checkin.....
Printable View
checkin.....
check edy check check what no rules
haha son thought i was fergettin somethin.....
10-16 Bars
house rules
no less than 10 bars wtf
come on newb
yo i B dat souljah dat rips these niggas up wit all i got...
reppin A~Town to da fullest, always holdin it down fo muh spot...
u kall ur self visions, Battlin me is gon B worse then gettin incisions; in you...
kuz when i spit muh rhymes B hotter then da whole kritikal crew...
wuts fukin it all up is u, thinkin ur sick But really u only gotz da flu...
ill B ur antiBiotic, im iller then penicillin...
no one likes you, the only fan u eva had was spinnin on da ceilin...
yo dats only 8 Bars n u already cant Breathe, its just like SARS...
nah son im way worse, i make shit viBrate more then dat rocket in ur purse...
u from Varginia da virgin state...
da only way ur gettin laid is By slippin date rapes on lil Boys at da age of eight...
ill kall u mr jackson, u got fake Body parts...
as i send these lyrickal darts, u kan try n run But there aint no way u gon dodge muh flow, ur done...
you cant c me runnin a crew cause your proly in wun wit weak dudes,
i write poetikal skriptures to blind the eyes of all newbs like you//
how can you see losin when when you never seen write,
look up some recent shit from mr.spit and youll see ill end ya life//
you couldnt came at me strong if ya soul was anything stronger than mushy,
i leave a whole gappin in ya rhymes bigger than lil kims pussy//
listen to the kid talkin man what the fuck is this,
ill take your bitch and leave your ass searchin the internet for clits to lick//
im appauled you think you know your limits,
im murder you little resistence to delete ya existence cause bitch you spitten gimmicks//
sorry homeboy dont mean t get you pissed,
you couldnt beat you way to a win if you came out swingin wit a clnched fist//
kid listen my words are golden like the atomic energy commission,
i decinigrate ya surroundings like diseases wipped out by ya pediatrician//
i challenge u for a blast ha.....that just gave me a laugh,
the darkness is ya futura and past cause i put ya head up ya ass//
your already frettin and hidin and ya ass is at home,
i cant even call rapbattles and im rippin ya ass wit a cell phone//
im leavin torn shreded and ripped the fuck UP,
like lil john says '' BITCH CAUSE I DONT GIVE A FUCK" (theres your a~town words)
uppin for votes
uppin.....let da votes begin......................~1~
hey yall waht the fuck is goin on i know this place is active
what does no one vote anymor what the fuck
yeah lets get these fukin votes goin...............
dont have such long verses then maybe you can get more votes no one wants to sit down and read a book but Ill drop a vote here soon
krimson soulja.. u got good ideas u just dont put em to good use... somebody else could probably take ur verse, re write it and make it sound 10 times better... vision gets my vote... hes a better writter... i dont know what else to say
yo i B dat souljah dat rips these niggas up wit all i got...
reppin A~Town to da fullest, always holdin it down fo muh spot...
u kall ur self visions, Battlin me is gon B worse then gettin incisions; in you...
kuz when i spit muh rhymes B hotter then da whole kritikal crew...
nothing real hard here
wuts fukin it all up is u, thinkin ur sick But really u only gotz da flu...
wack ass line.. its also been used a bunch of times before
ill B ur antiBiotic, im iller then penicillin...
no one likes you, the only fan u eva had was spinnin on da ceilin...
blahh ok shit nothing real hard
yo dats only 8 Bars n u already cant Breathe, its just like SARS...
nah son im way worse, i make shit viBrate more then dat rocket in ur purse...
wack ass lines
u from Varginia da virgin state...
da only way ur gettin laid is By slippin date rapes on lil Boys at da age of eight...
gay shit..
ill kall u mr jackson, u got fake Body parts...
as i send these lyrickal darts, u kan try n run But there aint no way u gon dodge muh flow, ur done...
terrible verse.. you need to work on comming up with something hard.. and some more original shit.. your verse was terrible kid.. also try spell check next time before you drop a verse.. you can't spell worth shit kid
you cant c me runnin a crew cause your proly in wun wit weak dudes,
i write poetikal skriptures to blind the eyes of all newbs like you//
ok opener
how can you see losin when when you never seen write,
look up some recent shit from mr.spit and youll see ill end ya life//
you couldnt came at me strong if ya soul was anything stronger than mushy,
i leave a whole gappin in ya rhymes bigger than lil kims pussy//
lol yea ok.. last line was elementary yet funny
listen to the kid talkin man what the fuck is this,
ill take your bitch and leave your ass searchin the internet for clits to lick//
terrible line
im appauled you think you know your limits,
im murder you little resistence to delete ya existence cause bitch you spitten gimmicks//
sorry homeboy dont mean t get you pissed,
you couldnt beat you way to a win if you came out swingin wit a clnched fist//
wack shit but worded ok
kid listen my words are golden like the atomic energy commission,
i decinigrate ya surroundings like diseases wipped out by ya pediatrician//
nice use of the dictionary there lmao
i challenge u for a blast ha.....that just gave me a laugh,
the darkness is ya futura and past cause i put ya head up ya ass//
your already frettin and hidin and ya ass is at home,
i cant even call rapbattles and im rippin ya ass wit a cell phone//
im leavin torn shreded and ripped the fuck UP,
like lil john says '' BITCH CAUSE I DONT GIVE A FUCK" (theres your a~town words)
vote- visions.. he just had the less wack verse but verses were terrible
Yo i say krimson ripped that shit up way better then visions sucked
more votes please people
Daum i would say bof but Krimson made some more punches
Krimson u ripped it up dont let this prick stay on ur back
can we get some votes so i can get this k.o.
krimson, you had one good punch that i liked, and that was the one about tha fan on tha ceiling.
visions
you had an alright verse. you need ta work on your structure and make you punches a lil harder, although they were hard enough ta win so my vote goes ta you, but you better hit up my battle in my sig whith which ever one.
i think krimson had that shit idk what the fuck yall is talkin bout...
krimson gets my vote he had some hard punches
`1~
yo i B dat souljah dat rips these niggas up wit all i got...
reppin A~Town to da fullest, always holdin it down fo muh spot...
alright starter showin he got it ...........................
u kall ur self visions, Battlin me is gon B worse then gettin incisions; in you...
kuz when i spit muh rhymes B hotter then da whole kritikal crew...
wuts fukin it all up is u, thinkin ur sick But really u only gotz da flu...
good punch
ill B ur antiBiotic, im iller then penicillin...
no one likes you, the only fan u eva had was spinnin on da ceilin...
hahaha i liked that punch
yo dats only 8 Bars n u already cant Breathe, its just like SARS...
ehh weak
nah son im way worse, i make shit viBrate more then dat rocket in ur purse...
u from Varginia da virgin state...
not that good
da only way ur gettin laid is By slippin date rapes on lil Boys at da age of eight...
ill kall u mr jackson, u got fake Body parts...
i like that cuz i haten on mj
as i send these lyrickal darts, u kan try n run But there aint no way u gon dodge muh flow, ur done...
good finisher
visions
you cant c me runnin a crew cause your proly in wun wit weak dudes,
i write poetikal skriptures to blind the eyes of all newbs like you//
alright starter
how can you see losin when when you never seen write,
look up some recent shit from mr.spit and youll see ill end ya life//
not that good of a punch
you couldnt came at me strong if ya soul was anything stronger than mushy,
i leave a whole gappin in ya rhymes bigger than lil kims pussy//
u can get sumthing better than mushy n pussy
listen to the kid talkin man what the fuck is this,
ill take your bitch and leave your ass searchin the internet for clits to lick//
not that funny real no sense
im appauled you think you know your limits,
im murder you little resistence to delete ya existence cause bitch you spitten gimmicks//
that was a good punch
sorry homeboy dont mean t get you pissed,
you couldnt beat you way to a win if you came out swingin wit a clnched fist//
alright punch
kid listen my words are golden like the atomic energy commission,
i decinigrate ya surroundings like diseases wipped out by ya pediatrician//
good punch
i challenge u for a blast ha.....that just gave me a laugh,
the darkness is ya futura and past cause i put ya head up ya ass//
futura what is that ???
your already frettin and hidin and ya ass is at home,
i cant even call rapbattles and im rippin ya ass wit a cell phone//
y u keep talking bout his ass ??
im leavin torn shreded and ripped the fuck UP,
like lil john says '' BITCH CAUSE I DONT GIVE A FUCK" (theres your a~town words)
u are leaving torn shreded n ripped the fuck up well i guess so cuz my vote is for krimson
both of yall shit was pretty wack i unno wtf yall talking about lol, no punches no real HARD personals just a bunch of filler and weak disses, i liked krimson's verse better tho he wasent so wack for me, actually could read what he was wrtting, and understand it lol.......................
keep elevating yo
v/krims