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Due whenever you want...
House Rules...
WERDIZZLE!
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16 lines...
Due whenever you want...
House Rules...
WERDIZZLE!
Good luck.
oh yes, and you spit first..... yeah. so spit first because you called me out.
aight man u got it, but theres 1 thing wrong, those hommies that tellin me im gonn get killed or merked, they betta not vote. all experienced rappaz i battle have beatten me cause or popularity. ny ways no h8 and good luck to u to.
ey still ill do this shit later cause im goin out. ill get back soon
yeh this guy named still remain, cum up wit blah rhymes, feel the pain
i aint no newb like the ones u challenge, so here u got game
i see the mondfather in ur sig, looks like a pig, meta for that clock
imma beat ur ass back in time, like u left alone wit no votin flock...
yeh i noe ur wack, u born wit that wackness naturally, try to refrain
hard to explain, give u a meta, my punches stay wit u 4eva, like a stane
hittin u all ova, heavy drops, the power to drop a buildin wit a crane
im killin ur style, droppin ur file, yeh u gone insane in tha membrane
without the trigga in the gun, u got nothin, u aint noe how to kill
cause i dropped u, the count as many times as the porn calls on ya phone bill
ur face gettin teary, body weary, defeat experience mayne u noe the drill
yet u in shock, still unbelieved, come on man u ova, dnt remain still
look at this herb, defenceless, yeh we all noe u from merk unit, under ur nik
but imma eat u like the rest, more times then uve had the prick
cry u a river bitch, more like pull out ur liver, yeh a betta horror flick
quit bitchin around, post urself on lost and found, u losty bimbo chick
this for the peeps that neva got sum of my rap...
(cry u a riva line was cause of the text under his sig)
(used metas wit clock, cause take him bak in time where there wasnt his m8s on this site)
(meta wit my punches,, syain dat it stays in his memory like a stane)
hurry up, its been a day!!
I hate to rip kids, but here i gotta do it again
Cuz son.. i conqured light weight before i was 10
& shit.. i just did it again, theres another mc so far -
that i can add to my list of cats taken out wit 2 bars
lmao ass off son, ya shit is just pathetic, its done
cuz i have to be daughtering ya ass, ya fit to be sonned
its all filler, i aint even gon waste lines on you kid
^ yup, that lines a filler too.. cuz this dudes shit
sorry i choose to go 16, my part its a bad mistake
cuz now i gotta sit here, and 16 lines ive just waste
blah blah blah.. ya not even worth new lines dude
^^ yup..son...................that ones recycled too
i aint even give a fuck anymore, fuck it, im known
Q: whys my whole verse filler
A: Cuz my closer can eat you alone
im a killer u know, wrecking this net fag, hes soft man
and damn.. no wonder rbs slowley dying of broadband
feel free to vote people..... yeah UP #1............
u just put words in ur rap jus to rhyme haha and ur callin me shit, and u even admittin to have recycled lines in ur verse.. u lost this unless u got too many friends on rb.
lol yep.,. you totally merked me man.. i should just back down
yeh u should but instead let the voters decide on this...........
lol... wow, look at your structure compared to mine, look at your punches compared to mine, look at your verse compared to mine, you suck.
stop bitchin u faggot. u noe ur shit is wack and ur spit waz crap so stop sayin shit to get votes and for the last time LET THE PPL DECIDE!!!
im not, people see your name and decide not to vote...
Come On!!! Up This Crap And Vote Godd!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow.. this is stupid, why is no one voting on this battle?
fuk y isnt ny1 votin, this is pathetic, uppin numba1....
vote: still remain
he got u cause he admitted to recycling lines and not wasting time on you, meaning if he spent more time he would of got you real good, he said ur not a challenge without saying it.
still remain was more creative.
still_remain:
k man you took this with ease your stucture...perfect, nice dope punches took it to him his verse was played straight up lol...your verse wasent that ahlf bad you had a lil vocabulary could try and work on vocab...then you would be dope but ive collab with you on rv so i know you know how to use vocab and ya w/e but you took this battle man you had a tigth verse....keep it up and you might be one of the best one day...:)jk that will be me the best...:)
killa_instinked:
um that was weak lol your punches are hella weak and your vocab you have none dawg...i suggest you work on that or dont rap period cuz your hella weak(no hate) um your stucture was also weak um even fix dat shit up...and um your flow was a lil to... just voting dont get mad.. like i usto..
VOTE: Still Remain
return the favour in my battle verse leivetto beaver links in the sig aight 1
Upping This Because Im Tired Of Not Seeing The Win!
Grrr Uuppppp Number 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeh this guy named still remain, cum up wit blah rhymes, feel the pain
i aint no newb like the ones u challenge, so here u got game
-weak and to strechted
i see the mondfather in ur sig, looks like a pig, meta for that clock
imma beat ur ass back in time, like u left alone wit no votin flock...
-no
yeh i noe ur wack, u born wit that wackness naturally, try to refrain
hard to explain, give u a meta, my punches stay wit u 4eva, like a stane
-um no, decent multies, by the way, use scout on ur stains so they come out if its grease or oil, lol
hittin u all ova, heavy drops, the power to drop a buildin wit a crane
im killin ur style, droppin ur file, yeh u gone insane in tha membrane
-wack
without the trigga in the gun, u got nothin, u aint noe how to kill
cause i dropped u, the count as many times as the porn calls on ya phone bill
-decent but tooooo stretched
ur face gettin teary, body weary, defeat experience mayne u noe the drill
yet u in shock, still unbelieved, come on man u ova, dnt remain still
-decent personal, but the structure fukked it up
look at this herb, defenceless, yeh we all noe u from merk unit, under ur nik
but imma eat u like the rest, more times then uve had the prick
-weak
cry u a river bitch, more like pull out ur liver, yeh a betta horror flick
quit bitchin around, post urself on lost and found, u losty bimbo chick
-weak as fuck closin
I hate to rip kids, but here i gotta do it again
Cuz son.. i conqured light weight before i was 10
-ok
& shit.. i just did it again, theres another mc so far -
that i can add to my list of cats taken out wit 2 bars
-ok
lmao ass off son, ya shit is just pathetic, its done
cuz i have to be daughtering ya ass, ya fit to be sonned
-ok
its all filler, i aint even gon waste lines on you kid
^ yup, that lines a filler too.. cuz this dudes shit
-lol, but kinda weak
sorry i choose to go 16, my part its a bad mistake
cuz now i gotta sit here, and 16 lines ive just waste
-worded kinda badly, made it weak, coulda been funny
blah blah blah.. ya not even worth new lines dude
^^ yup..son...................that ones recycled too
-lol, funny
i aint even give a fuck anymore, fuck it, im known
Q: whys my whole verse filler
A: Cuz my closer can eat you alone
-decent
im a killer u know, wrecking this net fag, hes soft man
and damn.. no wonder rbs slowley dying of broadband
-pretty good closer
Vote: Still Remain, for better punches and wittier verse. Instinct verse had multies..... and that was it, all ur bars were to stretched which fukked up the structure and flow of it, and ur punches were weak and indirect, plus no personals. Stll remain had go flow and structure, and had comic relief, it wasnt that great a verse, but it was obvious he didnt feel he needed to come strong to win it, and he didnt.
Killa-Your whole verse was like one big stretched rhyme. Try to shortin it up and make a few words hit rather than miss wit a paragraph LOL. Yo had a couple decent punches but is hard to give you credit cuz you stretched it. Maybe it was so stretched cuz you focused on multis too much. Try to focus more on setting up and delievering punches!!!!
Still-On your end it was one sided I mean you killed him. The only thing he had better than you was multis. You had better structure, punches, personals, well better everything. Your closer was real nice and you set up your whole verse to kill'em wit that closer that was nice!!!
v/ Still_Remain for better overall verse.....
Yo better structure all around and better punches for Still...Killa had a lot of multies and REAL bad structure dawg...if u work on your structure and punches u will be much better and I liked your whole verse. But vote goes to Still
Keep ELEVATIN
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v/ Still_Remain
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
vote still remain
he had witty lines,good punches,and some dope personals,the vocab was ok,aswell was the structure and flow.....
KI
your verse was ass buddy,u had ok crappy flow iguees,ur structure was ummm ehhhhh iguess i dunno,u had basic lines from what i read and shit...
but overalll still remain ripped this kid easily with overall wittieness,and better flow,punches,structure and attempt at personals
v/still_remain
yeh this guy named still remain, cum up wit blah rhymes, feel the pain
i aint no newb like the ones u challenge, so here u got game
no good
i see the mondfather in ur sig, looks like a pig, meta for that clock
imma beat ur ass back in time, like u left alone wit no votin flock...
haha.....WHACK
yeh i noe ur wack, u born wit that wackness naturally, try to refrain
hard to explain, give u a meta, my punches stay wit u 4eva, like a stane
its STAIN
hittin u all ova, heavy drops, the power to drop a buildin wit a crane
im killin ur style, droppin ur file, yeh u gone insane in tha membrane
just cause it rhymes doesnt mean youre gonna win the battle
without the trigga in the gun, u got nothin, u aint noe how to kill
cause i dropped u, the count as many times as the porn calls on ya phone bill
nice try.....
ur face gettin teary, body weary, defeat experience mayne u noe the drill
yet u in shock, still unbelieved, come on man u ova, dnt remain still
not bad
look at this herb, defenceless, yeh we all noe u from merk unit, under ur nik
but imma eat u like the rest, more times then uve had the prick
juvenile.....up your game
cry u a river bitch, more like pull out ur liver, yeh a betta horror flick
quit bitchin around, post urself on lost and found, u losty bimbo chick
no...no.....nooooo
I hate to rip kids, but here i gotta do it again
Cuz son.. i conqured light weight before i was 10
decent, but RB.com wasnt here MAN
& shit.. i just did it again, theres another mc so far -
that i can add to my list of cats taken out wit 2 bars
haha good
lmao ass off son, ya shit is just pathetic, its done
cuz i have to be daughtering ya ass, ya fit to be sonned
ok
its all filler, i aint even gon waste lines on you kid
^ yup, that lines a filler too.. cuz this dudes shit
i dont blame you
sorry i choose to go 16, my part its a bad mistake
cuz now i gotta sit here, and 16 lines ive just waste
ur lucky killa didnt drop at least 2 good lines HA
blah blah blah.. ya not even worth new lines dude
^^ yup..son...................that ones recycled too
killa instinct feel bad that ur losing to filler
i aint even give a fuck anymore, fuck it, im known
Q: whys my whole verse filler
A: Cuz my closer can eat you alone
kek
im a killer u know, wrecking this net fag, hes soft man
and damn.. no wonder rbs slowley dying of broadband
fatality.....and 'killa instinct' doesnt even have those
VOTE STILL_REMAIN, Better punches, not generic. Killa, up ur game, u had some lines that COULDVE work had they not been played by every other new kid on this website. Be creative, use ideas that u havent seen, get out of the ordinary boat.
ill poll soon when I got 100 POSTS
v/ still_remain
still-wordplay-nice had some complexity in punches/punches-strong well aimed at em/personals-none to my knowledge maybe 1 tho/flow-smooth/overall-7/10
Killa-wordplay-basic/punches-weak were kinda forced/personals-none that were new kinda played/flow-smooth but then again rocky on some/overall-4/10