word art

And for these weak gamers/and fisher price gat sprayers…..
You only go main stream on media players…
With the lyrical garbage I’ll rob your samples/
Do a peace on horrible emcees and you them as examples.
Wanna joust at the mouth take the glock route/
We can spit box and get don king to promote the boute/
Where im 2 pac it will take several rounds to knock me out.
Most fans that here you press eject/like u had defects/
I was sent/to mureder hurds of herbs with words/
Cause fed x can detect anthrax/but we have the same effect.
Whatever you dispute/I show proof/ my lawsuits….
Are 3 peace attire/so lyrics I aplicate…
Will have me hired.on a budget forcing you to retire.
Lyrically I donate enough dimes/
That my freestyles is a tax write off that can afford my own clothing line.
Leave your text torn/when im enraged and scorn/
Your literary body will be dead weight like a still born.
Im heavyweight like sumo wrestlers on anjestors and its fate/
That my cd is a heavy~wait like the pressure for a release date.
Im renoun with nouns and profound with pronouns/
Leaven rappers shell shocked like tazer rounds.
Murder in an instance/im intese/ with a pretence/
my shots leave you laid~on the~ side like a mistress.
You aint a baller/ you white collar/
The vets I roll with hold medals of honor.
Fuck you cats/nobody is my equal on battle raps/
It will take a copying machine or fax for me to find my match.
So u ingrates is all fake/challeng you only raise the stakes/
Befoe a vampire wakes-your cd’s li8ke second debates/
Only sound good with a rebate.My spits is that shit/
feeling like im night of the living dead the ways my brains bit.

u be comin wit some good shit word i like what you be doin...go peep out my battles in the elite shit an vote

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By The Root 9 29 1 Hour Ago
by WORD~PERFECT

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159932

uppin

nigga be droppin every day. nice, i like it like always.

Thanks I Hope This Get Received Well

i think you got the wrong messege on my last reply, i wasnt tryin to say you suck, cuase you do got potential..
the structure you used with this made it way easier to read..seemed like you took a lil more time with it which is good..
word play could use some work
im still wishin i could see you come with some topical shit not this bragadocious stuff, i dont think these type of pieces really show your abilities to well...
no hate but your punches came a lil weaker than you say in your rhymes lol...its coo though
see thats what i wanted to say, dont go on and on in your pieces about how dope you are and shit like that..come with some content and ridiculous flow that shows you are, then you dont even need to say your the shit and better than everyone..they will already know..feel me? thats what im gettin at...you got skills and like myself need to find your nitch, its wierd cuase your on the same type of shit i used to be on...its like im lookin in the mirror, well from like a two year ago standpoint...anyways hit me up man i think we can help eachother out...

pz

aight i feel you but punches do take creativity bragadocious i how i pracvtice punches

agreed punches do take a certain type of creativity..i just felt they werent as strong in this..pushin you to up your antics son..

aight agreed i will go twice as hare then

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uppin

uppin

LMAO.....yo that shit was funny ^^^^


anyways.....yo this shit was ill like your usual drops. You came hard wit your punchs....flow was aiight.....but its your witty-ness that holds you strong you feel me. All in all a mos def tiight drop...keep doin yo thang and reppin the BK son, 100

no doubt twin

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I liked the way it flowed and shit man ... aint got to much to work on .... really feeling the creativity on those punches...... stay up ... peace

one love va twin

the master of punchlines is back with another one...man what can i say that i havent before....the structure was ill the wordplay ill the punches got me laughing...you always elevating with every new post and i like that...keep spitting that fire holmes and get at me for that collab...one duke

new one drops tonight

shit was nice, i especially liked the end, ur line about the rebate was tight. good overall, but i would have liked it if the grammar was better, u kno, less typos, makes it easier to flow when i'm readin it, but be easy, that's a minor mistake. keep it up man

ok I liked this one.you sure do have a word of art.needs a little improvement on vocabulary.but keep it up man.that was good and I think you can do better.
peace.

hey why don't you come up with another one? I know you know that it feels good to be talked about.

i know i haven't done the feeback thing in a while but here goes

i dunno word
i've seen better from ya
ya shit usually be multi-packed or am i confusing you with johnny

anyway decent drop, structure kinda confused me tho