ok.. bitch said 20 lines, 20 it is
no stupid votes, obviously.. 500 post count
hima use a little effort this time
no 3-0 knockout rule
no battle stipulations
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ok.. bitch said 20 lines, 20 it is
no stupid votes, obviously.. 500 post count
hima use a little effort this time
no 3-0 knockout rule
no battle stipulations
JayembeE's Verse:
You’re a sore fucking loser, took your first lose like a bitch,
Ya, you had an idea, I only turned off your fucking switch.
Now go slit your wrist, didn’t you learn I’m the suicidal route,
The outcome of this battle will result the same as our last bout.
You got knocked the fuck out…and still thought you were dope,
5 votes to none…now I got your head, dead at the end of a rope.
Re-center your scope……… better than that, stop firing blanks,
Do you really suck that bad, or is it a talent, either way...thanks.
Now take your ass to the bank…….. you need to be properly checked,
’Fore I inject intellect into your neck… wrecked, dissected w/o respect.
He’s subject of the neglected, yo, that’s cause you wine like a grapevine,
You cant stomach the lose……… instead you sway like a damn swine…
Which I didn’t expected, but its fine, you only showed your true side,
The kid who mopes & mutters & dopes & blubbers when he gets fried.
The boy who sighed, cried and lost his pride cause he lost in a battle,
Well. I’m shit creek, and you’re the motor less boat without paddles.
Ha-Ha, I cackle, you’re so pathetic that it almost embarrasses me
If I had to guess my bet would be that you have to sit down to pee.
So fuck you bitch…. I only need half of a line to finish you up.
…Fuck that, 4 words will be enough…
...
”Plainly said, you suck.”
iight im up n ready to go..
needless to say if you dont know what a multi or a punch is..
DONT VOTE for god sake
NO NEWBS
time for revenge.. check it
last round-
i didnt come with a full clip & ya won on some bull shit
now im comin duel grip'd bustin shells til this fools hit
gettin bag'd up this fag sucks i can tell he dont rap much
so i'll have him 'C-D-L' like he's driving in Mac trucks
son if raps ya life.. then your life has subtle meaning
u couldnt have 'twice the game' as me if u were double-teamin
in a puddle bleedin-
itl be somethin on the news, listen up son ya gonna lose
i stay 'hittin where it hurts' like im punchin on a bruise
last round was a fluke, OK.. & for you that wins a blessin
but now-
ya verse searches for answers & the whole things 'in question'
u should be cautious when steppin, cuz even at loss of a weapon
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
win again? ha! they say practice pays, still ya wack shit sprays
u couldnt get that lucky with a year full of St Patric's Days!
your a joke u aint dope.. the voters at a loss of choice
they wanna know whys J "forcin words" like he lost his voice
crammed words.. wack disses.. he always comes wit weak shit
we could 'talk wit skillz' but you'd have, none to speak wit!
ya fake n its a shame, thinkin u could make it to the fame
but being-
banned from arcades only time u tried to 'break into the game'
fuck you & have a nice day
He’s subject of the neglected, yo, that’s cause you wine like a grapevine,
You cant stomach the lose……… instead you sway like a damn swine…
vs
last round was a fluke, OK.. & for you that wins a blessin
but now-
ya verse searches for answers & the whole things 'in question'
u should be cautious when steppin, cuz even at loss of a weapon
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
crammed words.. wack disses.. he always comes wit weak shit
we could 'talk wit skillz' but you'd have, none to speak wit!
This was pretty one sided, besides the quotables CS stayed pretty consistant, Jay had alot of fillers and some really stretched bars, so CS takes this for more quotables and an overall better verse
Links in sig............................................... ..
i told you if you didnt apply by my rules, since i bet you once, you can go fuck yourself...maybe you dont understand what that means.
these are your rules.. without the stipulations, u never know how the voting is gonna go around here so why should i put myself up pinkslip and u say youll just take my name out ya sig, that doesnt sounds fair.. the battles on now ,the votes started, let it finish
last round was a fluke, OK.. & for you that wins a blessin
but now-
ya verse searches for answers & the whole things 'in question'
u should be cautious when steppin, cuz even at loss of a weapon
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
vs
Which I didn’t expected, but its fine, you only showed your true side,
The kid who mopes & mutters & dopes & blubbers when he gets fried.
though this was a one siddedn battle thought you came out good J just think CS came better and more consistant he had harder more wittier punches but no hate this was an iight battle keep it up yall
V cs
opppps my bad didnt see the 500 post thing well its stil my oppinion later yall peep the links out
up #1 i think
come on people
upping1
we got no luck J....
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
win again? ha! they say practice pays, still ya wack shit sprays
u couldnt get that lucky with a year full of St Patric's Days!
^ CS wins... this was real nice. So was the first couple bars...
Jay came personal, but i was feeling CS alot more. More creative.
vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165858
This was a pretty easy decision..
I thought that cs got this because he had a generally better verse, along with more quotables.
Re-center your scope……… better than that, stop firing blanks,
Do you really suck that bad, or is it a talent, either way...thanks.
Vs.
last round was a fluke, OK.. & for you that wins a blessin
but now-
ya verse searches for answers & the whole things 'in question'
u should be cautious when steppin, cuz even at loss of a weapon
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
crammed words.. wack disses.. he always comes wit weak shit
we could 'talk wit skillz' but you'd have, none to speak wit!
Those were actually pretty decent, while Jay, your quotable was the best line in your verse, but it was still horrible. Get better and use better punches and direct them at your opponent. Dont flip 8 Mile lines either with the paddle line. Weak.
Ceneter Sight, you have some room for improvment, but you did pretty good in this battle
V/CS
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cmon people. damn...vote on this shyite and center and myself will get back at you. JUST VOTE.
upping3 fucking vote bitches.
up pin four
uppin last time, we need a miracle here CS
one sided as hell, jay didnt have ne good punches, no wordplay no good metas, nothing really....wack verse against a decent verse from cs, good punches some ok concepts... better creativity, and a much better verse.
vote - cs
decent battle. jayembee lacked hard hitting punches. cuz a lot of his punches seemed like just statements. he didnt connect his punches that well either. CS had wittier and funner punches and he flowed better. and i agree with eclipse..
last round was a fluke, OK.. & for you that wins a blessin
but now-
ya verse searches for answers & the whole things 'in question'
u should be cautious when steppin, cuz even at loss of a weapon
i got J screamin "stop the fight!" like hes pausing in Tekken
crammed words.. wack disses.. he always comes wit weak shit
we could 'talk wit skillz' but you'd have, none to speak wit!
^this is what did it for me to vote for CS
vote/CS
Closed. No win
both over upped
^ opened. only cuz Center's voted on a lot of battles & people are being gay and not voting on his. So JUST this once we can forgive it. But center, dont expect this treatment in the future, since i can't be giving it to everyone. i'll just close this off though, you won fairly easily. all your opponent had was -well - not much... he tried to have a good flow but his flow was pretty bad, hard to read... yours was pretty good, and you at least attempted punches even though tekken stuff is played. v/ center sight