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House Rules
1. No Dick ridin
2. No Crew/Hate Votes
10 Lines Max, 5 Lines Min
Check-In ASAP
Verse Due 2 hours after you check in
You Drop First
Good Luck
Blind drop..aint none of dat feeding shit..due in 2 hours....who eva drops..drops..before 4:30
aigh fine
Did this pretty fast
Yo i dont need a aresnal of weapons to kill this guy~
All i need is my toxic spit and ill make him fry~
Im like Pottassium Chloride ill make him die~
Ill make you split, sry..your 2 sizes small of a chinese dick~
Quit trying to be what your not...... you want beaf?~
Come to oak-town ill have you flat on your back in dis-belief~
Ill Split ya wig,even shoot you up like ya jay-z sig~
Fig-ure it out your not sick~
You still got a chance to join the Queer-Eye-Click~
Definition:
Pottassium Chloride: Used in Lethal Injections
Just incase you didnt know what it was.
Hurry up and drop aresnal jesus. blind spit Just let it rip!!!!!!!
Dude trying to "SEEK-HOPE" Mixtoxins DOPE dats like cold "Winters" and Fat people havin "HEAT-STROKES"(mixToxins-dope)
Dis dude not gettin CLOSE Arsenal got dis shit Wrapped so we should change dis thread to U-GOTTA-BE-KIDDIN-POST/1BAR
u callin out you shouldnt even SPOKE-NOW "Toxins DOPE HOW?"U make shit sound so Delicate Especially when u from "OAK-TOWN"
Testin "Ars" GREATNESS...cause like Psycologist answers ill leave u wit no BASIS And leave Blood in ya Flow and watch Toxins Literally be WASTED/2BAR
FUCK-YA-NAME-YO U watchin YA-FAME-GROW ya life is in more jeapordy den continu-es GAME-SHOWS(K.O)
explanations
bar1..like Toxin is suppose to be sikining,ill,dope..means ill wordplay,,,look at his bar...self Explanitory
bar2...he's suppose to be Toxins his name sounds so...nasty like...OakTown sounds pussy...also saying...dat ill put blood in him...adding to his Toxins...ill leave him wasted
bar3...selfExplanitory
First off you went over Line limit. Thats a DQ
[QUOTE=MiXed ToXins]House Rules
10 Lines Max, 5 Lines Min
10 Lines i see 11. DQ
10 Lines Max, 5 Lines Min
ha...10 lines..1 short..short is not a line...votes up..he got scared when he read my verse lmfoa
[QUOTE=(*~Arsenal~*)]Dude trying to "SEEK-HOPE" Mixtoxins DOPE dats like cold "Winters" and Fat people havin "HEAT-STROKES"(mixToxins-dope)
Dis dude not gettin CLOSE Arsenal got dis shit Wrapped so we should change dis thread to U-GOTTA-BE-KIDDIN-POST/1BAR
u callin out you shouldnt even SPOKE-NOW "Toxins DOPE HOW?"U make shit sound so Delicate Especially when u from "OAK-TOWN"
Testin "Ars" GREATNESS...cause like Psycologist answers ill leave u wit no BASIS And leave Blood in ya Flow and watch Toxins Literally be WASTED/2BAR
FUCK-YA-NAME-YO U watchin YA-FAME-GROW ya life is in more jeapordy den continu-es GAME-SHOWS(K.O)
i see 11 lines 10 lines Max
Just followin the rules kid
lmfao...Votes up..i didnt waste no spit for nuffin..
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WASTED/2BAR
^^ ur countin those....those are connected to da line..before dat...2 lines equal 1 bar.....i got 10 lines ExactlyQuote:
den continu-es GAME-SHOWS(K.O)
look..i accidently spaced it to far...so if i deleted it back up..it would..still be 10 lines shut da fuck up...Votes upQuote:
BASIS And leave Blood in ya Flow and watch Toxins Literally be WASTED/2BAR
thats dq dude even if you said that i could be like
blahlahlalhlahlaha~ 1
blahlalhlahlahlhal ~ 2
bkahakhahkahk~3
blahjahjahjajh~4
bhahahjmajhajhj
hasdhfshdfhds~5
blahkahjajh~6
bajhjahjahjahjajhj
ajdfjasdjfajsdf~7
bhahahahhahah
fajdfjsdjfsjdfd~8
BHAHHhaahlahlal~9
bahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
bhabhahbahbhabhabhha~10
and that would still = 10.. yeah... thats a DQ from my rules
first of all he does not get DQ'd so stop bitchin and go on wit the battle.
Originally posted by:ToXins
Yo i dont need a aresnal of weapons to kill this guy~
All i need is my toxic spit and ill make him fry~
Im like Pottassium Chloride ill make him die~
Ill make you split, sry..your 2 sizes small of a chinese dick~
Quit trying to be what your not...... you want beaf?~
Come to oak-town ill have you flat on your back in dis-belief~
Ill Split ya wig,even shoot you up like ya jay-z sig~
Fig-ure it out your not sick~
You still got a chance to join the Queer-Eye-Click~
I ALREADY READ BOTH VERSES ALL I CAN SAY IS THIS WAS A ONE SIDED
BATTLE TOXINS YOU GOT MURKED AND THAT'S THE FINAL ANSWER YOU
JUST GOTTA COME WIT WAY MORE PUNCHES AND BETTER EVERYTHING ELSE
DAWG STEP IT UP.
Originally posted by:Ars
Dude trying to "SEEK-HOPE" Mixtoxins DOPE dats like cold "Winters" and Fat people havin "HEAT-STROKES"(mixToxins-dope)
Dis dude not gettin CLOSE Arsenal got dis shit Wrapped so we should change dis thread to U-GOTTA-BE-KIDDIN-POST/1BAR
u callin out you shouldnt even SPOKE-NOW "Toxins DOPE HOW?"U make shit sound so Delicate Especially when u from "OAK-TOWN"
Testin "Ars" GREATNESS...cause like Psycologist answers ill leave u wit no BASIS And leave Blood in ya Flow and watch Toxins Literally be WASTED/2BAR
FUCK-YA-NAME-YO U watchin YA-FAME-GROW ya life is in more jeapordy den continu-es GAME-SHOWS(K.O)
YOU HAD AN OVERALL NICE VERSE PUNCHES WERE LANDED YOU HAD MULTIS
EVERYTHING WAS NICE EXCEPT FOR YA STRUCTURE YOU GOT TO BE CAREFULL CAUSE SOME KATS VOTE ON STRUCTURE IF THEY THINK YA STRUCTURE IS FUCKED THEY'LL VOTE AGAINST YOU BUT HEY MAKE IT NICER.
V/Ars
for overall platinum plus verse over toxins
peace hit the links back to show some feed back but you kat's can't vote yet
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Originally Posted by (*~Arsenal~*)
plus he said blind drop.
I bet that shit was all pre-written
lmfao..no i keyed it right here..stop bitchin damn..shit..u cry to much...1-0 me..proceed
1st uppin...votes up mang...ere body need to vote...
Mixed Toxins
Yo i dont need a aresnal of weapons to kill this guy~
All i need is my toxic spit and ill make him fry~
Im like Pottassium Chloride ill make him die~
Ill make you split, sry..your 2 sizes small of a chinese dick~
Quit trying to be what your not...... you want beaf?~
Come to oak-town ill have you flat on your back in dis-belief~
Ill Split ya wig,even shoot you up like ya jay-z sig~
Fig-ure it out your not sick~
You still got a chance to join the Queer-Eye-Click~
Im not going to break down each line because that would do your verse injustice. But this is very basic. Alot of elevation needed as far as good concepts, you need more creative punchlines, some of your lines were stretched and hard to follow. Just check out the people with more experience look at their battles, youll see what I mean, I saw like one or 2 personal dissage attempts...ok. But thats not always enough.
Arsenal
Dude trying to "SEEK-HOPE" Mixtoxins DOPE dats like cold "Winters" and Fat people havin "HEAT-STROKES"(mixToxins-dope)
Dis dude not gettin CLOSE Arsenal got dis shit Wrapped so we should change dis thread to U-GOTTA-BE-KIDDIN-POST/1BAR
u callin out you shouldnt even SPOKE-NOW "Toxins DOPE HOW?"U make shit sound so Delicate Especially when u from "OAK-TOWN"
Testin "Ars" GREATNESS...cause like Psycologist answers ill leave u wit no BASIS And leave Blood in ya Flow and watch Toxins Literally be WASTED/2BAR
FUCK-YA-NAME-YO U watchin YA-FAME-GROW ya life is in more jeapordy den continu-es GAME-SHOWS(K.O)
Ok I could pretty much repeat the above for this verse. Looks like you have a better concept of battling though. Your punches were better, be careful when making a bunch of lines with multis together, for instance (heat strokes, deep throat, seek hope) becuz they sound and flow good, but if they don't make sense or dont relate to the battle people aren't gonna feel em. Your lines are stretched out as well. And all the caps on certain words....you'll learn as time goes by that if you really have a good verse, you won't have to "dress your text up" or make it look pretty. people will judge it by the content.
Well anyways V/Arsenal for the overall better verse
wtf Upp dis bitch..dis da last time im uppin dis damn battle
good battle.............. ars held it down. soldier style..
if i could vote it would go to ars... good battle toxins respect