10-20 lines
none of that bullshit
due by tom. noon
pyro goes first
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10-20 lines
none of that bullshit
due by tom. noon
pyro goes first
I may be a newb but i'm way above ya weight class
buckin at me a mistake u better go ahead and escape fast
cause when i see ya pretty ass i won't hasitate ta blast
got some bullets 4 ya ass that'll make u levitate in a flash
it aint a joke motherfucka i send u to ya wake fast
dis aint a battle right here its a warning. yeah da last
u lucky cause back in the day i just up and merked ya ab
see i used ta be a gangster but now i'm the devil in the fuckin flesh
da wrong 1 to conest i dont aim 4 nothing that befall below ya neck
yeah i know it some vital shit i could hit thats in ya chest
but all that shit i'll cease if i leave ya brains a fucking mess
EaZy
ohh pyromaniac is talking crap
1,2,3 punches and ama make you step back
pyro the first thing you should light
is that weak ass rap you tryin to write
don't want me to light a match under my ass
cuz when i pass gas ima burn yo green grass
your right, you are above my weight class
couple of hundred L-b's you betta get on that slim fast
it's like a street race whoops look who past
lookin in my mirror... damn i don't see you no mor'
yo girl dawg she's a tran trying to hide it from you that she really a man
ain't that a bitch damn
i guess you guys like to explore
over there in baltimore
oh and tell your mom to give my change back
cuz hundreds and fiftys is all i had
pullin up in my merc-b* and she didn't look bad
talkin bout the car man don't get overexited
also here's a tip when she sucks dick tell her not to bite it
*mercedes-benz
uppin for votes and feedback
people i know you can do that
pyromaniac came with some decent stuff but that ending punch line by abi did it for me
*talkin bout the car man don't get overexited
also here's a tip when she sucks dick tell her not to bite it*
pyromaniac just seemed like he was tryin harder to get the words to rhyme rather than make em hit hard.
Abi built up to that end thats why it got me, simple as that
"no hate just fate"
I cant vote yet cuz i dont got a 100 votes but if i could vote i'd vote Abi, because overall i think his rhymes were better, no diss on Pyro but i liked Abi's write better, i think Pyro can do better, hope ta see ya'll flow more in the future peace...
extremely weak battle ..
Pyro - Nice rhyme scheme, you lacked every other category though. Work on nameplay/personals.
Abi - You also need to improve on multis, punchlines, and overall text battling. Your structure was scattered, unorganized bars.. wasn't a pretty sight.
My advice: Keep battling and elevate.
v - Pyromaniac
Fairly one sided. Peace.
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uppin for votes people plese vote goddamn its it that hard
I vote Abi. Pyromaniac had no personal punches PERIOD. That's reason enough my vote would go to Abi.. but I don't have 100 posts yet so I cant vote. Pyro nice multi's but it just didn't do it for me. Abi had some decent personal punches..
"pyro the first thing you should light
is that weak ass rap you tryin to write"
"your right, you are above my weight class
couple of hundred L-b's you betta get on that slim fast"
This battle was alright, here's some standout lines.
Pyromaniac:
cause when i see ya pretty ass i won't hasitate ta blast
got some bullets 4 ya ass that'll make u levitate in a flash
Abi:
your right, you are above my weight class
couple of hundred L-b's you betta get on that slim fast
vote:Abi
Punches were better and flow
uppin for votes... come on people vote because this has been going on for like a whole like 4 or 5 days come on i want this to get closed so vote please
uppin again............................................. .........
Yeah, I agree with those who said Abi had better punches/disses. Although Pyro's verse was definitely cleaner and flowed better.. it lacked creativity. I like Abi's line about lighting his verse on fire... good personal... which is something pyro's verse lacked.
Vote-Abi for better punches.
WEAK SHIT....
pyro-had ok structure but the punches were horrible and he had no creativity.
abi-choppy flow, not very good punches but more disses, lil more consistent verse and more creative.
vote-abi
hit my battles up with a vote.
alright yo check it:
this was a decent battle...i think pyro threw down some alright stuff for being a noob. but abi got him here.
abi-oh and tell your mom to give my change back
cuz hundreds and fiftys is all i had
pullin up in my merc-b* and she didn't look bad
talkin bout the car man don't get overexited
also here's a tip when she sucks dick tell her not to bite it
...hah i lud dat part, fuckin tight....
pyro-see i used ta be a gangster but now i'm the devil in the fuckin flesh
da wrong 1 to conest i dont aim 4 nothing that befall below ya neck
yeah i know it some vital shit i could hit thats in ya chest
but all that shit i'll cease if i leave ya brains a fucking mess
....i like did part, aight ending
abi, you merked him by far. these other guys say it was alright?...i thought yours was good. pyro, you werent bad, just elevate
v/abi
thanx guys but i need this to be finished so i guess im uppin i don't know how many times i have already
ok vote please one more time and then i'll be done goddamn please people vote on this battle