Due 20 min after both checkin
no biting or feeding auto dq
10 lines is the max
You spit first and i will follow after
good luck good sir
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Due 20 min after both checkin
no biting or feeding auto dq
10 lines is the max
You spit first and i will follow after
good luck good sir
aight check
checkin 123 check
God:The MC left the crew. by the way, people.
Tim Corleone:lol i didnt care he was wack anyways
he wont be missed
God:LOL... True, true.
Lil Hova figured he was a wannabe so he changed his name,
But now he biten off of scarface,so to me your still the same,
So now your mr.mafia?,plz u only hustle by prostitution,
Ya personals wouldnt be sick in a mental institution,
Saw this bitchs pic,to be honest you look like a breed,
Only way u can beat me is by lettin me go first so that u can feed,
Cats ridiculous,these are facts meticulously spread,
Just burn ya rhyme book,cuz to me your already lyrically dead,
And fuck TNL,God got u on a leash,missionary battles for u to open,
So now your stuck with a cocky boss taken orders from gary colman......
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...ortSmaller.jpg[/IMG]
im re writng i just deleted my whole verse
ok..Quote:
Originally Posted by Tim Corleone
Okay So The Mc Lets state the obvious facts your just wack
like rolling dice wtih your brain cause all your thought are crap
You lack skill wheres your punches there is no flow in your bars
Mc your using fake personas and still nobody knows who you are
You left the next level ight so it must of been due to complications
But Its alright though because to me i didnt think you had Elevation
Im better then you go back to rookies cause with me its not a fight
You couldnt blow this board up using checkers with some dynomite
Its over son like your wack anime i'll have you hunched over crying
And MC I could tell you that i think your ill but then id just be lying
Vote - Tim
Reason:
Better punches and more punches...he had wittier lines with better concepts...The MC could've put his concepts to MUCH better use...but he didn't...=/..Tim had the consistency....MC had the personals, but they weren't hard hitting..they just seemed to be more like statements..and when you did have a punch it wasn't too good...therefore Tim won for harder punches and a more consistent verse...
Return The Favor.
uppin 1 leave your links
I did...=|....help a stupid herb in need...same for you MC..lmao
lol fine ill return favor....for the rest of the voters leave links as well i will try to return favors to anyone no matter what your vote is so be honest people thx uppin 1
what are you talking about uppin 2
uppin 3 common leave you links and ill get back to them
If i could vote it would be TIM CORLEONE but I can't so peace be still. Check out MINT VS. ASSAZIN on frontlines.
uppin 4 common peoples lets get a voting still leave links lol
Tim corleone took this one wit no
doubts in the world wit mo puns and mets
on an massive land slide.
V//Timothy Corleone
return the favor peace be still. you guys should return the favor everytime you get a vote one love. :laugh2:
aight lemme do this quick cause this is probly the only battle in this page thats worth votin on...
THE MC
Lil Hova figured he was a wannabe so he changed his name,
But now he biten off of scarface,so to me your still the same,
(not bad)
So now your mr.mafia?,plz u only hustle by prostitution,
Ya personals wouldnt be sick in a mental institution,
(its all good.... except mr.mafia dat sounded gay)
Saw this bitchs pic,to be honest you look like a breed,
Only way u can beat me is by lettin me go first so that u can feed,
(wasnt feelin it. and i heard the 2nd line so much)
Cats ridiculous,these are facts meticulously spread,
Just burn ya rhyme book,cuz to me your already lyrically dead,
(heard it b4....)
And fuck TNL,God got u on a leash,missionary battles for u to open,
So now your stuck with a cocky boss taken orders from gary colman......
( good rhyme but isnt dat gary colman guy the wrestling manager..)
u had a nice verce.. i like ur structure and rhymes.. ur punches werent too hard but ok...
TIM
Okay So The Mc Lets state the obvious facts your just wack
like rolling dice wtih your brain cause all your thought are crap
(bad closer....wack n crap dont rhyme either)
You lack skill wheres your punches there is no flow in your bars
Mc your using fake personas and still nobody knows who you are
(ehh...)
You left the next level ight so it must of been due to complications
But Its alright though because to me i didnt think you had Elevation
(its ok.. ppl in this site use elevation so much its my worst word lol..)
Im better then you go back to rookies cause with me its not a fight
You couldnt blow this board up using checkers with some dynomite
(man wtf is that.. first wat board??,, 2nd CHECKERS WIT DYNAMITE,, is not rap material.. and u aint even playin checkers...)
Its over son like your wack anime i'll have you hunched over crying
And MC I could tell you that i think your ill but then id just be lying
(ok close)
man ur opener and ur middle verse needs alot of practise.. seriously ur stuff wasnt good and most made no sence...
good luck to both but my vote goin to the mc for way harder punches and structure that was well balanced...
return the favor like u guys said uze will..... plz honest votes like i did..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=152393
ok whatever how could the first line be a boad closer when it the first part of my verse
lol up 5
TC took this hands down, punches just hit harder, like da flow a lil better, nice use of metas, The mc just seemed 2 come 2 simple 2 me n some of the lines seemed 2 b forced, both had some nice multies 2 da vocab wuz decent i guess 2 both sides
vote-TC
n WTF, how can Tims opener b a bad closer???
vote on my battle wit Devaztate Mindz if u can , thanx
Tim get's this vote.
Both verses had solid punches… I was feeling MC’s shit…
It was a good battle, but what decided it for me was the excessive picture.
That’s what lost it for you MC.
Return a honest vote on a sleeper… please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146436
The MC-
Lil Hova figured he was a wannabe so he changed his name,
But now he biten off of scarface,so to me your still the same,
** simple rhyme, aight punch
So now your mr.mafia?,plz u only hustle by prostitution,
Ya personals wouldnt be sick in a mental institution,
** aight, kinda simple
Saw this bitchs pic,to be honest you look like a breed,
Only way u can beat me is by lettin me go first so that u can feed,
* simple attack, bad flow
Cats ridiculous,these are facts meticulously spread,
Just burn ya rhyme book,cuz to me your already lyrically dead,
* flow off, weird punch, i dont like this too much
And fuck TNL,God got u on a leash,missionary battles for u to open,
So now your stuck with a cocky boss taken orders from gary colman......
** he doesnt really look like the good gary that much... plus the flow is off from the other bars
timmy-
Okay So The Mc Lets state the obvious facts your just wack
like rolling dice wtih your brain cause all your thought are crap
** good punch, first line is weak though
You lack skill wheres your punches there is no flow in your bars
Mc your using fake personas and still nobody knows who you are
** aight this is ok
You left the next level ight so it must of been due to complications
But Its alright though because to me i didnt think you had Elevation
** basic, but you dont fuck it up
Im better then you go back to rookies cause with me its not a fight
You couldnt blow this board up using checkers with some dynomite
** strong second line killed by first
Its over son like your wack anime i'll have you hunched over crying
And MC I could tell you that i think your ill but then id just be lying
last line gets ** for being basic but getting the job done...
TOTALS:
mc- 8stars/5bars = 1.600 (C-)
tim- 10 stars/5 bars = 2.000 (C)
vote - tim
Lil Hova figured he was a wannabe so he changed his name,
But now he biten off of scarface,so to me your still the same,
nah
So now your mr.mafia?,plz u only hustle by prostitution,
Ya personals wouldnt be sick in a mental institution,
mad played
Saw this bitchs pic,to be honest you look like a breed,
Only way u can beat me is by lettin me go first so that u can feed,
whack
Cats ridiculous,these are facts meticulously spread,
Just burn ya rhyme book,cuz to me your already lyrically dead,
no
And fuck TNL,God got u on a leash,missionary battles for u to open,
So now your stuck with a cocky boss taken orders from gary colman......
diss him...not God
Okay So The Mc Lets state the obvious facts your just wack
like rolling dice wtih your brain cause all your thought are crap
Ok...kinda played
You lack skill wheres your punches there is no flow in your bars
Mc your using fake personas and still nobody knows who you are
weak
You left the next level ight so it must of been due to complications
But Its alright though because to me i didnt think you had Elevation
no
Im better then you go back to rookies cause with me its not a fight
You couldnt blow this board up using checkers with some dynomite
not feelin it
Its over son like your wack anime i'll have you hunched over crying
And MC I could tell you that i think your ill but then id just be lying
no
Man...pretty garbage battle, but I got Tinm takin it for 1 Ok punch....that was really the only semi good punch in this battle
Vote= Tim Corleone