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10 lines
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due 1 hour after both check in
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a poll on it ***********************************
this is my check in ******************************
twix in...........................................
Size does matter, juss look at his large sig.
But the size of his dick,
Makes vianna sausages look big.
With his av, flashing jack black, he's fat.
People can't say the same for you
When you rap....
You'll have a heart attack, trying to keep up.
Your all soft around the core
Like gay people who seem tough.
I'm gonna sum this up within the time limit.
You couldn't sum up anything.
With your dome and the tiny mind in it.
Your rhymes spread, I meant it didn't push.
Your all bout talk and dumb actions,
Like President Bush.
dope topical head... dude leave things like thinking up to me
...severing your head with glee
because its about time your whackness was cut down a degree
pure performance? you must be jokin shit stands for Pure Penetration
and i aint talking bout pussy... more like anal compensation
nice little poem in your sig, got girl problemes... on the inside
...you should commit suicied
your dumb bitch is fucking me now... password: denied
PB? i left that crew weeks ago still on the roster, they left me on
just to make up for your whackness... while im gone
so next time try to think up some mediocre rhymes
so i dont have to smoke yer lame ass se7en times
uppin1.................................... leave links
god dammit.... even when i vote.........................
Fuck that ....
easy win for twinx he had better punches ..and flow i didnt like how short your lines where se7en and your punches really where not that good try to make the lines alot longer ...but twinx had an aight verse ..so he takes it.
V/Twinx
dis battle was iight both of u need 2 elevate yourselves and battle me
My vote goes to Twixin for having a way better verse, his flow was good, and his choice of words were way better, punches better
vote: twixin, return the favore
look in sig....
F.Y.I YO jerz please lol elevate you cant keep talking shit when all you spit is shit (no hate)
This was actually a fairly close battle, you're a lot better at topicals, no offense Twixn.. you didn't throw many punches or personals. The only reason you beat him was because it was cleaner and you used better vocabulary.. both of your verses lacked real punches. Anyway, Twixn takes this in my opinion.
Vote-Twixn for the reasons stated above.
Return the favor and hit up my topical against predkiller.. word.
Size does matter, juss look at his large sig.
But the size of his dick,
Makes vianna sausages look big.
WEAK OPENER
With his av, flashing jack black, he's fat.
People can't say the same for you
When you rap....
GOOD IDEA..BAD WORDING
You'll have a heart attack, trying to keep up.
Your all soft around the core
Like gay people who seem tough.
WEAK CONCEPT...WACK N STRETCHED
I'm gonna sum this up within the time limit.
You couldn't sum up anything.
With your dome and the tiny mind in it.
STRETCHED N WEAK BAR...NEED FORMAT HELP
Your rhymes spread, I meant it didn't push.
Your all bout talk and dumb actions,
Like President Bush.
WEAK CONCEPT AGAIN..STRETCH..NEED TO WORK ON UR FORMAT AND RHYMES SCHEME...U NEED TO COUND SYLLABLES TOO
dope topical head... dude leave things like thinking up to me
...severing your head with glee
because its about time your whackness was cut down a degree
TOOOOOOOO LLLOOOOOOOONNNGGG WAY TOO STRETCHEDON BOTH LINES AND WEAK OPENER
pure performance? you must be jokin shit stands for Pure Penetration
and i aint talking bout pussy... more like anal compensation
DAMN...OK BAR
nice little poem in your sig, got girl problemes... on the inside
...you should commit suicied
your dumb bitch is fucking me now... password: denied
MAN..WHAT DA FUCK R U ON ABOUT???BULLSHIT
PB? i left that crew weeks ago still on the roster, they left me on
just to make up for your whackness... while im gone
FUCKIN WACK...STOP IT PLEESE...ALL FILLER BULLSHIT TALK
so next time try to think up some mediocre rhymes
so i dont have to smoke yer lame ass se7en times
WEAK FILLER 1ST LINE AND FUCKIN SHITTY PERSONAL ON 2ND LINE
I GOTTA VOTE 4 WHO CAME LESS WACK.....TWIXN
RETURN THE FAVOR AND HIT UP MY BATTLES IN MY SIG...WORD
uppin3.... favours will be returned in 20 mins... gotta shower.... leave links
The link is in my sig.
Size does matter, juss look at his large sig.
But the size of his dick,
Makes vianna sausages look big.
With his av, flashing jack black, he's fat.
People can't say the same for you
When you rap....
You'll have a heart attack, trying to keep up.
Your all soft around the core
Like gay people who seem tough.
I'm gonna sum this up within the time limit.
You couldn't sum up anything.
With your dome and the tiny mind in it.
Your rhymes spread, I meant it didn't push.
Your all bout talk and dumb actions,
Like President Bush.
Se7en's verse: It was easy to read and flowed a little. But did see good enough
punches or personals except about his sig.
dope topical head... dude leave things like thinking up to me
...severing your head with glee
because its about time your whackness was cut down a degree
pure performance? you must be jokin shit stands for Pure Penetration
and i aint talking bout pussy... more like anal compensation
nice little poem in your sig, got girl problemes... on the inside
...you should commit suicied
your dumb bitch is fucking me now... password: denied
PB? i left that crew weeks ago still on the roster, they left me on
just to make up for your whackness... while im gone
so next time try to think up some mediocre rhymes
so i dont have to smoke yer lame ass se7en times
Twixn's verse: He skated with the battle. I liked his personals and punches. Flow was'nt to shabby but in my opinion he pulled it off.
Vote: Twixn
up for the win.... thanks for the honest votes.... linkzies
seven-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were aight
twix-shaky flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were pretty weak.
Overall-I think seven threw harder punches and kept the flow more consistent. work on flow and creatvity in punches twix.
vote-seven
hit my battle up with double ill
thanx
ok..... upping............................... last one
7- Lines were alright, but i wasnt feeling
alot of the punches you tried to throw.
Almost all the lines had punches but almost
all the lines were played disses about dick size
or faggots. I would vote for creative lines over
petty insults.
Flow was there and i like the structure when
the line works.
Twixn-Your opener had content but no effect.
All of what your talking about makes sence
but has no impact. Next bar was best in the
entire battle for flow and punch. Its a good bar
but not that good.
I've seen better verses from Twixn and 7,
Se7eN: Shorter verse, a change from the usual stories we gotta read on rb. Would have been great if you'd have been able to throw some more strength into it, but while I read it, it felt a tame effort. Your personals were "swing-and-miss", so much so they cost you points IMO...left yourself wide open here
Twixn...: Good opener, set the scene from the beginning. Apart from this bar - nice little poem in your sig, got girl problemes... on the inside//...you should commit suicied, your dumb bitch is fucking me now... password: denied// - and your closer, the rest of the verse seemed like a filler. Regardless, you engaged Se7eN more than he did you, and that's what wins battles
VOTE: Twixn...
Check sig...return favour (will poll once I get 100+ posts)
Se7eN - Punches were just played as fuck.
Opener was the worst shit i've ever seen...
None of your punches connected hardly.....
None of them made an effect in this battle.
You had personals, but they were weak.....
Overall.. you've feel off...... Elevate, again.
Twixn - You did blah.. but didn't need much..
You had a few punches that made me laugh..
Some of the lines were fillers, but eh............
I'm saying you got my vote due to the punches.
Concidering you actually had them... so blah...
V/Twixn.