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no krew/hate votes
no biting
check in time 24 hours
drop within 2 hours after check in
you spit first
g/luck :thumbup:
ey its 10-12 fuka stop changin the rules... man i thought we both chek n write at the same time but yeh ill go first.. NO FEEDIN hahaha.. yeh ill spit fukn shortly..
hey dawg quit gettin all scared and just drop you verse rules are already posted one love.
jus like to say... fuk every1 lol.. im fuken gonna merk all unmerked and merk yall merk till mercury aint got no more merks fo me hoes..
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
quick shit,, got owned.. lol yeh got spit away yungin
im not gettin scared, its just the rules that u wrote urself u fuk.. stick to ur own shit and stop tryna get extended lines.. dont take long now. and 4 evry 1 the * means word play so yeh..
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
another done deal
*John Lennon was with the'beatles' he got assinated
*everything else self explanatory
ya done peace be still.
uppin #1 done deal
ok here goes plz return the favour
killa
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
ok tidy flow nice structure no real hard hittin personals tho
asazin
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
yep nice opner good flow tidy structure good vocab and good punches and personals and good closer
ok no hate both were good but overall asazin took this cos he was betta overall
vote:asazin
wtf was with that vote, i bit unexplained. just seemed like u wanted us to vote on ur shit.. u neva even judged each 2lines.. wack shit, and how did i neva use personals.. just sayin shit to make it look explained..
I'm goin with killa on this..betta flow, structure, and he actually used personals.
assasin i wasn't really feelin the disses and the flow and structure was screwed. Also work on the disses.
vote-killa
Killa-
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
woulda been better had you not related it sexually.. ya know?
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
old concept.. but ok idea i guess
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
heh.. this got a chuckle.
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
eh, decent.
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
again, ok idea.. not that hard of a punch.
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
weak closer.. =/
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Assazin-
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
wtf? where were you going with that..
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
nope.
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
.. whats vanilla gotta do with anything? your punches gotta make sense before they can hit.
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
no...this...was....filler...get rid...of all....the...dots
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
wow. no.
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
nope.
Overall, very weak battle, but Assazin came with complete ass. He had no personals, punches, or anything.. Im just being honest man.. ya need to have your bars make sense before ya can make em hit. Killa.. not your best, some played stuff, but you clearly came out better.
v/ Killa
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
decent start
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
played concept, but decent
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
iiight
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
-doesnt really rhyme, meh
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
-meh
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
-filler
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
-decent at best opener, no punch
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
-no
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla
-not feelin this
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
-filler
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
-meh, no real punch
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
-decent
Vote Killa INstinct heres how it goes, killa had two decents, 1 iiight and the rest were weak, while assasin had 2 decent and the rest was weak,so with that said Killa takes it for more harder hittin punches, better structure, and an overall betterverse.
RETURN THE FAVA IN THE BATTLE IN MY SIG
thnx for the votes pplz.. uppin again for 2more.. leave links
killa instunk-
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
* wow that was just bad
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
** aight
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
** eh
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
** eh #2
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
** you mean take-out? maybe its different in australia, ok no punishment
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
* eww
ASSazin-
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
** meh
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
** meh #2
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
** dont feed please
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
* those dots wont hide your poor structure, son
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
* this is bad
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
* toooooo basic
TOTALS
killa - 10stars/6bars= 1.666 (C-)
assazin - 9 stars/6bars = 1.500 (C-)
vote-killa
uppin # anyways get it over wit then one love.
its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
U had a good opener and some nice rhymes. U had the creativity and the good structure and to top it all off u had the connectin punches all the way.......until the end. It was really a let down to see that ending. But everything else was good. It was hot.
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
This was a good verse as well. Although the whole period uasage thing wasn't really workin for me, i wasn't feelin all that, u put em in places where they didn't really need ta be but, other than that, good structuer. U had nice rhymes and good punches, no real heavy hitters though, very unlike u, ithought. It was kind of a dissapointment to see no real knockout punches in ya verse but oh well, maybe next time.
anywayz my vote= killa for better punches.
hit up some of the battles in my sig. Peaceezy.