10 lines, 1 round, no crew votes, ill spit first
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10 lines, 1 round, no crew votes, ill spit first
Aight lets get goin i'm ready this is my check in !!
hey you all wanting to battle me agian?/
i mine aswell get it over fast so i begin/
last time we battled you sayed you fucked up?/
well you name is duvalrapstar it should be buttercup/
you need to get some weed and sit down and maybe take time to think /?
well you just going to say what body else did fuck i give you the fucking battle link/
so know what you running out fucking things to say cause really i dont give a fuck?/
cause i could care if i win or lose and how about you just go play tony hawk/
well really you all going to come back fuck yoou both time i was on the attack/
but so i car could less who you are fuck i dont care and fuck my ryhme are wack/
Hush, be quiet, your rhymes an't nothin
Your flow is lame,but who am I to name?
You bring up old battles that an't here
Yo rhymes must be a joke, cuz to me u a fuckin choke
I hate to do it to you but u an't nothin but a Kid
Who an't got no grammer
Its time for you to quit
And take your rhymes to da slammer
cuz what u jus said makes your whole flow dead
Quick keystyle couldn't think of nothin creative
hey that was a good battle so know we just wiat and get votes
yo thanks We have no real beef,but we need votes people lets get it
yeah good battle yeah that was sweet yeah we need to get soem votes
Yo duval that shit was so weak my momma could diss harder than that and she sings in chior.And silent j you shit was hard to read and some of the bars was to damn lengthy. Both of you guys need help. If yall wanna battle me I can show you some pointers. But You will get you ass raped with no ky but atleast you will know how to come hard and make sense. I would have to vote for silent j because it sems that he tried alittle harder.
Pains me to do this...
silent j came stretched as fuck, and geez, kid, how many times can you say you don't give a fuck in one verse?
You never really came at him, callin' him shit like buttercup.
However, Duval had a fucked up rhymescheme. I saw some at the end, but in the beginning it was nonexistent and his verse was mad short. No matter how good a verse is (which it wasn't), anyone can just write something. The idea is to be clever and make it rhyme.
So although shit was bullshit, silent j took it.
Both need to visit Tutorials to learn how to really throw a punch.
Vote: silent j
both verses were weak.no punch lines really stood out to make anybody really go oooh or nuthang but yo i would give the battle to silent j da verse was longer and he had a little mo to say :spit:
a borin battle but silent j took it cuz he put in more of an effort but just try and improve on everything. . . duvalrapstar u need to make ur lines longer man i read ur whole verse in like 4 seconds and bruv i aint even a fast reader.both just keep practising.peace.
v/ silent j
come on people dont forget to vote on the poll alright
you guys want to vote on this poll so we can close this battle
YO VOTE ON THIS SHIT alright and dont forget the poll alright
Descent battle i guess
Silent took it cause he had mroe effort into it.....
he plain out came harder and dropped better then Duval
Duval come harder next time.....if you slacked in your drop don't....
vote - silent j
return the favour and hit up my battle again lyricallace both ya'll peace
yo uppin 2 keep the votes comming in alright
yo duval, you came kinda weak on this one i've seen a hella lot betta from you seemed like you were rushin
silent-damn you said fuck 7 times in ten lines wuz hood wit that seemed like you aint had shit to say....
ima have to give it to silent for effort..duval cut the slackin, you can do better, and silent u can too seen better from both yall
vote/ silent
Oh I was I don't take the time to actually think about it but thanks for votin anyways
uppin 3 yeah i sayed fuck too many times lol thanks for votes so 2 more votes and this is over
both came pretty weak but silent, you didn't have any good punches really...nothin that really stood out to me. duval, you didn't come much better, but you pulled it out. silent, werk on ya structure and shit, and yall'll b straight.
v/duval
hit up this battle honestly:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171500
that battle was sooooooo shit,both verses where weak and there was no punches at all,even if u had punches,both of ur mental capacities is sooo light weighted that the punches wouldnt make sense
yo dont forget to vote on the poll battle coem on this battle was good
yo like peeps thsi was a good battle come on 2 votes and it over
last time we battled you sayed you fucked up?/
well you name is duvalrapstar it should be buttercup/
.vs.
nothind special.
Silent j, atleast you tried to throw a punch, some of your shit was a lil streched so try and cut some of the lines back, flow was a bit off aswell as your structure due to it being streched in some places. You've elevated a fair bit, keep battling and you'll go better.
Duval, half your shit didn't even rhyme. Work on punching better concepts and strech your lines bout 3 times as long as wat they already are. Weak verse overall, try actually punching next time.
V//silent j for actually attempting to punch. pz.
uppin 4 come on one more vote and this over
I gotta give this 1 to silent j cause he did a little better. Duval u aint really give a effort shorty!! u should've came harder, Come harder next time and u'll have a better chance!!!
yo jay you forgot to poll vote man lol
yo iam uppin 4 come on lets end this