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6 bars
due in 15 minutes
check in ignore the other thread forgot to put a poll
heres my check ill post soon
check.......................i'll start writing now
k here we go
kaos is a joke, you reach for wins but hes gettin rejections/
i could end ya life by, cuttin off your internet connection/
plus my lines leave u cursed, da moment i disperse/
you never seen dope, how can u be smokin my verse?/
skill for u is non-existant, like your chance of beatin me/
dis dudes like cheap toilet paper..he gets ripped easily/
my name aint chucky, but this battle is childs play/
only thing you gettin in battles is L's like cool J/
lyrically u think your winnin but like biggie your dead wrong/
no one expects you to win,i guess thats why your goin Under- Dawg/ (underdog)
fuck it, this battles like drive bys, watch kaos get hit/
i got a big dick, an just like your pride you could swallow it/
G/L
pz
i got the flows-to-explode..*head over heels*..leave ya 'nose-at-ya-toes'....
....i'll drag this emcee across the 'pavement' and get this 'show-on-the-road'
enter the mind of this kid-thoughts..i got this shit-locked....
....my punches hit so hard..i got 'time on my hands' like a fucken 'wrist watch'
i'll detatch ya arm with the shit you cant handle....
....so when i ask if this cats-ill..the answer is 'no, show'..like 'inactive battles'
ima stab-this wack-bitch..then 'break off ya head 'like 'striking a match-stick'....
....its drastic..so i'll have ya 'life more dragged out' than 'smoking habbits'
what did you expect..? think you'd earn my respect..? check....
....kaos 'jepordize ya future' like 'fortune tellers with alex trebek'
hate to be an asshole but your 15 minutes over due date.. jus hurry up
uppppppppppppppppppin for votes....................
stop sleepin on this shit.........................
uppin for votes leave your links and ill return the favor...
alright, i think you both had some good flow, vocabulary and some good punches
mr.showtime:good flow, nice wording, and i think im giving you the advatage here cause you threw harder punches towards kaos
kaos is a joke, you reach for wins but hes gettin rejections/
i could end ya life by, cuttin off your internet connection/
skill for u is non-existant, like your chance of beatin me/
dis dudes like cheap toilet paper..he gets ripped easily
fuck it, this battles like drive bys, watch kaos get hit/
i got a big dick, an just like your pride you could swallow it/
kaos:dont get me wrong, tight rhyme, you just didnt have the punches that Mr.showtime had:
i got the flows-to-explode..*head over heels*..leave ya 'nose-at-ya-toes'....
....i'll drag this emcee across the 'pavement' and get this 'show-on-the-road'
enter the mind of this kid-thoughts..i got this shit-locked....
you had some good flow and rhymes, but it wasnt enough
Mr.showtime-9/10 kaos-8/10
mr.showtime gets this one
upp # 2 leave links..................
upp #3 ok leave your links I WILL actually return the favor lets get some votes in this
I gotta give this battle to kaos, simply because he had way more multis, flows and punches than you did ShowTime. Kaos, your verse was solid and had dope flow and multis. ShowTime, your rhyme scheme was basic... aiight nonetheless. Your closer was dope kaos:
ima stab-this wack-bitch..then 'break off ya head 'like 'striking a match-stick'....
....its drastic..so i'll have ya 'life more dragged out' than 'smoking habbits'
what did you expect..? think you'd earn my respect..? check....
....kaos 'jepordize ya future' like 'fortune tellers with alex trebek'
That right there coulda beat ShowTime's whole verse in my opinion.
This was aiight though ShowTime:
kaos is a joke, you reach for wins but hes gettin rejections/
i could end ya life by, cuttin off your internet connection/
plus my lines leave u cursed, da moment i disperse/
you never seen dope, how can u be smokin my verse?/
Not amazing, but aiight still... so I gotta go with kaos for obvious reasons.
Vote-kaos
Return the favor, links in sig. (vs. Fel#ny and vs. Abi)
No hate, peace. Keep elevatin' Show.
spit i'll hit you back with an honest vote..1-1 uppiin
i hit u up spit,dam guys c mon vote leave your links
show-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, sum aight punches(too simplistic though)
kaos-ok flow, ok structure, good multi's, sum ok punches(sum witty)nice nameplays
Overall-I think kaos punches harder came more creative and had more mutli's...show just try to be more creative with the punches, work on multi's as well.
vote-kaos
peep and return a vote
thanx
uppin............................................. .......
Mr. ShowTime: damn nice flow and really felt your punches. If I could nitpick, I'd say what it's missin' was some personals...you mentioned his name, yeah, but sometimes it ain't enough if you don't engage them, esp. if they doin it to you. No hatin', good effort.
~kaos~: Nice opening bar, with a personal! ;) the rest of your verse was pretty general, except for ....so when i ask if this cats-ill..the answer is 'no, show'..like 'inactive battles' note what I told Mr. ShowTime? He lost this 'cause he didn't engage you, but you engaged him back!
VOTE: ~kaos~
Check sig...return favour (will poll once my post count gets to 100)
Upping this thread ................................!!