aite house rules.. good luck and i appreciate u acceptin this..
12-14 lines
how much time u want?
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aite house rules.. good luck and i appreciate u acceptin this..
12-14 lines
how much time u want?
Ahhhh, i gotta eat dinner real quik.. ill b back in 25.. my b
will drop tonight. good luck.
check.
Aite back.. so we droppin by tonite?... checkkity...
Aite.. too sleepy.. yo..
Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth/
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof./
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns/
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?/
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth/
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees/
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect
/
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous/
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:/
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."/
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me../
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..
dawg, i really can't drop tonight.
my friend is having a really hard time and i need to go over there right now.
i'm asking for an extension. can this be due tomorrow night?
i'm not ducking, but i don't have the time. i hope you understand man. peace.
o yea its all good.. jus drop by tonite (well tomoro in terms of weds), i can understand and ya dont even seem like the type to duck out like that so yep.. :thumbup:
kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast
later.
Ey props.. ya finally dropped LMAO jus playin.. aite lets get some votes in here ladies n gentlemen.. and i need a vote of two on my other battles so i can close em.. APPRECIATED
takahashi lost this battle because his disses didnt hit hard enough and some of his metaphors made absolutely no sense since when does "a pedaphile whos cock burns "stalk words ? also some of his lines werent hitting at his opponent that hard at all.. I felt like text had the better verse because his punchlines were direct and hard hitting.. line about "kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel" was nice and he had a couple of other good personals in there that outdid his opponents verse
so I give my vote to text
hit these battles up with votes if yall want.. they could use some http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=153956
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165375
iight here goes
tak
Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth/
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof./
weak opner
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns/
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?/
ok
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth/
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees/
huh ?
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect/
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous/
no
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:/
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."/
no
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me../
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..
not bad
text
kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
lmao good opner
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
lol
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
nice
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
ok
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast
lmao good finisher
1 sided battle props 2 both tho for doin there thang but text took this easy
tak u had sum ok punches but they were kinda weak not really many personals and ur flow was off structure was igght tho work on ur flow
text
good personals the sumo 1 was hella funny nice punches the flow was good and the structure was u had sum good funny stuff in there as well
moy vote goes to text for beein betta overall
lol.. aiite thanks for the votes but.. i thought my metaphors made pretty good sense hah.. heres an explanation..:
pedaphiles stalk.. i stalk too.. his cock burns.. cus he did deals wit "too many little assholes", i do too.. sall good tho
(thats should be "deals wit too many" not "did deals wit too many")
vote and leave links.
up.
Quote:
Originally Posted by -TexT-
word. ^
Takashi...
Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth/
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof./
weak opener
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns/
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?/
meh...weak
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth/
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees/
ya best so far
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous/
first line filler, second line played
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:/
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."/
weak
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me../
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..
dont diss ya own shit
-TexT-...
kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
good opener
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
lmao, nice shit man
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
good
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
nice
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast
nice finisher
This was a one-sided match, text came harder in every aspect, he had nice flow, witty punches, and i liked his structure. Takashi, ur shit was aight, but i rekon u need to work on ur punches, try to think of better concepts and put them into punches.
V//-TexT- 4 cumin harder in every aspect.
i just thought text had a more experienced structure of flow/diss combinations.. not much filler some good straight disses, taka had some kool multis and some nice disses but spaced a few of em, didnt end real strongly.. 20 knees line was kool, text was more consistant tho, fire w/ fire line was nice, he hit a little bit harder, vote= text
return a fair vote on one of these plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165178
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165339
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165298
Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof.
nice nameplay.
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?
i guess your slamming his post, but did you just call yourself a stalker?
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees
weak(period)
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous
once again...weak.
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."
dont self glorify yourself, it =whack.
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me..
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..
once again, self glorify'n yourself is lame and boring to read.
kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
not really feelin the punch there.
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
haha, a little bitta comedy, thats cool.
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
alright i suppose.
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
seems kinda like youre callin him fire...
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast
dope.
overall, i thought that text brought the better punches. i havent seen that kinda structure before, but its pretty tight. Taka just needs to learn the ropes a little and elevate his mind, and learn not to S.G. Text...you're best line was your finisher.
V- Text.
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
vs
nothing
taka i read better from u ur verse was too simplistic... punches were stupid..... no hate dawg elevate....text ur verse was decent i also read better from u dogg..... but u did come harder in lots of aspects
vote - text
can yall PLEASE vote on DW vs SKROLLZ and THA RETURN vs SKROLLZ... its gettin mad slept on
Jay or Center Sight, can one of you poll this?