Urban Faces.

Urban Faces.

Visited London in the week and wrote
this whilst i was there..think deeper.

As a journey begins, within an urban creation
each break in the clouds..
..envisions a plain stealing a hole generation
a place where patience is un heard of, and space not an option
where peace and quite, is replaced by the opposite adoption
where movement flows constant, no hesitating to think
resulting in lives being changed, within a reaction to blink
everything linked, conscience of surroundings..awaiting the enemy's
each corner more twisting, fulfilled with more and more memory's
no chemistry, by day the city's shining, blinding with potential
but as the shadows creep upon us, it seems negative is essential
lives aren't confidential, more lies than truth's are spread
there’s no surprise cause word of mouth's heard before it’s said
It’s easy to be lead home to a place where most trends start
but easy to find your trend finished, if you’re not taking part
If you haven’t a heart, then you’re likely to fit rite in
rubbish is never recycled as the city has sold the bin
I’m looking deeper within, now feeling sick with stress
kid’s playgrounds are confined, to combine with homeless
a fucking mess, on the outside we seem satisfied of these places
but realizations a bitch, when we look within the cities faces.

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rite lets go..................

well i thought you captured the fast moving life pretty well there, some interesting lines in there.... the flow was also pretty smooth and good transitions, a well written verse here... i liked it...

where movement flows constant, no hesitating to think
resulting in lives being changed, within a reaction to blink

^^favourite bar... nice man... keep up the good work

thanks man.

bounce.

w00t.

This was cool shit. It flowed seel. The concept wasn't mindblowing but it was cool. This was a pretty decent drop. Keeo doin' you, homie.

thank you my man.

"It flowed seel"
-I don't even remember what I wanted to say there.

"Keeo"
-Should have been 'Keep'.

I always fuck up typing. My bad.

-W1

^^^^lol.....but aye effect, I totally enjoyed that shyt right there, smooth like butter, nice conceptz ta make ya brain work a bit....definitely note worthy 4 sure.....peace!!

nice topic, decent multiples, little work on flow but who doesnt,
thankz for an intelligent piece

word......good replies...thanks alot....

pretty deep man....
you grasped the concept well

didnt know if u were gonna pull it off....but u wrote it well...

gd flow...story tellin was on point

in all...a good drop...keep writin'

pz

thanks man......

pretty nice piece here man...rhyming was done well as well as the emotion..imagry could be worked on...but overall a good drop Effect

thanks man.

up.

last.

Bounce.

yo man this was nice, nothin special but it was comm worthy and it did keep me intreeged to read the whole drop, need to start lookin out for boi right here...

"no chemistry, by day the city's shining, blinding with potential
but as the shadows creep upon us, it seems negative is essential"
tru....
drop me a liine read bonita....

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