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10 - Lines.
g/l.
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Discussed most rules in BS.
Check in now though.
10 - Lines.
g/l.
Wreck'n with this check'n.
check, see u on the battlefield tonight................................. (how do u post without it saying "your post is too short")
just press the space bar until it says 50 characters...
^ lol nice trick
im home now, ima smoke an L and play some mech assault and probly do my verse on the side, so itl probly be up tonight, holla
word to that. imma drop in like 10
Yo. Check it.
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
G/L.
:thumbup:
smokin on that Kay-Bizzle, lets do it!
check it..
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
GL'
uppin for those late night voters.
Jay
Yo. Check it.
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
^^ nice opener
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
^^^ lol nice personal....
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
^^^ naw not feelin
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
^^^ nice
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
^^^ meh not really feelin it
over all...... 7/10
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
^^ this was a nice opener.... but all the weed lines are played
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
^^^ naw not feelin
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
^^^ LMAO..... ur best bar for sure
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
^^^ meh not bad
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
^^ meh not really
overall 6.8/10
vote - Jay for the reason his verse was thorough pretty dope from beginin to end.... no hate to either.... center ur shit was dope.... that beat ta rap line was hot if ur verse was like taht throughout u wuda had my vote... i just felt some of ur lines were forced or filler
CAN YALL PLEASE DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THA RETURN VS SKROLLZ AND DW VS SKROLLZ.... SHITS GETIN MAD SLEPT ON
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
lol funny opener
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
ha, nice
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
ok
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
meh
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
meh ender
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
meh
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
meh
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
ok
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
k
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
meh
yea, Jaymbee took this for having witter punches
V/JAY
hit my battles back
JMB-
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
Pretty nice opener, good wording
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
Good lines again. Did the mirror and his name being center sight go together, or am I reading to deep?
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
just rhyming words
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
didn't like this line
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
okay closer, coulda picked a better one
CS-
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
I liked it...good personal...even if it is a weed line
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
good rhyming...thas bout' it
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
okay at best...didn't think it was that hot
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
I liked this better than the one before it. This was hot.
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah. That shit was funny.
That closer was killer, but you couldn't go punch for punch with J. Your rhyme scheme and flow was immaculate, but he had more punches that were harder hitting. Thank you for the read and the battle was close, but the vote is JMB
vote= JMB
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165447
can y'all hit this up....I don't care who you vote for....just need some feed.
uppin2
Swaying edited out. This is your warning, if you sway again you will be dq'd. - Cel
damn man, i vote on like 20 fuckin battles and still cant get none returned, wtf's goin on???????????????
uppin3
uppin4
aight
jay i wasnt feelin the start off but you picked it up quick wit the anorexic line that was nice the self glory line was nice the hulk hogan line was aight the whole verse was cool i liked the strutcture it blended well
sight-i liked the blunt and j thing ,but ya lines was to short like its was a lil simplistic syain he wack and all that i wasnt feelin it...not enuff personals and wordplay an shit..kinda basic...but it wasnt ass crack an that steelers line i heard that one ...
v-j
RETURN THE LOVE
uppin4, dont sleep on it.
ive never lost to such a horrible verse b4.. im not gonna pretend to understand what the voters are thinkin, other than that they are newbs to the art of battling.. but thats all im saying, i wont be in here again no beef nothin like that.. u win lol pz
Yea, your right, I did win, because I used punches, and you used fillers like calling me gay and wack. Sore loser...oh, and maybe you dont understand what swaying means, because thats the second time you did it. Later.
Btw. I should thank you for doing that, because now I dont have to wait for someone else to vote for me. Peace.
what!!! show me one fucking punch, i was gonna leave it that i was just disappointed but if u gonna call me out iight.. in what language does envisioned in shit... and opitcal toilet match?? hulk hogan??? anorexic?? son YOU SUCK.. fuck all that bullshit man.. u dont even know what a punch is! georgie porgie?? man u on some fuckin elementary rhymin bullshit.. if any vet, some one with experience walked into this thread, even tho thats not my best verse, they could tell u who EASILY won ya shits garbage son.. PMing me all on my dick n shit about my pittsburgh line then i tell u how wack ur verse is all the sudden u changin your mood huh.. lick my balls u newb
hahaha...go get your vets... your rhyming gay/J...compete/weak...wack/rap...words/burgh( which other people have seen used before)...cake/mistake...youre a sore fucking loser and YOU suck my friend...thats why you left the sight for so fucking long...you got shamed. plain and simple. and yea, ill still say i like that burgh line...so once again, go find your mother fuckin vets bitch. you got wack filler lines. plainly said.
^ Calm down niggaz...
J...
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
Nice wordplay, personal and punch. Good opener...
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
Anorexic disses be madd played, but this was nice
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
No
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
lol Nice
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
Weak closure.
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Centre...
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
Nice personal but weak punch...
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
No
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
Whack
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
lol Nice personal and punch, ur best bar of battle
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
Weak closure.
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J took this wit consistency, only droppin one ass bar. Centre u only dropped 1 tyte bar, da rest was pure ass son. Up yo game and take da votes like a man, feel me?
Vote - J.
Hit da link up in my sig plz.
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