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Blind spit
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House rules
10-15 lines
Blind spit
150 post to vote
ok, so how long do we have until, and whos postin first, im ready whenever u are, so whatever else that has to be done before we can battle lemme kno, or ifwe can jus go ahead ill start writin
blind spit means you have to spit with out looking at the other guy verse so any one goes first and its due by 12:00 A.M.
iiiight, then its agreed, ill have mine up within the next hour, good luck.
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up//
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks// (got traded)
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’// (math)
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’
Theres mine, welp, now its on u player, good luck, and may the best man win.
chewy that was aight i didnt get a couple of the lines but other than that it was straight let me see some of ur om after ur post ur battle agaisnt me
Your head is to big the way that fitted don't fit on you right
if your future was bright the rap game would be a ugly sight
chewy like a granola bar but his verse i'm not feeding on
i said a blind spit he ask who spits first now i know i won
last times he packed something good was in his lunches
knocked out more then roy jones next time throw punches
only time i'll eate were he's from cause i like buffalo wings
don't come to bx cause i got a lot of shooters like the kings
only time he'll see a big ass like that when he looks at his sig
ya face is big you should be embarrass cause you look like a pig
schooling him from the ny then send him back to Chesapeake, VA
stay out the way your something everybody hates like plane delays
heres the break down
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up//
(like it it creative)
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//
(ok but weak)
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks// (got traded)
( alright maybe could have been worded better)
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’// (math)
(those were hot )
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’
(fell off should have ended it with a stong ending)
now
Your head is to big the way that fitted don't fit on you right
if your future was bright the rap game would be a ugly sight
(2nd line was good but could have had a better set up)
chewy like a granola bar but his verse i'm not feeding on
i said a blind spit he ask who spits first now i know i won
(pretty good sayin that he dont know what a blind spit is)
last times he packed something good was in his lunches
knocked out more then roy jones next time throw punches
(hottness)
only time i'll eate were he's from cause i like buffalo wings
don't come to bx cause i got a lot of shooters like the kings
(sounded too much like banks when he said ``i got more forign shooters than the sacramento kings)
only time he'll see a big ass like that when he looks at his sig
ya face is big you should be embarrass cause you look like a pig
(second line was a lil too pree school for me)
schooling him from the ny then send him back to Chesapeake, VA
stay out the way your something everybody hates like plane delays
(alright)
over all my vote would go to chewy i think he was more creative
sorry i tried to vote .. im not allowed to vote :-(
Its All Good Player, Can We Get Some Votes Here, Uppin
This is ridiculous, we've both voted in other peoples battles but are still gettin slept on. WTF this shit is gay
Vote - Boogie
Reason:
Harder punches and pretty much a better overall verse....he had good consistency and some decent concepts.....Chewy didn't have much for punches...most of it seemed to be like statements....
nono Joker, ur suspose to be a damn mod, man if you look Chewy took this because a wittier verse always takes a battle, boogies verse had 1 or 2 good lines but the rest was robetession(sleeper). So in conclusion
V/Chewy
I guess were 1-1 since the other dudes vote doesnt count, uppin #2
chewy only poll votes count sorry not my rules site rules. uppin
Chea...Aiight...
Chewy...
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up//
Wasnt feelin, weak opener
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//
Aiight personal n punch
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks//
Aight
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
Played
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//
Lol aiight
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’//
Aiight again
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’
Chea, coo closure.
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Boogie...
Your head is to big the way that fitted don't fit on you right
if your future was bright the rap game would be a ugly sight
Aiight opener...
chewy like a granola bar but his verse i'm not feeding on
i said a blind spit he ask who spits first now i know i won
Nah, aint feelin
last times he packed something good was in his lunches
knocked out more then roy jones next time throw punches
Aiight
only time i'll eate were he's from cause i like buffalo wings
don't come to bx cause i got a lot of shooters like the kings
Nah, again its like self glorification
only time he'll see a big ass like that when he looks at his sig
ya face is big you should be embarrass cause you look like a pig
How old is we? weak punch n personal
schooling him from the ny then send him back to Chesapeake, VA
stay out the way your something everybody hates like plane delays
Aiight, coo closure.
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Aight first off, Chewy drop da "//" at end of ur lines. Makes it newbish. Other then that, nice verse saw some good punches in there. Boogie, i liked some of ur concepts in there but mostly was talkin bout u or weak punchin, gotta elevate on that.
Vote - Chewy.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
Return favor plz. Link b in sig yo. Thanks.
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vote boog
chewy had a real steched bars
also his consistency was wacjk
to be honest one good punch
then none for ages..set ups
were better but boog braught
concepts and more consistency
this was real close but id have to
go for boog overall nice guys..
both elavateing...........
MAKE sureyou hit this man i took the time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147878
thanks.
Iiiight player, ur up 2-1, dayum man, these votes a hard to come by, it take forever for each one, but w/e keep votin uppin#3
Jus gotta comment on thisQuote:
Originally Posted by Effect
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up// - Punch
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//-Personal
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks//-Punch
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//- Punch
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//-Punch
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’// -Punch
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’-personal
How did i lack consistency? The only lines that werent punches were set ups for em. And all my bars were the same length, so if u read it right it wouldnt appear stretched, except for 1 line, but w/e :thumbup:
If most bars wasn't worded right so it sounded wack to them and when he said you lack consistency you didnt keep throwing hard hitting punches they just got weak.
Bruce you said these were hott
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
lmao gay lines and sex lines are played ass hell
i thought that boogie also took this because i liked his verse more...
his punches were a lot more on target and struck with perfection, good job to the both of you but boogie excelled in that area and in structure ... i dislike your structure a lot Chewy.. so good job to the both of you but i think that Boogie took this due to his punches and structure..
v/Boogie.
uppin for more votes lets go people lets go.......
Chewy...
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up//
dont like it...and its played
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//
nope
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks// (got traded)
no.
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
played..sucks
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//
lol...punch could of been better...decent
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’// (math)
dont like it to much..also could of been better
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’
punch i guess was ok..as well could of been better =|
Boogie...
Your head is to big the way that fitted don't fit on you right
if your future was bright the rap game would be a ugly sight
better then chewy's opener
chewy like a granola bar but his verse i'm not feeding on
i said a blind spit he ask who spits first now i know i won
ok
last times he packed something good was in his lunches
knocked out more then roy jones next time throw punches
lol punch was decent...setup is played
only time i'll eate were he's from cause i like buffalo wings
don't come to bx cause i got a lot of shooters like the kings
no.
only time he'll see a big ass like that when he looks at his sig
ya face is big you should be embarrass cause you look like a pig
no. but his sig is annoying
schooling him from the ny then send him back to Chesapeake, VA
stay out the way your something everybody hates like plane delays
ok.
i see boogie winning this by far...chewy had some nice attempts at nice lines
but failed cause the wording was horrible...try wording your punches better
chewy and take some more time to think of better setups. boogie wins for
a better verse and better harder hitting punches..some played setups
and punches as well but less then chewy's... ohh and get rid of the "//"
at the end of your verse it doest help and its pointless.
get rid of your sig chewy...its annoying and im getting sick of lookin
at your head.
V/ Boogie
Chewy...
Yo this nigga chewy’s ahead of the game u playin catch up//
Cause the only tight lines ur mind gets is from ur edge up//
..........played to the max
Im convinced that boogie’s style is obsolete and he spits absurdly//
Cause boogie aint been a popular style since in the thirties.//
.........nah not liking it
My lyrics is like bullets and my brain is the gun that will pop//
Bars leave u tryna ball wit ‘A. Walker’ like the Atlanta Hawks// (got traded)
.....okay
He thinks hes nice but his faggot ‘ass is so gased up’//
That his boyfriends sugar ‘tank fills’ everytime he gets ass fucked//
.........nope sorry
You lost this one youngin, try again when u get a bit bigga//
But then u’ll have to ‘L’s in front ya name like that ‘Cool J’ nigga//
.......it was okay byfar your best
U from the Bronx, the orgin of rap, so u should be much sicka//
But ur a rap ‘0’ so theres no way u stack ‘Significant figures’// (math)
.........needs better wording
U think u nice, but ur lame, so ur style I gotta knock it.”//
Your dancing from ‘lyrical shots’, I guess ur the ‘Boogie down Bronx kid’
......ight closer
Boogie...
Your head is to big the way that fitted don't fit on you right
if your future was bright the rap game would be a ugly sight
.........ha opener
chewy like a granola bar but his verse i'm not feeding on
i said a blind spit he ask who spits first now i know i won
..........ight
last times he packed something good was in his lunches
knocked out more then roy jones next time throw punches
.........played but okay
only time i'll eate were he's from cause i like buffalo wings
don't come to bx cause i got a lot of shooters like the kings
........nah
only time he'll see a big ass like that when he looks at his sig
ya face is big you should be embarrass cause you look like a pig
...........lmao a pig
schooling him from the ny then send him back to Chesapeake, VA
stay out the way your something everybody hates like plane delays
.....ight closer
vote.........Boog
just came harder and less played