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~* The Corner *~
A crack addict awoke to relies the beast had been released
Standing on the only corner in the city not yet being policed
Outlines of past mc's litter the street and footpaths of corruption
The only thing that would stop me now is a Jupiter size eruption
Showing no fear standing on this one corner alone in the dark
Foolish mc's have come to think this tree has being rid of bark
But the kids have nothing that has not already been played
I have earned my spot and this will be a place that I’ll always stay
Been tested by fakers that think they can roll with real g's
Asking questions of why the streets are littered of past mc's
This corner is the reason why I keep walking so fucking tall
Quotations of the fact that I beat my head against the wall
Pissed at the reason why people testing me more then ever before
Make the crowd jump up and down leaving them with saddle sore
As I stand on this unlit street corner my motivation unswayed
The darkness looking more accepting as the lights begin to fade
As a ghost unheralded by Horrific Scenes of violence
I never have submitted to any votes of compliance
Get out my face, become unnoticed before I blow off the gauge
This dark corner has become the place that I will always stay.
Some corner’s push dro some push crack
But this corner ain’t the same it got my back
Some corners roll in a Benz some roll in a 2004 beamer
But my corner wont give me that cause we gota be meaner
Lives passing here seem to think that they can show me up
Well I’m here to stay I’ll stand right here with one finger up
Darkness ain’t the only thing that keeps me going on
I’ve stood at a arduous road that stretch forever long
my life wont be they same by the end of my journey here
Placed upon my shoulders responsibility I couldn’t bare
But that made me stronger because I’m still standin right here
I wield no pistol, no Mack ten or even a 12 gauge shotgun
Because my word is what will pull me from darkness into the sun
I have seen many people before me fight for this position
From selfless acts of violence to even a lethal composition
Yet I stand strong here knowing of the man I will become
Out of all emotions I have lost there is still left only one
Anger I have for people that think they can do what I do best
Laid outlines of friends and fellow mc’s put down to rest
In memory of all these people names we shall lest forget
Some corner push weed and some push crack
But this corner ain’t the same it always got my back
Some corners roll in a Benz some roll in a 2004 beamer
But my corner wont give me that cause we gota be meaner
Like an unknown solider standing on the edge universe
Marching into the infinite past an enemies own turf
As Armageddon reigns and the four horsemen return
I will beg them for forgiveness cause death is what I learn
Death doesn’t scare me I have know him well
Will I pass the gates into heaven only time will tell?
Greeted with open arms by mc’s that have passed before me
Yet this corner is a long and dark one that will be my life
I will stand struggling through all my pain and strife
I have no regrets to what I have accomplished
There is no one else I’d rather be or life that I would switched
Because at the end of the day life is a fucking bitch
i'll be droppin another one real soon not quite hard core like this but yeh aiight peace.
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i see structure skill expression talent all factors this has minor loops that need building but honestly i dont see why thjios cant get a high rate
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i read this last night im feelin wat u right son keep it up hope to see more of ur work soon coz i like ur lyric
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yo man dat was tyte you could go some were wit ur talent
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damn homie u drop a nice ass piece like this and nobody even has the respect to give you any feedback thats fucked up...all these ppl view but no one says shit..Well I am letting you know that shit was nice and keep it up...dont let these dead heads fuck ur day up cuz they aint replying..
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yo thanks man respect and love
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yo i done went against you 2wice in that cypher "diss the cat above you" you got some skills i just ate you and mindone up...you should peep my open mics.."fucked up mind" and " Bullshit" much love
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oh yeah homie i just battled this cat named rabbi go peep out my battle and vote and i have another battle against assazin check it out and vote on that too..i aint been able to get replies
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that was pretty real shit dog
killer vocad an flow
keep doin what you doin
peace and stay up
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Considerably long in length - should go into audio if you've written this whole peice.
Nice work with the flow, on point, and good use of vocab...
I'm sure with a decent beat behind this, and providing its mixed well, this could be worth putting on to an EP or demo tape.
Put some actual vocalist skills behing this rather than just the written skills.
Props.
Peace
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Tha Begining And End Are Tha Best Parts But I Would Seggest A Usage Of A More Expanded Vocabulary.i Really Like Tha Message Of This Rap, But It Containslimited Visuals. But This Rap Is Easily Above Average.
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uppppppp give some feed people
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in temrs of vocab this was strong, in terms of subject matter it was a great take on an exists topic but the imagety was the strongest aspect of this piece. just great work man. solid hook. multis wouldnt helped this much i dont think.
uppin this.
