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got crazy shit to do so ill drop by tomorrow night
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iight son one love
aight heres the drop
u never shoulda accepted this battle ur bout to get topped
when u fuck around like hanson ur bound to get mm. popped
like kanye on 106 tryna act ballerific
ur shit is fuckin ancient u spittin in hieroglyphics
"yo son im hott" only thing that he stammered
alcoholic carpenter..either way ull get hammered
even you'll know its time to leave when im done with this drop
u could be red with 8 sides still wouldnt know when to stop
so sit back relax come on son just keep chillin
here on rb jerseys rep the only thing u killin
goodluck kid
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my bad i'll drop
Fucking herb,needs 2 stop running his mouth,cause his tongue growing flem
The only time he'll give someone a lashing is if he threw an eyebrow at dem
Newb needs 2 change his direction cause he already facing me & Assazin
U couldn't even beat me even if u got three wishes like Aladdin
Took u out of da gucci store,put u in da 99cents store,u still wouldn't b more than ur worth
Plus,the only time you'll get inside a woman is if u reversed & went back 2 ur birth
u ain't no gangsta nigga u need to change your sig u faker........................
than bow wow cause i see more clips in u more than a bunch of paper
my punches will have u blown away,having a serious heart attack.........
...................................wiping away your sick breath more than a tic tac
my bad i'll drop
Fucking herb,needs 2 stop running his mouth,cause his tongue growing flem
The only time he'll give someone a lashing is if he threw an eyebrow at dem
Newb needs 2 change his direction cause he already facing me & Assazin
U couldn't even beat me even if u got three wishes like Aladdin
Took u out of da gucci store,put u in da 99cents store,u still wouldn't b more than ur worth
Plus,the only time you'll get inside a woman is if u reversed & went back 2 ur birth
u ain't no gangsta nigga u need to change your sig u faker.............
than bow wow cause i see more clips in u more than a bunch of paper
my punches will have u blown away,having a serious heart attack.........
...................................wiping away your sick breath more than a tic tac
1# uppin for votes
Aite i cant poll so ill make this quick...
Aite the tongue lasher came pretty hard.. i liked it. His little metaphors or watever were pretty sick..
Jerz didnt step it up enough to come back at him i dont think.. not much power in ya punches or anythin..
V(would go to)/ tongueeee
#2 uppin
Originally posted by:tOngueLasHing
u never shoulda accepted this battle ur bout to get topped
when u fuck around like hanson ur bound to get mm. popped
^^1ST LINE WAS S.G. 2ND LINE WEAK ON THE MET
like kanye on 106 tryna act ballerific
ur shit is fuckin ancient u spittin in hieroglyphics
^^THIS WHOLE BAR WASN'T EXCELLENT
"yo son im hott" only thing that he stammered
alcoholic carpenter..either way ull get hammered
^^NO REAL PUNCH IT WAS WEAK
even you'll know its time to leave when im done with this drop
u could be red with 8 sides still wouldnt know when to stop
^^OMG THIS WAS WEAK AS SHIT COME MORE CREATIVE
so sit back relax come on son just keep chillin
here on rb jerseys rep the only thing u killin
^^THIS WAS ALL FILLER
keep elevating you need to come more creative wit personals and punches
Originally posted by:Jerz Killer
Fucking herb,needs 2 stop running his mouth,cause his tongue growing flem
The only time he'll give someone a lashing is if he threw an eyebrow at dem
^^THIS WAS MEH COULD OF BEEN BETTER IN MY OPINION
Newb needs 2 change his direction cause he already facing me & Assazin
U couldn't even beat me even if u got three wishes like Aladdin
^^1ST LINE WAS MORE LIKE A FILLER...AND 2ND LINE WAS S.G.
Took u out of da gucci store,put u in da 99cents store,u still wouldn't b more than ur worth
Plus,the only time you'll get inside a woman is if u reversed & went back 2 ur birth
^^THIS WAS PROBLY THE DOPEST BAR IN THE BATTLE BUT HEY I'LL KEEP GOING
u ain't no gangsta nigga u need to change your sig u faker.............
than bow wow cause i see more clips in u more than a bunch of paper
^^OK
my punches will have u blown away,having a serious heart attack.........
...................................wiping away your sick breath more than a tic tac
^^MEH ON THE CLOSER COULD OF BEEN BETTER
keep rising could of came wit more smashing punches but you spit all which was needed for the battle good shit pz.....
V/Jerz Killer
for havin more punches and using more creativity
hit the link back wit siberian cause the other kat didn't spit yet much appreciated pz.....
3# uppin
Took u out of da gucci store,put u in da 99cents store,u still wouldn't b more than ur worth
Plus,the only time you'll get inside a woman is if u reversed & went back 2 ur birth
vs
nothing...
tounge u need to elevate dog... ur shit seemed forced u tryed to hard to create dope punches but didn't come out...... jerz not a bad verse u jus hit harder wit punches... n ur shit connected better...
vote - jerzkiller
can yall drop n honest vote on Moe Vs Skrollz
tounge.......
u never shoulda accepted this battle ur bout to get topped
when u fuck around like hanson ur bound to get mm. popped
hanson, havent heard them in YEARS
like kanye on 106 tryna act ballerific
ur shit is fuckin ancient u spittin in hieroglyphics
aight punch, good words
"yo son im hott" only thing that he stammered
alcoholic carpenter..either way ull get hammered
you got osme nice vocab, keep it up
even you'll know its time to leave when im done with this drop
u could be red with 8 sides still wouldnt know when to stop
good metaphor
so sit back relax come on son just keep chillin
here on rb jerseys rep the only thing u killin
HAHA, good closer
jerz killer......
Fucking herb,needs 2 stop running his mouth,cause his tongue growing flem
The only time he'll give someone a lashing is if he threw an eyebrow at dem
didnt really go together but aiight
Newb needs 2 change his direction cause he already facing me & Assazin
U couldn't even beat me even if u got three wishes like Aladdin
what is up with all the newb shit u said it once
Took u out of da gucci store,put u in da 99cents store,u still wouldn't b more than ur worth
Plus,the only time you'll get inside a woman is if u reversed & went back 2 ur birth
structure is off but good line
u ain't no gangsta nigga u need to change your sig u faker........................
than bow wow cause i see more clips in u more than a bunch of paper
my punches will have u blown away,having a serious heart attack.........
...................................wiping away your sick breath more than a tic tac
dont think all the .................is needed, go punches but lost points for all the ..............
v. jerz killa commin harder
uppin yall any kind of feedback
want feed back............ur loosing 3-0
yeah feedback as in shit that helps u elevate..as in what this sites about...dumb fuckQuote:
Originally Posted by Crowd-Pleaser
uppin #2 come on yall
4# uppin
uppin #3
dont sleep
dis my last up #5
uppin #4 we need some heads to vote in here yall
last up....we need votes on this shit
leave a link and ill hit u back
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v/jerz killer
tongue you didnt come hard at all, your verse was mostly filler you didnt really throw any punches....you didnt really have any hard hitting lines which makes it almost impossible to win........jerz killer you came way harder than tongue and that is way you take this....you out punched him and your verse had more creativity
hit this up honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165518
t0ngue, your structure and flow needs to be worked on man. it's not consistent and it takes away from the rest of your verse. you attempted some punches with creativity and wittiness, but your wording was really off so it made them less effective. overall, you need to work on your flow, structure, and wording because it really hurt you here.
jerz, your verse was okay. your flow and structure was a lot better than t0ngue's was. you had some witty punches with creativity that hit a lot harder than t0ngue's did, because you wording was better. overall, you came a lot harder and wittier than t0ngue in this battle, which is why you get my vote.
v/ jerzkiller
I can't vote, but in my opinion, both yall was roken that mik, some good punches, some wordplay, kouple personals ta spice it up ya know wat i'm sayin. I think jerz took thys. it seemed his verse was just kummin a lil harder