal from a beginner to a veteran/
i count on takin this thing in other words i plan to win//
OK
You tried to shoot TRAV but your gat was not enabled//
And now ima leave DIREKT THREATS body mangled from his ankles to his facial//
FEELING THIS A LITTLE MORE THAN THE OTHER TWO COUPLETS,NOT BAD
The only toast you can relate to are slices-of-bread//
Learn a lesson from this niceness-instead fucker, if i see you bite-this-you're-dead//
WEAK SHIT,NOT HARD HITTING,NO EFFECTIVNESS
Homothuggin' mothafuckah, I flip yo ass, berserk-for-a-cause//
I seen ya last battle, son, you been workin'-ya-jaws//
WEAK AGAIN MAN,NOT FEELING IT
Youll never be ill in laimens terms You are a dreaming faker//
THREATS a bitch caught red handed like demonic finger painters//
BETTER,NOT BAD SHIT,NOT TOO HARD THOUGH
DIREKT U Like knocking over PO Boxes uve had so many male crushes//
and ya verses sucked and ya still more ConSeated then jail buses//
BEST SHIT IN YOUR VERSE THUS FAR,FEELING THIS
watch as your lines get pushed back as if you were losin ya hair//
this wac kat Couldnt have the crowd standin with an encore of musical chairs/
NOT A GOOD ENDING IN MY EYES,KINDA A WEAK ENDING NOT DOING FOR YA
DIRECT THREAT
Loving The Cocks', I'll Put A X On Your Dad's Head;
That's The Only Time You'll Be 'Rubbing The Spot'...!
LIKEING THIS OPENER,DECENT SETUP AND PUNCH COMBO
Won't Even Matter If He's Being 'Summond Or Not'...
He'll Only Be Seeing 'Glory' When It's The 'Comming Of God'...!
OK,NOT REALLY FEELING IT
I Inherit Tons; This Emcee 'Couldn't Serve Me For Lunch'...
Travezty Won't Be Killing Me; Still He Says: "I MURDER PEEPZ FOR FUN"...
NOT FEELING THIS
Travezty Won't Be Killing Me; Still He Says: "I MURDER PEEPZ FOR FUN"...
He's On The Homo Tip, This Website Know's 'Dicks Are For Tra-vez'...
BLAH
'Silly Rabbit', Battling Direkt Is Not A Game; 'Tricks Are For Kid's...!
All Your Lines Are Recycled; From Your First To 'Your Last'...
NOOOOOO
Verse's are Soft...Here's My Question, Where's This 'Fag's Aggression?
Trav Has To Snatch Out Pupils; That's The Only Way He 'Grabs Attention'...!
NOT BAD SHIT
He's rapping; 'Streets Are Hurt'...In That Case Im'a Have To 'Beat This Herb'...
'Cheeks are Curved'...Cut Your Verse And Make You 'Eat Your Words'...
OK,NOT REALLY FEELING THIS EITHER,BUT COO
Placing Beat's On HIm, You Got To Be 'Kidding Me Man'...
He Wheres Huggies; He See's Me And Starts 'Shitting His Pants...!
SORTA FUNNY,NOT BAD
It's Offical, He's Afraid Of Me; It's A Phobia Like To 'Fly On Planes'...
Here's A Rose Selena, Your Always Quick To 'Die On Stage'...
OK
Just Eat My Asshole So I Can Tell Everyone I 'Shit On T'...
I'll Rip Out Your Tonge...Now How You Gonna 'Spit With Me'?
LITTLE BASIC FOR AN ENDING,NOT COMING TOO HARD MAN,
UMM BOTH CAME EQUALLY DECENT,WHERE ONE EXCELLED OTHER FLAWED,THESE VERSES WERE OK,BUT I FELT DIRECT CAME WITH MORE PUNCHES THAT WERE HARDER,TRAVEZTY WAS OK ON PUNCHES NOTHING TO DIRECT.
DIREKT THREAT- 2-0
TRAVEZTY- 2-3