HARDCORE BATTLE: Theodore Upshaw vs. Biggunz

This is a Hardcore Battle......
F.A.M, Mr. Spit, Assazin, Makaveli, Twizted, Ssinnerisback, Civilized Rebel,
Genocide, Big Gunz, Madflex, Feeble all aliases, Celestial, Postmortem, Enough,
....Eclipse....., Token, Jem, Savir, No Moderators, No administrators
if your name is on this list sorry you cant vote........
10 to 15 lines due tomorrow by midnight thats Dec/23/2004 by 12:00 P.M.
No Dickriding
No Hate votes meaning if you hate one of us dont bother
No Recycling
No Biting
No Cre Votes
No Swaying
If you aint making a legitamate vote dont bother explaning who you thought was better................

here you go.....

awww this fag had to come to the defence of Feeble how sweet
ill make beatin this dude common........like trash in the backseat
makin peeps whos wanting an easy win come here to find Theadore Upshaw
his whole carrer is nothin but piss........like a full restroom stall
ill rip all his alias apart........condem him to a life full of torment
invent some words bro.......you represent LLL, your suppose to be decent
he's not gonna show or he'll run faster than roaches when a light shines
you could never blow up even if you ran your car over a field of mines
i'll leave him lookin stupider than Asheligh Simpson on saturday night
put a rubber band 'round ya rhymes'.......and they still wouldn't be tight
upercuttin this nobody off the stage onto a floor of spikes
if you was a pitcher....you would throw more balls than strikes

therre you go homie drop :thumbup:

Kids a monster at text, and yes its true
When every kid we've never heard of seems to vote for you
Ya through faggot, honestly we've all had it
needing to cheat to win, to even beat a has been
Or a never was, so when I aim to bust
You just aim ya buddies to vote and such
Dude, I hate you, Kid aint mean shit to me
I mean Tugs love guns... and I'm talkin literally
Beat Feebs? Not really, kid got rode to win
Bust ya grill... just like the one ya make ya living in

uppppppinnnnnnn # 1 go ahead and vote lol...........damn

Cleaned for votes and such

awww this fag had to come to the defence of Feeble how sweet
ill make beatin this dude common........like trash in the backseat
...hell no
makin peeps whos wanting an easy win come here to find Theadore Upshaw
his whole carrer is nothin but piss........like a full restroom stall
...barely rhymed first of all, and whack even if it somehow did
ill rip all his alias apart........condem him to a life full of torment
invent some words bro.......you represent LLL, your suppose to be decent
...no punch
he's not gonna show or he'll run faster than roaches when a light shines
you could never blow up even if you ran your car over a field of mines
...wtf is this?
i'll leave him lookin stupider than Asheligh Simpson on saturday night
put a rubber band 'round ya rhymes'.......and they still wouldn't be tight
...pathetic
upercuttin this nobody off the stage onto a floor of spikes
if you was a pitcher....you would throw more balls than strikes
...omfg this sucks

Horrible...

Kids a monster at text, and yes its true
When every kid we've never heard of seems to vote for you
...k
Ya through faggot, honestly we've all had it
needing to cheat to win, to even beat a has been
...lol
Or a never was, so when I aim to bust
You just aim ya buddies to vote and such
...word
Dude, I hate you, Kid aint mean shit to me
I mean Tugs love guns... and I'm talkin literally
...no
Beat Feebs? Not really, kid got rode to win
Bust ya grill... just like the one ya make ya living in
....word

Theo won easy, no need for deep explanations...

yo nice battle thats got to go too theo dont feel like typ'n it all but pretty much the same as socrates hit up some of my battles tell me what u think i only need a couple of more votes please help me kill these mc's and ill vote for urs when i get the posts

awww this fag had to come to the defence of Feeble how sweet
ill make beatin this dude common........like trash in the backseat
noo

makin peeps whos wanting an easy win come here to find Theadore Upshaw
his whole carrer is nothin but piss........like a full restroom stall
ehh

ill rip all his alias apart........condem him to a life full of torment
invent some words bro.......you represent LLL, your suppose to be decent
dude thats not a punch

he's not gonna show or he'll run faster than roaches when a light shines
you could never blow up even if you ran your car over a field of mines
no no no cmon your better then that

i'll leave him lookin stupider than Asheligh Simpson on saturday night
put a rubber band 'round ya rhymes'.......and they still wouldn't be tight
haha

upercuttin this nobody off the stage onto a floor of spikes
if you was a pitcher....you would throw more balls than strikes
no
1 good line.. shit.


Kids a monster at text, and yes its true
When every kid we've never heard of seems to vote for you
HAHAHA

Ya through faggot, honestly we've all had it
needing to cheat to win, to even beat a has been
HAHA

Or a never was, so when I aim to bust
You just aim ya buddies to vote and such
now your repeating yourself

Dude, I hate you, Kid aint mean shit to me
I mean Tugs love guns... and I'm talkin literally
no

Beat Feebs? Not really, kid got rode to win
Bust ya grill... just like the one ya make ya living in
no


your beginning was so you killed him, you bot sucked at the end

V/theo


FINISH MY BATTTLES.

BUGGUNZ
awww this fag had to come to the defence of Feeble how sweet
ill make beatin this dude common........like trash in the backseat
NO NOT FEELIN THIS

makin peeps whos wanting an easy win come here to find Theadore Upshaw
his whole carrer is nothin but piss........like a full restroom stall
OK

ill rip all his alias apart........condem him to a life full of torment
invent some words bro.......you represent LLL, your suppose to be decent
GOOD

he's not gonna show or he'll run faster than roaches when a light shines
you could never blow up even if you ran your car over a field of mines
OK

i'll leave him lookin stupider than Asheligh Simpson on saturday night
put a rubber band 'round ya rhymes'.......and they still wouldn't be tight
YE NICE

upercuttin this nobody off the stage onto a floor of spikes
if you was a pitcher....you would throw more balls than strikes
OK

THEODORE

Kids a monster at text, and yes its true
When every kid we've never heard of seems to vote for you
NICE, LIKIN IT

Ya through faggot, honestly we've all had it
needing to cheat to win, to even beat a has been
OK

Or a never was, so when I aim to bust
You just aim ya buddies to vote and such
GOOD, PERSONAL

Dude, I hate you, Kid aint mean shit to me
I mean Tugs love guns... and I'm talkin literally
NICE, NICE

Beat Feebs? Not really, kid got rode to win
Bust ya grill... just like the one ya make ya living in
GOOD

No doubt theodore won this. your verse wasnt bad tho biggunz, just his was very good.

my vote= theodore

hit me up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161682

^Ummm get Off Theo's Dick.

Theo did not have a good verse and it was not very good. He just did what he had to do to win because he knew that whatever he put out, he was going to beat Guns. Theo, you came weak, lol. But like i said, you did what it took to win.

Better Punches and Personals,..and no toilet Lines...

V/Theo

read the rules. you're blacklisted from voting.

yo vote for mediawhore vs. Violent Type i would appreciate it thanks

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Originally Posted by Genocide

read the rules. you're blacklisted from voting.

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I could Care Less. It's obvious who won. Anyway, why are you so worried about it.

i'm not worried about it. it's a rule. you can't vote... just like i can't vote.

lol, thats all I got to say....................................

Gunz - You were trying to play with some concepts and be creative. That's great and all, but battles are about punches. Your stuff did not flow, felt awkward, and just wasn't hitting. I think it's cause the setups had nothing to do with the 2nd part of the bar. Like that bathroom stall thing.. how does that relate to theo upshaw? Your verse was just awkward man

Theo - Your verse was very short and I've seen most of the shit you wrote before. However, played is better than bad. You managed in very short lines to throw punches at him. If you'd made your shit more complex it'd have been much better, but easily enough. The AIM thing hit him, the has been, and opener were ideas i've seen before, but they're all decent.

Vote - Theo