house rules.
10 - 15 lines.
check in by tomorrow.
drop half hour after you check in.
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house rules.
10 - 15 lines.
check in by tomorrow.
drop half hour after you check in.
alright.
I peeped the open mics you dropped and the cyphers you bombed
After this verse you'll be like "Oops, there goes another one."
Wasted on a battle you shoulda never entered
Cause it's World Wars lyrics standin' front and center
"Yo man, let me in your crew. I can rap real tight"
Well, grab the gladwrap and pack lunch psyk....
Osis and remember you've been shut down twice
And trying to get this victory you'll be shut down thrice
And remember....who's replied to your open mics?
I don't need a crew to help back me up cause I fight my battles solo and drop low bo's on your lyrics and kick 'em to the curb trick
Knock 'em out with one "hook" so I don't waste my time bitch
aiight someone worth it respect where it due.
check check 1 2........
Psykosis is a name war will never forget due to you bein my trick slave
the battle will be the end of world war because cause he bout to be paved
fabrication of posts never posted cant come up with sumthing true.
"Lookin' for a crew with my kinda style" i seem you were lookin for a crew
jus because no one wanted you doent mean you need to hate on me
your punches are played like re runs of Miami vice from 1983
your multis are drier then a desert and vocabulary is to basic
i know you like it long and hard so bend over and jus take it
is it just me or did or did i see no hooks in your lyrical verse
your just actin like a newb with the punchlines you disperse
i have seen the future and this is a place you dont exist
from the moment you were born you always were my bitch
i know ur gettin horny and your member is becomin engorged
and to close you aint my bitch you are now my trickin whore
dammit mistakes every where. where ever it dont quite make sense a fukin mistake. so yeh thats all.
So you wait to have your best battle verse with me, huh?
uppppp and ahahahahaha no not if it and so many mistakes in it
Both of you had tight ass verses
good pun's and multis too
yea a few errors but nothing to get all sad
about good shit the both of ya's
good structure to psychosis to or however you spell it
V/Psychosis
return the favor on MINT vs. ASSAZIN so I can end that bullshit one love man.
upppppin upppppin come on people start votin but vote fair
up....lets get this over with........
up.........
upppppppp................. let's finally get this buried and done
upppppppppp
upppppppppp
upppppppppppppppppppppp
Return the fava in the battle in my sig.
I peeped the open mics you dropped and the cyphers you bombed
After this verse you'll be like "Oops, there goes another one."
-didnt rhyme and was wack
Wasted on a battle you shoulda never entered
Cause it's World Wars lyrics standin' front and center
-no
"Yo man, let me in your crew. I can rap real tight"
Well, grab the gladwrap and pack lunch psyk....
-meh
Osis and remember you've been shut down twice
And trying to get this victory you'll be shut down thrice
-filler
And remember....who's replied to your open mics?
I don't need a crew to help back me up cause I fight my battles solo and drop low bo's on your lyrics and kick 'em to the curb trick
Knock 'em out with one "hook" so I don't waste my time bitch
last four lines were wack, and the first two didnt even rhyme
Psykosis is a name war will never forget due to you bein my trick slave
the battle will be the end of world war because cause he bout to be paved
-no
fabrication of posts never posted cant come up with sumthing true.
"Lookin' for a crew with my kinda style" i seem you were lookin for a crew
-? u worded it badly which made it blah
jus because no one wanted you doent mean you need to hate on me
your punches are played like re runs of Miami vice from 1983
-ok at best, kinda stretched
your multis are drier then a desert and vocabulary is to basic
i know you like it long and hard so bend over and jus take it
-this is kinda homo,and filler
is it just me or did or did i see no hooks in your lyrical verse
your just actin like a newb with the punchlines you disperse
-filler
i have seen the future and this is a place you dont exist
from the moment you were born you always were my bitch
-no
i know ur gettin horny and your member is becomin engorged
and to close you aint my bitch you are now my trickin whore
-blah
Both verses were BLAH, but psyk when this for actually havin a punch and rhyming throughout his whole verse. World war didnt rhyme twice thru no punches and had ultra stretched bars, that came weak, both need to work on structure and throwing wittypunches.
Return the Fava
World War: Didn't really feel much from your verse, nuthin' spectacular in your punches...and what was with this line: I don't need a crew to help back me up cause I fight my battles solo and drop low bo's, was that necessary? Didn't rhyme, didn't need to be there. Nothin' positive, but nothin' negative...
Psykosis: *shakes head* disappointing there, dude, you had a chance to win this battle had you put more of an effort in, but one or two poor personals along with sub-standard general punches won't get you far. You were daunted by the supposed challenge: aiight someone worth it respect where it due - next time, think of it as a bigger scalp!
VOTE: World War
Check sig...
ok, you got that.
my vote...
Psykosis keep it up
here goes my break down cuz I never broke it down
Originally posted by:World War
I peeped the open mics you dropped and the cyphers you bombed
After this verse you'll be like "Oops, there goes another one."
NOPE
Wasted on a battle you shoulda never entered
Cause it's World Wars lyrics standin' front and center
WEAK S.G.
"Yo man, let me in your crew. I can rap real tight"
Well, grab the gladwrap and pack lunch psyk....
WTF
Osis and remember you've been shut down twice
And trying to get this victory you'll be shut down thrice
FILLER PLUS THAT SHIT SUCKED
And remember....who's replied to your open mics?
I don't need a crew to help back me up cause I fight my battles solo and drop low bo's on your lyrics and kick 'em to the curb trick
Knock 'em out with one "hook" so I don't waste my time bitch
ENDING WAS WEAK PLUS YOU NEED TO ELEVATE
Originally posted by:Psykosis
Psykosis is a name war will never forget due to you bein my trick slave
the battle will be the end of world war because cause he bout to be paved
AIGHT OPENER
fabrication of posts never posted cant come up with sumthing true.
"Lookin' for a crew with my kinda style" i seem you were lookin for a crew
COOL
jus because no one wanted you doent mean you need to hate on me
your punches are played like re runs of Miami vice from 1983
MEH
your multis are drier then a desert and vocabulary is to basic
i know you like it long and hard so bend over and jus take it
WEAK 2ND LINER BUT IT'S AIGHT
is it just me or did or did i see no hooks in your lyrical verse
your just actin like a newb with the punchlines you disperse
MEH
i have seen the future and this is a place you dont exist
from the moment you were born you always were my bitch
COOL
i know ur gettin horny and your member is becomin engorged
and to close you aint my bitch you are now my trickin whore
AIGHT
V/Psykosis
for overall better everything
U bitchs both suck i will beat any mther fucker who wants to go just bring it bitch :thefinger