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Aight...
On check in, agree a line minimum/maximum.
Do dickrider votes, hate votes or crew votes.
300 Posts to vote.
Good Luck. :thumbup:
checkin in for the battle.....good luck papi....lol
heh, check...good luck to u too
i'm goin 12...
Fuck a verse, u need a set of converses...no, not ta' stand out
jus 2 keep u from gittin sore feet from chasin, cuz ya luck jus ran out
i dont even got the urge to try hard on u, i havent felt the demand
cuz u dont even hold enough heat.....ta' let M&Ms melt in ya hand
this battle's one-sided n too predicatable----i wouldn't call it tense
u neva clever, funny how ya own douche exceeds u in common scents
Critical Combitnation, yall aint close to (h)ours......like quarter till
forget size n strength...
...yall rely on Pure Performance, so u always come up short, fa'real
fuck all ya shit talk, dont gimme that.......ya team is really wack
n lez face it, ya 'flow' would'nt be threatnin if u was a hemophiliac
so when we say we gon crush yall, best believe we aint a group of liars
shit, i'll start by buryin this bitch in debris, when i set the roof on Fire
lez see what u got
Its been a while....but here I go....
You must be retarted because common knowledge isnt in ya mind
How the fuck we gonna battle and u aint master the art of the frontlines
Please, Dont have any misconceptions im more than a Pure Performance chick
Unxtactic, you couldnt come hard if you was having ruff sex on a cinder brick
Look I got a dildo flow so get prepared to have ur ass lyrically raped
U the type to send LLoyd Banks a video asking to be on the next porn tape
So fuck all that Critical Combination nonsense cause ur crew is the worst
Yall bitches couldnt have hot flows if yall was takin a piss with genital warts
As far as yourself...I think u need to put the mic away, and give it a rest
Cuz no one wants to hear u, why do u think ur audience is kids that deaf
So let me sum up this battle incase you couldnt registered my prestige
You a weak bitch tryin to compare one punchline to a verbal blitzkrieg
^^^i like how u finally dropped afta u came n peeped this thread twice 4 like a half hour then signed off each time
a mod can take care of this freepost
^i logged on and left....so its really whatever....no i dont have a ghostwriter and no i wasnt looking at his verse to try and make mine better....maybe if u look at my previous battles u can see that i am a femcee with talent....why the hate?
not hatin, i kno u got talent thas y i wanted 2 battle u instead, i just thought it wuz kinda funny wut u wuz doin
^nah...no hate...it's jus that i dont know u n i cant help but to think that kinda shit...i would have the same thoughts on anyone battlin me....
anywayz uppin fo votes.....#1
since i aint got enuff post ill just have to say that i think unxtatic wun this shit but nice ass battle it was hard to pick but i liked the m&ms line lol
v/unxtatic
ps.that lloyd banks gay porn things true?
uppin #2
Can we get some votes please?..............uppin 2
Fuck a verse, u need a set of converses...no, not ta' stand out
jus 2 keep u from gittin sore feet from chasin, cuz ya luck jus ran out
kinda stretched. . not worded great. . an a old concept (luck ran out)
i dont even got the urge to try hard on u, i havent felt the demand
cuz u dont even hold enough heat.....ta' let M&Ms melt in ya hand
not much of a punch. . m&m's melt in ya hand??
this battle's one-sided n too predicatable----i wouldn't call it tense
u neva clever, funny how ya own douche exceeds u in common scents
callin someone dumb doesn't punch hard. . if it was used as 'you're so dumb you did this or that' than maybe but not i this case/
Critical Combitnation, yall aint close to (h)ours......like quarter till
forget size n strength...
...yall rely on Pure Performance, so u always come up short, fa'real
the rhyme was really forced. . an the setup didn't make sense.
fuck all ya shit talk, dont gimme that.......ya team is really wack
n lez face it, ya 'flow' would'nt be threatnin if u was a hemophiliac
old as the day is long.
so when we say we gon crush yall, best believe we aint a group of liars
shit, i'll start by buryin this bitch in debris, when i set the roof on Fire
almost said this was wack. . then re-read it. . very clever wordplay. . best punch of the verse. . great closer.
You must be retarted because common knowledge isnt in ya mind
How the fuck we gonna battle and u aint master the art of the frontlines
the punch didn't connect at all. . no insult. . art of the frontlines?
Please, Dont have any misconceptions im more than a Pure Performance chick
Unxtactic, you couldnt come hard if you was having ruff sex on a cinder brick
a come hard/sex line?
Look I got a dildo flow so get prepared to have ur ass lyrically raped
U the type to send LLoyd Banks a video asking to be on the next porn tape
wtf is a 'dildo flow'?? punch was mildly amusing.
So fuck all that Critical Combination nonsense cause ur crew is the worst
Yall bitches couldnt have hot flows if yall was takin a piss with genital warts
not a very nice concept. . played. . but still fairly funy.
As far as yourself...I think u need to put the mic away, and give it a rest
Cuz no one wants to hear u, why do u think ur audience is kids that deaf
this isn't an audio battle. . therefore the punh is defunct.
So let me sum up this battle incase you couldnt registered my prestige
You a weak bitch tryin to compare one punchline to a verbal blitzkrieg
if you had dropped a 'verbal blitzkrieg' then maybe it woulda worked. . unfortunately you didn't.
v/ unxtatic
pretty even throughout. . his closer edged it though.
Vote gone. Not enough posts.
-Amb
uppin #3
unXtatic-
Fuck a verse, u need a set of converses...no, not ta' stand out
jus 2 keep u from gittin sore feet from chasin, cuz ya luck jus ran out
Decent.. cool idea
i dont even got the urge to try hard on u, i havent felt the demand
cuz u dont even hold enough heat.....ta' let M&Ms melt in ya hand
Rather weak, seen so many 'not hot enough' and related lines, kinda gets old..
this battle's one-sided n too predicatable----i wouldn't call it tense
u neva clever, funny how ya own douche exceeds u in common scents
Nah..
Critical Combitnation, yall aint close to (h)ours......like quarter till
forget size n strength...
...yall rely on Pure Performance, so u always come up short, fa'real
Coulda done something with quarter line.. compared it to her Nikkelz name or something.. but ender was weak.
fuck all ya shit talk, dont gimme that.......ya team is really wack
n lez face it, ya 'flow' would'nt be threatnin if u was a hemophiliac
Booo.
so when we say we gon crush yall, best believe we aint a group of liars
shit, i'll start by buryin this bitch in debris, when i set the roof on Fire
Damn, nice closer.
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Fire aka Nikkelz-
You must be retarted because common knowledge isnt in ya mind
How the fuck we gonna battle and u aint master the art of the frontlines
Weak..
Please, Dont have any misconceptions im more than a Pure Performance chick
Unxtactic, you couldnt come hard if you was having ruff sex on a cinder brick
Sex line? Its not even funny either.. 'cum hard' lines.. *sigh*
Look I got a dildo flow so get prepared to have ur ass lyrically raped
U the type to send LLoyd Banks a video asking to be on the next porn tape
Lyrically raped.. thats an e-threat, not a punch.. overall concept was bad..
So fuck all that Critical Combination nonsense cause ur crew is the worst
Yall bitches couldnt have hot flows if yall was takin a piss with genital warts
Another sex line.
As far as yourself...I think u need to put the mic away, and give it a rest
Cuz no one wants to hear u, why do u think ur audience is kids that deaf
If he did audio, might be decent.. but no.
So let me sum up this battle incase you couldnt registered my prestige
You a weak bitch tryin to compare one punchline to a verbal blitzkrieg
Didnt hit.
Overall, this was a really one sided battle. Nikkelz whole verse, or at least the majority of it was either played, stretched, or had useless sex lines. I dont think I saw one personal from her. Sure, you had his name and said his crew, but did you diss it at all? unXtatic wins for basically outwitting his opponent and having creative and harder hitting punches. No hate to either battler.
Vote / unXtatic
uNX
Had some nice lines... topped Fire's played punches, had better structure/flow and just came overall more wittier, you can make them hit harder in the future, keep practicing, you have potential..
Fire
Saw a lot of Played lines, and some lines were too stretched which fucked up the flow... but I guess you are rusty so It's aight.. but unx Topped you in almost every category.. nothin much else to say..
Vote: unx
^ do u even have enough posts to vote? ANyway, uppin.....
unXtatic-
Fuck a verse, u need a set of converses...no, not ta' stand out
jus 2 keep u from gittin sore feet from chasin, cuz ya luck jus ran out
thats iiiight..... prety good
i dont even got the urge to try hard on u, i havent felt the demand
cuz u dont even hold enough heat.....ta' let M&Ms melt in ya hand
thats iiiiight... prety good
this battle's one-sided n too predicatable----i wouldn't call it tense
u neva clever, funny how ya own douche exceeds u in common scents
thats iiight..
Critical Combitnation, yall aint close to (h)ours......like quarter till
forget size n strength...
...yall rely on Pure Performance, so u always come up short, fa'real
ya lost me there...
Coulda done something with quarter line.. compared it to her Nikkelz name or something.. but ender was weak.
fuck all ya shit talk, dont gimme that.......ya team is really wack
n lez face it, ya 'flow' would'nt be threatnin if u was a hemophiliac
Booo.
so when we say we gon crush yall, best believe we aint a group of liars
shit, i'll start by buryin this bitch in debris, when i set the roof on Fire
Damn, nice closer.
^ heh closer wasnt so hot
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Fire aka Nikkelz-
You must be retarted because common knowledge isnt in ya mind
How the fuck we gonna battle and u aint master the art of the frontlines
heh thats pretty weak yo..
Please, Dont have any misconceptions im more than a Pure Performance chick
Unxtactic, you couldnt come hard if you was having ruff sex on a cinder brick
heh.. i dunno.. alright i gues...
Look I got a dildo flow so get prepared to have ur ass lyrically raped
U the type to send LLoyd Banks a video asking to be on the next porn tape
uhmm.. =\
So fuck all that Critical Combination nonsense cause ur crew is the worst
Yall bitches couldnt have hot flows if yall was takin a piss with genital warts
thats dirty.
As far as yourself...I think u need to put the mic away, and give it a rest
Cuz no one wants to hear u, why do u think ur audience is kids that deaf
iight,... prety good
So let me sum up this battle incase you couldnt registered my prestige
You a weak bitch tryin to compare one punchline to a verbal blitzkrieg
iight... prety good
Overall, this was a close battle. both verses, or at least the majority of it was either played, stretched, or had useless sex lines. I dont think I saw one personal from her. Sure, you had his name and said his crew, but did you diss it at all? Fire wins for basically outwitting his opponent and having creative and harder hitting punches. No hate to either battler.
Vote / Fire
nice battle guys real tight
Unxtactic
Fuck a verse, u need a set of converses...no, not ta' stand out
jus 2 keep u from gittin sore feet from chasin, cuz ya luck jus ran out
not bad
i dont even got the urge to try hard on u, i havent felt the demand
cuz u dont even hold enough heat.....ta' let M&Ms melt in ya hand
v nice
this battle's one-sided n too predicatable----i wouldn't call it tense
u neva clever, funny how ya own douche exceeds u in common scents
ok
Critical Combitnation, yall aint close to (h)ours......like quarter till
forget size n strength...
...yall rely on Pure Performance, so u always come up short, fa'real
wtf
fuck all ya shit talk, dont gimme that.......ya team is really wack
n lez face it, ya 'flow' would'nt be threatnin if u was a hemophiliac
nope
so when we say we gon crush yall, best believe we aint a group of liars
shit, i'll start by buryin this bitch in debris, when i set the roof on Fire
nice !!
fire
You must be retarted because common knowledge isnt in ya mind
How the fuck we gonna battle and u aint master the art of the frontlines
good
Please, Dont have any misconceptions im more than a Pure Performance chick
Unxtactic, you couldnt come hard if you was having ruff sex on a cinder brick
lol ok
Look I got a dildo flow so get prepared to have ur ass lyrically raped
U the type to send LLoyd Banks a video asking to be on the next porn tape
lol nice
So fuck all that Critical Combination nonsense cause ur crew is the worst
Yall bitches couldnt have hot flows if yall was takin a piss with genital warts
umm nope
As far as yourself...I think u need to put the mic away, and give it a rest
Cuz no one wants to hear u, why do u think ur audience is kids that deaf
ok
So let me sum up this battle incase you couldnt registered my prestige
You a weak bitch tryin to compare one punchline to a verbal blitzkrieg
v nice
aight nice battle yall but fire took this she had betta cumbaks n word play plus sum good punches
xnatic yer i was feelin ur flow n u had sum nice punches but i didnt get all of it
so no hate guys but i voted for nikklez
honestly hafta say im dissapointed in fire.... weak verse...
xtatic .... decent concepts, some predictable shit... but still some decent punches..
fire ur punches were that great, some lines were ok, but nuthin special, flow was a bit off, shit was a bit stretched, get back into the thick of things and practice.
vote - xtatic. better overall verse.