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you spit first i will follow
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good luck
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When I'm holdin snubb nose I'm throwin bullets out tha nostril
to hit cha mid sectons and fold you like a taco
you can read this but afterwards it hard to follow
so expect to choke on ya lyrics u already can't swollow
so don't run from battle ain't no takin routes
Don't make me carry u in a brown bag like carry out
and its scary how
you can't make a sweet verse
I was born a gangsta man I'm in tha streets first
Its tha hurst
A cuz check out that battle wit me and Broken Skrollz
Tell me what you think
Better speed up the mind cause I can see you ain't thinking quick
Trying to write a diss, you went overboard like sailors on sinking ships
I really dont need 20 min to rip you your wack ill just do it in Eleven
Commiting suicide is the closest yall ever get to a one eight seven
Endeavor In Acts Of Violence At 187s Expense, Im Envadin Streets
To State Defeat Of A Man Pretending Tightness Like Braided Weaves
Ever So Clever In Pullin Ya Cards,Its Evident,I see Dull In Ya Bars
This Fags Rhymes Is Stinking and Guess Why One Cause Urine A Jar
uppin 1 leave links
uppin 2 leave links
uppin 3
When I'm holdin snubb nose I'm throwin bullets out tha nostril
to hit cha mid sectons and fold you like a taco
- kinda of weak start
you can read this but afterwards it hard to follow
so expect to choke on ya lyrics u already can't swollow
-weak punch
so don't run from battle ain't no takin routes
Don't make me carry u in a brown bag like carry out
-Wack, that didnt even rhyme.... at all
and its scary how
you can't make a sweet verse
I was born a gangsta man I'm in tha streets first
Its tha hurst
- Weak closer, self glorification doesnt win battles, punches, and personals do
Better speed up the mind cause I can see you ain't thinking quick
Trying to write a diss, you went overboard like sailors on sinking ships
-decent punch decent start
I really dont need 20 min to rip you your wack ill just do it in Eleven
Commiting suicide is the closest yall ever get to a one eight seven
-decent personal
Endeavor In Acts Of Violence At 187s Expense, Im Envadin Streets
To State Defeat Of A Man Pretending Tightness Like Braided Weaves
- lol iiight
Ever So Clever In Pullin Ya Cards,Its Evident,I see Dull In Ya Bars
This Fags Rhymes Is Stinking and Guess Why One Cause Urine A Jar
-Kinda of a weak closer
VOTE: CORLEONE, had more punches and a personal, both werent that great but 187 verse was worse
Oh yea, return the favor,i have to battles that need to be voted on, and ive looked out for ya so please do the same
ay tim toke this shit for real but i cant vote will yall hit my battle with x-on up thanks ill vote when i can
My vote goes to Tim C. because his punches were better and his opponent had no rhyme style and his punches were more toward a simple-minded gangsta type shit. Wait, does my vote count yet? :huh:
Anyhoo, go vote in my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148306
Imperial1
vote to tim cause he had harder punches personal and his structure was good 2.. good battle by both..
return the favor by votin in mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148492
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148475
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147822
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148288
one 8t seven:
When I'm holdin snubb nose I'm throwin bullets out tha nostril
to hit cha mid sectons and fold you like a taco
weak opener
you can read this but afterwards it hard to follow
so expect to choke on ya lyrics u already can't swollow
no
so don't run from battle ain't no takin routes
Don't make me carry u in a brown bag like carry out
lol funny but weak
and its scary how
you can't make a sweet verse
I was born a gangsta man I'm in tha streets first
Its tha hurst
weak closer
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Tim Corleone:
Better speed up the mind cause I can see you ain't thinking quick
Trying to write a diss, you went overboard like sailors on sinking ships
lol nice opener
I really dont need 20 min to rip you your wack ill just do it in Eleven
Commiting suicide is the closest yall ever get to a one eight seven
ok
Endeavor In Acts Of Violence At 187s Expense, Im Envadin Streets
To State Defeat Of A Man Pretending Tightness Like Braided Weaves
lol ok
Ever So Clever In Pullin Ya Cards,Its Evident,I see Dull In Ya Bars
This Fags Rhymes Is Stinking and Guess Why One Cause Urine A Jar
decent closer
Vote Tim better all around verse
tim killed him with the punches tim won this by far
yo i forgot to ask can ya'll return the favor thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148288
Cheya...
187...
When I'm holdin snubb nose I'm throwin bullets out tha nostril
to hit cha mid sectons and fold you like a taco
Aight gangsta shit, sorta thing i would spit in a FREE, this aint a diss tho weak opener
you can read this but afterwards it hard to follow
so expect to choke on ya lyrics u already can't swollow
First line "cant follow" damn str8, da fuck? this was weak
so don't run from battle ain't no takin routes
Don't make me carry u in a brown bag like carry out
and its scary how
No
you can't make a sweet verse
I was born a gangsta man I'm in tha streets first
Its tha hurst
Who cares where u was at son? Whack closure.
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Timmy...
Better speed up the mind cause I can see you ain't thinking quick
Trying to write a diss, you went overboard like sailors on sinking ships
Played concept, but hes already dead aiight opener...
I really dont need 20 min to rip you your wack ill just do it in Eleven
Commiting suicide is the closest yall ever get to a one eight seven
Lol, aiight
Endeavor In Acts Of Violence At 187s Expense, Im Envadin Streets
To State Defeat Of A Man Pretending Tightness Like Braided Weaves
Chea, feelin, is coo
Ever So Clever In Pullin Ya Cards,Its Evident,I see Dull In Ya Bars
This Fags Rhymes Is Stinking and Guess Why One Cause Urine A Jar
Nnice, i caught what u meant on that, nice closure.
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Aight, 187 u gotta elevate ur flow structure personals and punching. Read some vets battles, u know shit like that, and drop the "/" at end of ur bars. Timmy, u did all u needed to in that verse.
Vote - Tim.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
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uppin 4 chewy you didnt poll oh well leave links and ill get on them asap
uppin 5 one more vote leave link
i contacted the other dude and he said since he doesnt post here anymore that he would let me vote...
i thought that Tim took this because the other dudes structure... wow... terrible, so good job to the both but the structure.. whew....
but anyway, also Tims punches just kicked the other dudes ass, his punches were so unwitty that it was like not funny to laugh at all, just sad, but still good job to the both but Tim took this due to Punches and Structural differences.
V/ Tim Coreleone....
Vote DQ - TR
Still Remain's vote was DQ'ed
I really dont need 20 min to rip you your wack ill just do it in Eleven
Commiting suicide is the closest yall ever get to a one eight seven
Endeavor In Acts Of Violence At 187s Expense, Im Envadin Streets
To State Defeat Of A Man Pretending Tightness Like Braided Weaves
That's the best Tim dropped and it was enough to top 187 because 187 decided, for some reason, not to diss his opponent.
187 came with minor threats and self prop but I couldn't find a single insult.
Insults, even if they're kinda tame like Tim's, to me, always beat the self prop and threats. Besides, if you wanna get particular, I could also minus points from 187 on structure...some of his shit was a short as 3-4 words...other lines much longer...
If there'd been any kinda pattern or flow to it, it'd be ok, but...eh!
Tim's was better all around.
Peace