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Rapbattle Crusade```
I've decided to write something in the style of 'topical'
this one goes out to all my homies who think they know shit about lyricism
The divine disciples inside the church's hollow spaces
were all disgraces of time only hurt to follow graces
with hail maries as they walk to sup at the Lord's table
I walked next to each one to make sure they were able
stable for what may hold their souls upon the bitter drink
like coals upon the brittle brink their hearts would never think
because the hearts of apostles merely glow with emotion
devotional pleas decreed by high, precluded every single notion
so softly like potion cups held to lips sizzled bright
the sight of holy men were burned by celestial might
passing by I stopped at each one, a macabre seraphim
like a maverick I stole each soul and warmly bearing him
I walked to the holy book for the final pinnacle elixir
and drank to devil's zenith while cursing every sacred scripture
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im assuming my crew is the divine disciples
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actually didn't even think to include you... or I would have added some 'sublime' leader
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Like it Alot
much respect
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ehh... I send Mag's wife one dick pic and he gets all angry and squinty eyed... wait - he's always squinty eyed...
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meh it was ok didnt seem like you really tried that hard..........and if you did.......this was not great....you tried to prove a point by saying the people in ss are not as good as you and this was your proof....well you fell short becuase this was not better then anything i read this week in ss so far. you seem about average.. dont get me wrong i am not saying i am better cuz i am not but you did not convince me that you are the best so mission failed.
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lol... no that wasn't the point at all sir...
you missed the intent
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the first 2 lines were hot but then ya flow went average, you used some big words which u probably think makes u a great lyricist it dont.
overall it was decent, structure was good but flow was average.
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^LMFAO. Mag will have a laugh over that fool.
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sorry mag - I couldn't write a verse in three minutes so I spent them thinking of that insult instead...
...Jacent ghostwrit it.
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it's a good thing I don't take advice from a mere rookie
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lol.... you ho
just write that diss and be done with it
