10 lines
3-0 KO
first to 5
nunathat bullshit
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10 lines
3-0 KO
first to 5
nunathat bullshit
ok homes, includin the vote shit.. imma spit soon
I'm typin' to this faggot, let me set the Record straight,
You were born to lose dawg, you shouldn't mess with fate.
I'm here to break Record's, but I bet this bitch skips,
prolly out chasin' pussy, but never gets'em a lick.
It's okay puppy, I ain't gonna hurt you,
I'm just gonna suffocate you, till your lips turn purple.
you better stay alert too, its easy to get physical,
and after the deeds done, its easier to get rid of you,
I just sit back laughin', your spits a tragic piece,
remember, if you don't make it rappin', they need Catholic priests.
Jizza
to get jizzed on, means to get facialized and this cats named jizza
bitch couldnt come hard in 1 slice, so ill slice him like pizza
i shoulda called out improved dudes, cause bitch is like wack newbz
and when girls told him to get bigger balls...........
.............this stupid cat got fake boobs
and now that hes introduced imma pick ur punches, like apples on a tree
and wen i set battles up with him, it always says "kill this wannabee mc"
im just no weight under my name, but imma prove it mistaken
cause if im rb legend, then u must be hall of shame then
ur flow fuked up from the start, u need help for ur ability of lackness
cuase if pratice makes perfect........
........ u proved it wrong cause of ur wackness
look, im not even gonna break it down....record threw harder punches, had better rhymes flow and structure, so he took this one no doubt.
v/record fer shizzle
we need votes
jizzas verse simply came stronger as far as rhyme scheme goes. an example of records poor rhyming would be his first bar. jizza and pizza doesnt work. jizzas verse is also neater looking, and has better flow. jizza also doesnt stretch the personals too far like record did. for these reasons i pick jizza.
vote - jizza
p.s. please hit the battle in my sig, thanks
pretty shit vote if ya think about it... u did not mention the punches just structure.. wack vote.. no bitchin but yeh read it, doesnt mention punches n metas.
stop ya bitchin' bitch, its fair.
suk a dik u noe it aint.. no comments about punches aint fair,, and yes its a vote so shut the fuk up... uppin
i think record is gay, and it has 1 testicle. i know, im his sister.
^^ wtf my sis has a nik on this site.. wack shit,, uppin 2 for this battle
jizza-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, aight punches but nuthin too hard
record-shaky flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were aight but too simplistic
Overall-i think jizza came more consistent, had a better flow, lil more creative. Record ya shit was good throwin buncha disses but the disses were too simple n not hard hittin.
vote-jizza
go vote on one my battles
n i'll come back and poll, thanx.
you forgot to poll vote
nah i didn't............................^^
read bottom of my post
Quote:
Originally Posted by The Godfather
You need to learn how to judge rap battles.. word motherfuckin' word..
Just had to say that.. anyway, I'm not even gonna break this down. Jizza's verse was doper, threw harder punches, better multis, and flowed better.. period. Jizza and pizza don't rhyme by the way Record.
Vote-Jizza for damn obvious reasons.
Return the favor yo... links in sig. Preferrably against Dr. O.. word.
upping for honest votes
we need votes
last up.. again i say, honest votes.. leave mu fukin links..
uppin last mu fukin time.. leave links n vote honestly..
last up.. leave links,, honest votes.. i will return,,
jizza: Started off very strong, with some good personal punches and flow. You fell off with the next few bars, lost your intensity even, but I liked your closer, even if it was a general punch! Pretty good effort.
Record: Your verse sounded really...immature. Your punches were more confusing than amusing. Try to word your punches differently, and make them more intimidating, 'cause at the end of it all it sounded childish.
VOTE: jizza
Will poll when I get the post numbers required...
^^ oh shit sorry bout freepostin mods, my comp was runnin slow n i thought it neva posted nything...
I'm typin' to this faggot, let me set the Record straight,
You were born to lose dawg, you shouldn't mess with fate.
-decent at best
I'm here to break Record's, but I bet this bitch skips,
prolly out chasin' pussy, but never gets'em a lick.
no
It's okay puppy, I ain't gonna hurt you,
I'm just gonna suffocate you, till your lips turn purple.
-threat...filler
you better stay alert too, its easy to get physical,
and after the deeds done, its easier to get rid of you,
-filler
I just sit back laughin', your spits a tragic piece,
remember, if you don't make it rappin', they need Catholic priests.
decent
to get jizzed on, means to get facialized and this cats named jizza
bitch couldnt come hard in 1 slice, so ill slice him like pizza
-didnt rhyme, bad start
i shoulda called out improved dudes, cause bitch is like wack newbz
and when girls told him to get bigger balls...........
.............this stupid cat got fake boobs
-no
and now that hes introduced imma pick ur punches, like apples on a tree
and wen i set battles up with him, it always says "kill this wannabee mc"
-no
im just no weight under my name, but imma prove it mistaken
cause if im rb legend, then u must be hall of shame then
-no
ur flow fuked up from the start, u need help for ur ability of lackness
cuase if pratice makes perfect........
........ u proved it wrong cause of ur wackness
-decent
This was a weak battle, both need to work on witty punches, having personals, wordplay, etc. but my vote goes to jizza for havin 2 decent bars to records 1, all the rest of ur lines were weak.1
uppin for votes
why the fuck can't we get any more votes
Yo this was a shitty battle but i think that record had better punches and rhymes he's structure may have been fucked up but he made up for it wit some good punches...jizza keep elevatin...i vote for record
vote-record
return da favor dogg on one of my battles
I thought the whole point to rapping was to rhyme........................Thats all I have to say about this bull shit.
if i could vote i would vote just like cutastraphe... jizza had better flow not hard punchs but better flow...yup record flow is off ... rhymes didnt go together sometimes.. he had him but the flow wasnt there... but if i could vote it would be jizza
i'd vote for jizza on this one. he just broke down on records name a lot harder, whereas records attacks just didn't hit as hard (i.e..jizza doesnt rhyme with pizza) i think both did a good job of makin their shit flow together...just generally...jizza did a better job of attacking.
v-jizza