Ernie Davis vs Abstract

ok the rules are.
10-20 lines.
no crew votes.
no hate votes.
no dr votes.


20 minutes to drop..please drop on time.. i hate in when people say they will and take an extra half an hour..

oh and good luck fo real. :thumbup:

oh checkin in..dont take too long i got schoolwork to do...

yo man check in................................now

Check it out yo..


I killin enemies... all them kritikal foes......
fags compared to dairy...cant stand up for themselves.kritikal 'lactose'..
end up with a smacked nose,cant compare to my fluid flow....
need you say more…nah? cuz aby just hit multi mode...dropin bombs
like pearl harbour..,on bitches style...ghost writer tampered.
I stay strapped just in case, where as ernie packs his pampers…
But bitch flow apparently will leave all coffin with his S.T.I’s
Yeah he spits ill…cyphillis germs in disguise…..
Your crew rosters weak as fuck..i take them apart one at a time…
Be a while before..i come for you though…cuz earnie’s 8th in line….
….God this dawgs 14…. A prepubesent fuck….think he got his flow locked….
But shit he only does text cuz kids balls haven’t dropped…..
Dawg you must suck…you on the ground beggin me to stop…pour out some liquor…
…light a match and like snoop “drop it like its hot.”
So I leave him excempt from rappin….16 lines bitch is plenty……
Abstract aint dodging his punches….cuz like his testicles there empty…..

Easy…..

20 mins up and earni nowere to be seen… shame.

kid no showed....it has been an hour and ten mins.....

calm down buddy....get off my sac im ready.....had to handle some business

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Lets go~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



Dont Come Down My Block Driving Slow You Better Push Ya Gears
Cause The Gats & Macs Long And Black Like Muslims Beards
I get Knowledge Prick So Aknowledge this I see U on that Work & College Shit
But Don't get ya noggin Split By Ernie's Hollow Tips
Abstract Dont Let The Iron Reach ya
Cause The Speech it Give, Will Raise Ya Sprit Like A ~Precher~
Put The Pump To Ya Chest, Leave Holes in Ya Flesh, Shots Molding Ya Vest
Blow Ya Lung In Ya Hand So You Will Really Be Holding Ya Breath
Face It Fam Battling Me No Hope You Gon Lose Im Declare Best
The Ground Is Where You Will Be Dead Rest, Resting dead Cause i Air Tecks
Abstract You Lucky If You Even Get One Vote Cause My Bars Are All Qoutes
You Bars Are All Jokes, Abstract Better Than Me Almost, But Hes Not There Yet

you know what time it is.......LOL I ain't 14 neither prick im 18 so get your shit right.....

If I knew how to change it I would........I accidently hit 14 instead of 17 but my birthday was yesterday so Im 18 now...lol....but if your whole verse was on my age.....lol......good luck

uppin it..............we need some votes.............

on your nuts kid dont make me laugh..it took you 2 fucking hours to spit...two fucking hours..when it shouda took 20...you no showed and now your spitten that verse that you put so much work into when it only took me..20 mins..i see that as a huge advantage...you no showed...and anyway you flamin fag....my whole verse was on what you presented in your profile....so now your lyin about your age on the internet...anyone can make up false statements about themselves and then suddenly dsay o its not true...you didnt even have one personal.......in that 1 hour 40 mins overdue verse...and you wanna bitch about my rhymeskills...dont make me laugh..you newbie...fag

ok ernie came decent while abstract came hard. abstract had better punches and a better flow. he had wittier bars and he was more creative with it. ernie had a decent verse but he kept comen played and he had all these un-direct lines, but other then that he had good punches. Abstract just came harder tho.

vote/abstract

LINK IN MY SIG

omfg!!! no breakdown necessary........that 1st bar kilt it, u kno, tha shyt about tha lactose, nice personals, punches, creativity, ummm....yea
ernie...wut can i say, lemme c ya were overdue by an hour n 40 minutes n ur verse still sucked, came played as fuk w/ indirect punches makin threats instead of talkin about ur opponent.......enuff ced

vote-Abstrakt

RTF, links n sig

Yo Makaveli You Forgot To Pole Your Result...peace I Will Return The Favour.

uppin 3................................................. ....

abstract i hated ya structure im sorry it was hard for me to read but i did read it the lactose thing was ok,,the bar i liked about his balls not droppin cuz of his age lol..thats funny the ender was hard as hell if you get past the structure it was a nice verse

ernie-poppin ya gat,,hit wit the tech wasnt really in battle form no disses just a gangsta peace however i did like the opener wit the muslim beards-even tho im feelin like i heard that before,,ya verse reminded me off some freeway state prop type shit...its as aight

for the most consistent disses
v-abstract

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lmao at your herbishness.You dont even know how to change your age...this is an up by the way,.

meh. this was a one sided battle.

Abstract, your verse was pretty good in my opinion. you had some creativity & wittiness. your opener was witty and funny. you could work on your structure because i noticed some lines were longer than others. your wordplay was there somewhat... you hit your opponent pretty hard.

Ernie, man, you gotta switch your style up or somethin. i mean, your flow's aiight and so is your structure.. but your creativity and wittiness is really lacking. you really oughta drop the gun talk.. because you use it way too much and it's not effective in a battle as it fails to hit your opponent on a personal level... sorry man, but elevate.

simply for Abstract's wittiness and Ernie talking about guns so much.. my vote goes to Abstract..


v/ Abstract


don't have enough posts to vote on this name yet.. got like 80. if i get 100 and this is still open, i'll poll my vote. favor already returned.

uppin 5 cummon peeps..i will return the favour...for definate if you just vote on this battle....my last up so please someone vote...thank you....

think abstract took this he had disses personals and punches davis I think was just swinging at air and not hitting anything no hate just have to givce it to abstract he came out hard and stayed consistant all thought this could of ben a better battle he did what he had to

v. abstract

oh yeah hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165593