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10-12 lines
no feed
no hate
no dr
checkins due sun.
verses due wed..
yo I'm checkin in. Good luck to ya. This link still alive?
Check............................................. .........!
Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
Bulb burning line=played out against me btw. Check my last like 4 battles lmao.
Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
LoL word, I was joking around on this verse.
Hehe.
nice battle umm.. given wins fo soh he had better punches and better structure n flo..... good battle once again...o can u guys vote on my battles plz in my sig!!!!!!!
yea like I'm supposed to know that, that line was ovaplayed? Good battle anywayz.
Nice battle. Flow was off in your verse dfunk.........Punches was ok. Given light nice job, dont stretch your lines and "white dogg" that's not good flow. Overall, this battle goes to given light cause of harder punches....
Upping this Mista Authentiq, I know where your from LoL.
wow there ain't any votes still. start votin peepz.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Given Light
No fam i aint from rapverse.......................
Yo..i think i can up this...uppin.....................
Dr- You Had A Nice Verse, Although It Was Past Played I Liked It. Your Punches Were Very Had Hittin Tho. Structure Wasnt Too Good. Overall An Ok Verse.
Favourite Line:
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery
Given- Awful Flow, But You Had Hard Hittin Non Played Punches. Few Stretched Lines But It Was A Good Verse.
Favourite Lines-
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out
v/given light
That lines doesnt' make any sense, either your saying I'm smarter than Bush, for using a real word, or that your stupid and had to make one up.Quote:
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery
Someone explain that to me, it probably did make sense, but I just don't get it.
Up.
Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
no punch
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
lol not really hard hitting
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
no
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
lol aight
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
harhar
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
lol ight closer
Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
ahaha funny opener
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
LOL good
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
lol
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
alright
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
no
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
no
Ok drunk u did alrightish, better than some spits ive seen on here but u still need to think of more punches and personals and leave the filler,freestyle mode out of it..
4/10
Green, most of ya shit had me laughing haha good shit, feel of a bit at the end tho those po po linez were just fucking wack lol but u still did wat was needed
7.5/10
v/green
^LoL word @ my closing 2 bars, I was completely joking around on those hehe.
and it's not po-po...it's poo-poo.
Word upping leave links!
^^^^^lol... who is Green
Yo GL vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169848
Breakdown-
Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
no punch
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
no
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
no
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
aight
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
........
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
ok closer
Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
ok opener
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
good
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
ok
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
alright
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
no
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
no
Ok Dr did ok for being new. but punches were wack, and for a crew battle, common guys.
v/GL
^I would vote but he's in my crew, have any other battles or om's than leave the link and I will vote or leave feedback, thanks for the votes.
Upping this buisness vote on this and please leave links!
u were both there on this one pretty fair battle but givin light had a couple better ones that i enjoyed
vote goes to givin light
-drfunk
elevate. Your verse had weak punches and filler. your flow was on point.
I just wasnt really feeling any of your punches.You need to be more creative.
agaon, elevate.
-given light
you had a couple of good lines. the rest was either decent or whack. you started alright but near the end it was whack. It didn tmatter anyway. your opner alone
won this for you. But you could have at least ended it good.
v/given light
overall better verse
Bout to be left for dead, nobody gonna look/
You ain’t half way to stardom, cause you gonna get shook/
no good opener
…ya mistook all ya battles, they was garbage /
Goin against Moe and Scarecrow? They all retarded/
^^who da fuck is dat
Using phrases like “Feeble Bullies Me”?/
Speak english man don’t nobody know what that means/
^^actually yeah i do, feeBle is a mod, ur dumB
Usin the word Strategic like it was a Grammar Degree/
Bush graduated and yet he used the word Strategery/
^^wuh!?!
Given Light bout to be murdered by rippin your spine/
Your career’s gonna be over after I spit twelve lines/
^^nice
Holdin mine. and I’ma continue to…despite/
Cause the bulb burned out for the Given Light/
^^nice ender n finally a punch
vs
Drfunk1986, is that doesn't even count as a real name
So how are you gonna diss me, when you already put yourself to shame!
^^lol nice way to start a verse
I could go on about how your so damn fake and phony
But you think your so tight with everyone, you'd just end up calling me homie!
^^nothin really
You talk alot of shit, and seem to run your mouth
Like the train tracks on your teeth, your lucks run out!
^^umm no
I'm typing with my fucking eyes closed, and my spelling is still better
Then I can read, you know word by word, not letter after letter!
^^umm nothin really again
The only thing I see even reasonably "funky" about you
Is that smell you emit, after licking the toilet seat when I go poo-poo!
^^hahaha nice
Ha, I'm joking around look what I said "poo-poo", but people can still read my lines
Blowed up beyond all recognition, like you walked all over my "land mines"!
^^i like da ender
muh votes goin to given light Beckuhz of his flow n atleast makin more sence....Both verses were whack tho.....elevate!.....~1~
v/given light
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