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O and verse due today..............................
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lemme kill it quick, take a peak at my sneak-preview, this guy can't even get a review, ill make your freak leave you, killin you with no debut, this is the newbie issue... here have a tissue, pump gats all day, can't even check my play, your a snitch havin a bad day, sippin piss you only wish it was crisp, pist you kno it, glox i told it, holdin i show'd it... 2 gangsta fo yo shit, waitin fo that doah hit, shit poe ass cat, get in the back with the phenes and the crack, i just killed this track, get that wack shit outta here, you like one of those broken down tricks, playin wit they plastic dicks, you just got tore like some old kicks, that shit can never be fixed... fuck this shit is over, you couldn't even get lucky with a 4-leaf clover, you just a rollover, so while you sittin here gettin dissed here drink some more piss...
Even though your name says allday, still you can't pursue hot punches
I'll eat this newbie, for breakfast and for dinner, like brunches
Battling an poet? Watch my punches will leave you Deep
Can't even spit nice, if you use an "barbie" tooth paste to brush your teeth
Like your avy, If you win this batlte it's because you "hand out" dicks
Even though you "live" above me, dont mean you going to win kid
I peaked your aim, your an pro, at what? O, he's an pro at ripping guys butt's
Like an glover, with no 3- leafs, You winning this? Sorry but no luck
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yo allday ripped you authentic .....ALLDAY!u had some good punch lines man-"fuck this shit is over, you couldn't even get lucky with a 4-leaf clover, you just a rollover"
i liked that one-if i could man my vote would go to allday......... peace hit my battles up
Pope bitch stay away from my battles, matter of fact.......tell your "alisas" to stay away from me. If you want an "second" merking, then i'll give it to you, bitch.
ay bitch if ur punk ass wanna go ima haveta slap yo ass down hoe.........im all game 4 this one trick and read ur battle ginst judge peeps him check that small frie bring that shit hoe
Nigga....................stay away..................seriously..............
koo i'll c'ya wen i c ya, but dont try to say u gonna merk me and then step down, that a straight bitch ryte thur..........do ya'll feel me?
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Damn FL, bump this up #4..........................
Pope shut yo gay ass DR'n ass up please...anyway....
Alladay:
Pros:flow
cons:structure,lack of personals,played concepts
like that four leaf clover lien was weak,seriously
Mistuh_Authentiq
pros:I loved your flow
structuture was good also
the punches were good off and on
cons:I /HATE GAY PUNCHES
but you still managed t come up on top
vote/Mista
in indeph ur punk ass betta shut the fuck up, just cause ur boi got ass raped in this one( probley gets ass raped every tyme) im votin for allday bitch for wat i said earlyer
battle ME pope....................................
wack battle
all day- try comming with better structure your wordplay and disses where really elementary I wasnt feeling your verse at all I didnt see anything hard hitting it..
mista- pretty short verse but you came with better concepts and harder hitting disses in this battle than all day did I felt I liked the plays off his shit
hit up my battle against feeble if you guys can with a vote thank you
ay im game for dayz, hit it up, ima b gone for a while though
pope i unno da fuck u are on about mista auth took this hands down aswell, allday u need to use punches and personals, this aint freestyling... and work on ur structure and complexity.. ight 2/10
mista ya verse was ight, punches were pretty weak but won buy a fucking country mile.. the only one that even had a punch,personal lol 6/10
v/ mista
Iight
Mista took this at least he attempted at making punches, allday u was just talking bout some bullshit, u need to be more direct..it was like you was talking in general...Use wordplay and be complex wit cha vocab.....
V/Mista
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let get it onQuote:
Originally Posted by MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
i gotta give this to allday both of yallz was tight but allday came harder it was posed to be 10linez but yall got to work that out so far v-allday
my falt i voted for tha wrong man i got tha verse mixed up my I VOTED FOR MISTA
allday - Work on some structure man, your verse was kinda all over the place and your flow was at some points going for ya and at other points way off. Also work on throwing punches. You just kinda rambled for awhile and there wasn't much that was harsh in there. Like you see the way he setup his verse, that's the way to do it so voters can follow it.
Mista - FYI, brunch is breakfast and lunch, not breakfast and dinner, hahaha, it's cool man, just thought I'd tell ya that. The barbie line didn't make a lot of sense but it was funny for some reason. The rest was a bunch of statements that weren't really hitting, but you take this cause you had structure, a real rhyme scheme, and a few more disses than he did.
Vote - Mista
Please peep the sig, thx