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Keep It Straight
I already know this game won’t accept me
But did you really expect me to respect thief’s?
I'm set to prove that originality is sexy
This attitude is the only thing that kept me
Blood Hungry for the fleshy fresh meat
So step up and try your luck
And watch as I mesh beats w/ text sheets
Let correct speech protect you parakeets
From the demons inside my head that never sleep
I never seek out to defeat the meek crowd
I’d rather spend my time watching each cloud
Weep down upon our dusty earth
Purifying the rusty dirt, for what its worth
I never relyed on tears to define the hurt
Cuz the 1st cry of fear was the sign of birth
The 21tst times are cursed but my mind is worse
I mean I see these problems…
… but I’d rather rhyme a verse
Then attempt to solve them…
Backing down from the devils gate your fate is crooked…
A dance with Dante’s minions is quit to get your life took’en
Even when your shoe fits those foot-prints in the sand
…Sirus doesn’t walk with you…. he buries you man
Fuck following the footprints of chump-change in Reeboks
If you want to be the king of the jungle…
…. swing from the tree-tops
Sing the tongue of the Ewocks, & Detox your inner beat box
Long enough to sweet talk V. Fox…
…into picking the pearly gates key-lock
Side by side we walk, following the street signs of the universe
My ferocity summons a curse… scheming a thunderous verse
While two demons on my shoulders keep for-telling my fate
The guardian angle lays innate cuz I just cant keep straight
It’s the same shit were dealing with every year
Some call it racism but I think it’s jealous fear
Pac was always the inner cities inner ear
...But I still wonder if heaven is near
I’m revving the engine making the gears spin…
Shedding these tears throughout these years
Nothings ever been clear cuz I only hear sin…
While two demons on my shoulders keep for-telling my fate
The guardian angle lays innate cuz I just cant keep straight
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One word can describe your whole verse: Amazing This was so dope and so real to me.. I'm at a loss for words. Great drop, 10/10.. I can't give any advice.. because there is none.......just, wow. *leaves thread in a different state of mind*
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Nice verse man word on that ......but TNL sucks....lol
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Thx for replys..
Since when did you tag effect your verse?
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up again.. dont sleep on this people
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Very dope Sirus. I agree with Geno, on every aspect.
Keep the mic's comin' man, i like peepin' it.
check out: Young Heads
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I will, thx for the reply.
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man that was dope...word to genocide....just wow.....that was amazin man i hope you keep em comin so i can keep readin that shit...damn man
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K-r-u-n-k...................
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actually genocide got it right 10/10 flawless verse
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Yo everybody else mainly said what i wanted too...so i rate it 10/10 great vocab and hot rhymes good flow and good structure...keep it comin
Check out my post-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159737
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Thnx Youngsta ans WP
I will read it.
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^..... common people, dont sleep, post links to your battles
and i will look at them. scouts honor.
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this verse was good, i don't think it was a 10/10 but it was nice. the flow was prolly the best thing about it. but at times it was forced, and the word use was just so scattered that the meaning could barely be decyphered. it was fun read, but things like imagery and consistency to the topic may have helped. but i got the message dog. this was good. props.
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this was hella active... and should have been in hof.. haha
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this was a good drop, flow and multis were amazin...theres nothin really bad to say about this..structure was good, was feelin the emotion in this..Im tired n lazy to do a longer explanation, but im sure you know where im goin with this... Nice peice, keep droppin stuff like this, i enjoyed it
