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10-12 lines max
No biting or recycling
No dickryde/hate/crew votes
Both verses due within 24 hours after the 2nd check in
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whose first?
Check...and drop anytime within 24 hours after this post
alright, I'll try to get mine up tonight.
Aight, I tried to do this quick, don't pussy out and leave like some other guys...
I don't wanna be forced to listen to the shit this guy's gonna spit
when you rappin' with Zero K, ya face gonna get lit
so red and it'll be burnin'of embarrasment
you're overshadowed by me, you feel the need to circumvent
you can run away with your head in your arms, cryin' about how you got told
and I'll be walkin' away in the other direction with the gold
you'll go to jail with your shitty rhymes, I'll decide when you get paroled
when these voters decide who had the best rhymes, I'll be winnin', two-fold
why you need 24 hours to write your pathetic rhymes?
is it cuz you need to wait for me so you can quote all my lines?
just be original, write your own lyrics,
if you need some help, you know where to get it
alright I'm outta here for tonight I'll check back tomorrow, hopefully you'll have your verse up...peace
Fucka Ok..you suck..now Post'll take this kid straight to town..
Cuz I'll kick the shit out of this kid...just to win hands down
I'll drop my bars...and bitch I know that I've left my mark..
He's aroused by my verse, so everyone knows he'll die hard
Votes arent everything, and you'll soon learn this the slow way
I mean fuck kid...if they were, ..then no...everything isnt 0k
Wanted to see what this bitch got....it's nothing but shit drops
But Post'll silence this lamb ..by busting this fucka in his chops
Thunderin flows, destroy, explode and stay pummeling this hoe
I aim for the teeth...
But don't worry kid.. it's not missing ..they always under ya nose
aight ill vote on this condition, dat postmort votes in my battle cause da other guy a newb. this dont mean im gonna vote for u, it just mean i will vote and poll... aight nigga.
Up....
Btw...leave links...I now have over 100 posts!! ..actually near 200
0k - I felt like your rhyme scheme was a bit basic and wasn't really connecting well. You had a decent flow going, but really you didn't bring much else to the table so work on more creative punches that knock him down.
PM - I liked your verse. You had some good concepts going and your punches were definately hitting him, like the opener and closer especially. Nothing else really needs to be said, you easily take this.
Vote - PM
Please return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig
Sleepy bitches...
I don't wanna be forced to listen to the shit this guy's gonna spit
when you rappin' with Zero K, ya face gonna get lit
weak opener
so red and it'll be burnin'of embarrasment
you're overshadowed by me, you feel the need to circumvent
i dont get it.....
you can run away with your head in your arms, cryin' about how you got told
and I'll be walkin' away in the other direction with the gold
weak punch
you'll go to jail with your shitty rhymes, I'll decide when you get paroled
when these voters decide who had the best rhymes, I'll be winnin', two-fold
weak punch
why you need 24 hours to write your pathetic rhymes?
is it cuz you need to wait for me so you can quote all my lines?
ok better
just be original, write your own lyrics,
if you need some help, you know where to get it
weak closer
Fucka Ok..you suck..now Post'll take this kid straight to town..
Cuz I'll kick the shit out of this kid...just to win hands down
decent
I'll drop my bars...and bitch I know that I've left my mark..
He's aroused by my verse, so everyone knows he'll die hard
good punch
Votes arent everything, and you'll soon learn this the slow way
I mean fuck kid...if they were, ..then no...everything isnt 0k
good punch nice one
Wanted to see what this bitch got....it's nothing but shit drops
But Post'll silence this lamb ..by busting this fucka in his chops
decent
Thunderin flows, destroy, explode and stay pummeling this hoe
I aim for the teeth...
But don't worry kid.. it's not missing ..they always under ya nose
dont like the structure on this bar but it was a good punch
overall it was onesided and post takes this easily for comen way harder both keep elevaten-One Love-
Up...Again
I can't believe PM is gettin' votes...if I read the first line...'fucka ok, you suck', I wouldn't even bother reading it....
up#2...lets get some more votes....
0k
Ryme scheme was ok
Opening lines were blah
The embarrasement circumvent line wasnt wack but it was a hard diss...
The line after that was about average
That was an alright attempt at a punch... the jail and parole line... yea that ones coo
That finisher wasnt good
PM
Opener wasn't all that, I don't see why everyones so impressed...
Nice wordplaying.... and thought out bars
I liked that 4th line you had a nice punch in there...
The verse was shorter than your opponents but you had a better finisher...
All around solid short battle verse...
Vote goes 2 Post
Wack...my opponent got banned..
okay well since Ok got banned i will vote for PM
not just for that but i felt he had a harder hitting verse Ok came weak and played with some of his shit PM you could fix it so it doesnt look all stretched but we all have our off battle some times you had a couple quoatables in your verse as well good battle but PM takes it
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. 0K isn't banned forever. - Ambiguous
wtf, fucka ok you suck? what is that supposed to be?
^dumbass shut up now....
Yo post u came hard this nigga 0k dont kno shit bout rap...
ur opener was way better then his
ur closer was better
ur punches... was aight but better
n ya structure was aight... didnt stretch to many rhymes
jus work on how ya shit flows. some of it was forced, better vocab to would def up ur skills
0k... there is no hope for you im afraid. every rhyme of urs i read... u tried. n u tried hard but yo u aint good enuff... elevate much yo... ON EVERYTHING.
Vote... Posmortem
Return tha favor bro... finish this for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1786234
PostMortem won.. by a landslide..
0k
structure is decent.. some of ur lines were stretched though.. flow fell off a little.. no multis.. just a bunch of ass words put together.. attempted wordplay.. but none of it came out right.. no connecting punches.. i dont know if u can call those punches.. they were just wack.. no good personals..
PostMortem
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had dope multis.. as well as good wordplay.. i also liked ur concepts.. most of them were original.. good shit.. most of ur punches connected.. one nameplay up in dat peice.. and by dat i mean that.. werd..
Overall
PostMortem had the better structure.. the more stable flow.. more multis.. better wordplay.. better concepts.. harder-hitting punches.. and a nameplay.. wherease, 0k brought nothing but wackness to the table.. so basing off of that.. PostMortem gets my vote for the WAY better verse..
VOTE - POSTMORTEM
Please return the favor with an honest vote on my battle..
..Its like half way down the first page, entitled 'Daedal vs. Makaveli Trained'
Werd.