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Runnin Freestyle
im known to buck foo's like ray lewis
fuck em up so bad they gotta drink food as a fluid
cuz imma savage, cant wait til im livin a lifestyle thats lavish
til my pockets is full of cabbage, hope i can manage to
imma do some damage too wit my new crew... Hit N RuN
i'll beat a muthafucka up! fuck-a-gun
got niggas "Runnin" like the "2pac - N - Biggie" song
moms told me my whole life to get-a-long, wit others
but the truth is only person i really respect is my brother
took the role of my dad that i never had
hustlin dusk to til dawn even when the weather bad
im "striaght clowin" like "alex thomas"
u attempt to hurt me n imma murk u, nigga thats a promise
i'll be honest, punch a nigga in the chest til he vomit
put the nine in his face have em more frozen then the tail of comet
niggas tellin me i got a played out content
nigga if u gon hate i really dont need ya comment
people say im too provocative, always tryin to start some shit
so wat! thats my prerogative, dont read it if u cant take it bitch
never take a chick to ya home, but make sure u bone, n get blown
now thats good advise, *fuck!* niggas live ya life
i've been around the world twice, every country, every gurls nice
im tyrin to fuck as many gurls as rick james
my flow is on fire, i spit flames
G -Dash- Money dont forget the name
cuz i wont stop rappin til i leave my mark in the game!!
Nigga!!
*Fuck* - telling everyone to ingage in sexual intercourse
^^ only ^^ cuz muthafuckas like to get my shit twisted
Hit N RuN !! muthafucka!!
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damn feelin the emotion.......what happened to my Girl chase'n homie that I'm used to??? Anyway good shit dawg stay up........
peace
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shit was tight i liked it.....keep doin yo thang^^^ word i felt dat emotion to, u was gettin some shit off ya chest...i like dat shit... raw style dogg keep droppin..peace
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thanks for the feedback, all luv...keep it comin'
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ok .....ok....I feel you fa nice spit keeo that commin. HNR
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nice drop. emotion was what made me feel this piece. overall flow was on point, vocab was aaaigght i guess. if u elevated with vocab and wordplay this piece would be straight fire.
people say im too provocative, always tryin to start some shit
so wat! thats my prerogative, dont read it if u cant take it bitch
thats my fav bar right there. keep postin...
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shiet we taking over...that was tight dog, keep it up...HNR...pz
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uppin thanks for the feedback family... i appreciate it, lets get some more comin
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come on dont sleep on me >>>>last up!!
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moms told me my whole life to get-a-long, wit others/ but the truth is only person i really respect is my brother/ took the role of my dad that i never had/ hustlin dusk to til dawn even when the weather bad....i really feel the emotion in here....
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that was just an example...of a line i really felt...sawwry for havin to explain this in a second post....aint tryna freepost
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Yo man that was sick dawg. Im pretty much speechless. "fuck em up so bad they gotta drink food as a fluid" That line wins in itself. Keep it flowin man. Peace. PS the ray lewis metaphore was pretty good too. Keep it up and go win some battles.
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ay i appreciate the feed, thanks yall
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g-money it was pretty good i think it kinda fell off the last few lines but other then that it was cool. that line about your progitive was dope. best one. keep it up.
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i'm a do a drive by in a black ao black suburban/ sluggz a wrap around ya head like you rockin a turban/ yo shits no joke, my raps the real this murda i wrote sure enough to cop me a deal, but check it/ don't stress if i don't cop it pop/ compare me to barney rubbles, still seen more rock/ rap about guns, dice a throw the glock to ya grill/ metal shops the only time you ever played wit some steel, fucka!!!!
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huh? give me one good line in this song for me to say it was alright, ok there are none, this shit is garbage. shit man, there might of been emotion, but no wordplay or anything that relates to rhymin, oh then again i only have 9 posts right? ha
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yung haymaker your straight bitch. if you didn't like it give constructive critisism. don't just insult him. tell him what he can do to make it better. if you don't understand that then get off rb. sorry g douchebags always spam up threads with phoney bullshit. good drop bro.
