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Woah, haven't posten anything for a while, but here's some new shit for all y'all fiends...
26 beat update...!
Beats worth listening to of the 26...
Time After Time (Must Listen!)
Nino Brown (Must Listen!)
Gangster Theme Music (Must Listen!)
Take Me Back (Must Listen!)
Jaz's Groove
Jaz's Pimp Slap
Raindrops
For All Y'all
Soul Purpose
The link is in my sig...
Holla...!
Led...from UF aint it?
No this is Jazwon, apparantly some asshole was using my name... :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by Key Rogue
gee... i could never figure out that was you jaz
Woah, sdizzle...!
Long time no see dog...!
Hows it been...?
ok i guess
my beats dont suck anymore
Lmao...!Quote:
Originally Posted by sdizzle
Thats good... :thumbup:
time after time, the bass is tooooooo loud, mix it or turn it down, just dont fit with this, you need a groovey bass line to fit the sample. the bongos are a nice effect, but it dont really sound good with it, somethin about it nice cut tho, and this defintiely a good find
ganster theme....bass is too loud, i think you should soften the kick, its too much of an attack feeling instead of a mellow "i gotta express somethin" emotion that the piano chop gives. nice chop tho,
nino brown - this is a really nice chop, nice looped jaunt, gets a little repetitious, and i think you should follow that bass line instead of addin that BD resonant kick, it would make the track seem to flow better and have more of the original feel to the track...
stay up, i only replied on a couple but keep knockin
return it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158927
'take me back' was the best track IMO. most of them were good also, that was just my favorite.
good to see a producer with some knowledge on jazz and able to incorperate that into the beats.
Thanks for all the feedback guys...:thumbup:
Uppin...
good shit...
not feeling any of these at all actually
you need to go back to the basics and also learn to mix like you arent retarded
Time After Time - Sounds like it was a real nice sample...It's alright tho...ya noe like...decent. But I feel that u could of probably done more with the sample...the congas are cool on it...but I think u abuse it a lilll' too much...Decent beat tho, keep at it man.
Lost My Mind - Truth...go back to work on this one or scrap it. The original melody I ain't feelin'...and the change-up is even worse. The melody is annoyin'...and actually hurts my ears. No offence man, go back to work on this.
So Sexy - This is better than the first two I heard...drum pattern is workin' nice so far...but I guess that it's just this loop...nice sample, good drum pattern, this one is better than the rest. But that waterfall, static, background noise, whatever it is...is cool, i like it. Good work.
Overall, focus more on quality and not quantity. 26 decent to bad beats don't compare to 4 bangers.
Hey dog, I told you I can't mix...!Quote:
Originally Posted by Emerge
Unless you teach me how, then please don't complain about it... :cussing:
But foreals, wow, I can't believe I got a sticky...!
I'm so proud... :hump:
Avalon didn't even listen obviously.
I was about to unstick this but I felt bad, don't kid yourself, this is pretty wack.
Oh I listened... I listened when he dropped them actually... kid has alot of potential... maybe you just don't see it... and Merge... I don't feel to have Hot Fiyahh... it has to be the "dopest" beat on the planet... that doesn't equal hot fiyahh to me all the time... sometimes it's elevation... sometimes it's just plain determination... Everybody needs their time in the sun... Never unstick something I've stuck up...
Jaz... work on it...
I didn't unstick something you stuck.
And to me dope beats, are dope beats regardless of who is doing it.
I didn't know someone would want to buy a beat just because the producer has gotten better. He has a long way to go and sticking his beats doesn't help he will end up getting complacent.
if that's what you believe... then that's what it is... I don't believe that... but I'm not going to clog up this thread with this... hit me on aim or something...
somethin bugged me about nino brown an the gangster's theme one
jus...couldnt get into em, didnt have that hot little sound to em..
top one was too fast for me to even think of rappin over lol.
listened to the pianist
an the 2 ones on top...
dont take this the wrong way, but from my point of view, alot of your tracks sound seriously, ...jaz-e...
which is kool an all...
but i mean cant nobody rap over em
u got a little type of music u stick to, an it defines your character, helps u stick out
but id like to see you do some straight hiphop pieces you know,
strings + piano + bass + drums
try somethin at...85bpm...see what pops up, you got some good shit goin now, for people who are into it, but i think youd get alot more posative feed if u didnt stick to the same category so often, u gotta hit everyone u know.
yea that sounds like a sell out, comprimise who u are jus to make people happy, but you can do a hiphop with jazz elements, jus..more hiphop than jazz, feel me?
this was some very interesting work, an its nice to see people go left field
but come back center field for a sec.
feel this was a hate message
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/djaycaspermusic.htm
open to criticism 24/7
djaycasperwbm@aol.com
wow, this sounds good. nice quality.. i listened to some of your beats, it has that jazzy feel to it. good job.