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3-0 = KO.
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10 Lines
Within 30 mins of check
Normal shit
3-0 = KO.
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ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
*He joined in September, n "blown up" as in 9/11..
**Nameplay n his signature says ". Sharp Thoughts ."..
***Both his name and sig quote have the same blue glow..
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Uppin #1........................................^^
2nd............................................... ..........
Effect...
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
weak opener.
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
heh.
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
ha.
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
lol...weird, i like it though
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
ok.
Talksick...
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
bad setup, blah punch
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
ok attempt, nah
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
played but i still like this.
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
ok. could of been better.
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
weak.
Effect wins this pretty easy he came more consistent and harder
with his punches and more creative as well, i liked that fly line...lol
pretty creative i think and a few other that i liked as well....
as for Talksick avoid using all of these "-*' " and dont explain your
punches nor personals, people arnt stupid, if they dont get it then
its there fault, you had some ok attempts at some good lines
and some nice concepts but work on wording your punches better
and coming up with better setups, in others words take some more time
to think i guess or see some examples of what is expected.
V/ Effect
Aiight...
Judge...
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
Not feeling this, weak opener
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
Aight, good punch/personal
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
lol Aight
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
Lovin this, nice creative n everything, best punch of battle
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
Not too sure on this, aight i guess, coo closure.
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Talksick...
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
Whack opener, seriously, self glorification is whack
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
Aight personal n punch
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
Same as opener
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
Not feelin
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--
Aight personal n punch, coo closure.
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Aight, Effect came pretty good and consistent in this, i aint too sure on his opener/closure but thats cuz of wording mainly. The fly line was fuckin beautiful man, creative as fuck. Talksick, u gotta stop ur self glorification cuz u got some good concepts there.
Vvote - Judge.
Word.
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ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
decent..
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
garbage...
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
garbage...
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
garbage...
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
meh...
talk sick
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
garbage..using fucking concepts from 2001..pitiful..get over it!
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
garbage...
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
garbage...
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
haha..nice.
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
decent...
MeH ..giving this to talk sick .. he had good lines...both weak though.
vote = talk sick
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effect---your verse was ok man..i think i have seen you come alot harder...your flow was good..and your structure was pretty even all the way threw...umm...your personals and punches were ok...i think you could have came alot harder with them though
talk-your shit was pretty descent...your flow was good..and your structure was built nicely...your punches and personals..came alot stronger then effects...and overall..you did a better job stayin more direct with your wording
v/talk...
please return the favor..and hit up the battle in my sig
I'm going with Talksick here...
His font is gayer than he claims Effect's is...
But his punches were sharper.
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
That's all I vibed with from Effect's verse.
Talk hit em personally, alot...
While Effect's personals were about dude's grandmother...WTF?
And some weak nameplay.
I think Talk's opener, the "sharp thoughts" and the closer took this.
They were personal, clever, and they hit cleanly.
"modems" and "stars" are played to fuckin death.
Talksick wins.
Peace
*breaks judge's aim voting ring with a real vote*
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
--nope
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
--blah
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
--nah
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
--lol
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
--nah
Talk..
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
--nah
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
--hmmm
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
--played
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
--lol
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'
--decent
talk edged this... judge came rubbish.
talk.. addapt to RB style.
v/Talk
*Breaks to following ring down*
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
--cool
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
--nah
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
--ok
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
--lol
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
--not bad
not great verse...but it was aight
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
---nah played
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
--cool
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
--nah
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
--first line PLAYED..second ok
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'-
--ok
Judge won this as his one line made me laugh...talk had played lines and just oks
vote judge
Close battle
Effect- You had an ok verse, some of your punches came played but yet creative, maybe you didnt rate this kid i dont know but ive seen better, felt this was good though "youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit"..as for eveything else as i expected short sharp lines..flow was decent
Talk- You also had an orite verse...but some of your punches were played as fuck.and some were creative but i wasnt feeling them as much as i did effects unfortunatly, flow was ok..structure was nicely laid out also
It was close but..
V/ Effect..better punches and personals!
judge won easily.. don't be stupid.
vote effect..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
blah, seen this a million times.. drop the * and teh ''[/b]
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
ok
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
seen this type of shit before
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
no
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
decent
*He joined in September, n "blown up" as in 9/11..
**Nameplay n his signature says ". Sharp Thoughts ."..
***Both his name and sig quote have the same blue glow..
we get it, you dont need to explain
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
decent
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
ok
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
lol.. cool
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
lol.. ok
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
decent
overall - talk came played.. nothing really hit, only his last bar.. effect came pretty decent, some good shit that made me laugh, so he got this with harder punches..
V/ Effect
Bump.
Uppin #2........................................^^
effect
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
weak
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
not bad
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
weak
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
lol, nice
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
weak wording
talksick
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
weak
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
good
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
i seen the concept a few times so played
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
nah, i didnt like this
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
not bad, setup spolied it
vote-effect
only 2 decent bars of each fella here, and effect were slightly better.
hit this up with a vote plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150583