Iight U Spit First Bro.....
U Know The Rules From The Bitch Slap
Lets Go, Good Luck
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Iight U Spit First Bro.....
U Know The Rules From The Bitch Slap
Lets Go, Good Luck
your spitting 1st kid....or no battle......spit...
Wtf, I Set It Uo
Fuck It Ill, Spit Man
in bs you said you'd go 1st.............................just pit.....
Check..
He Wants Me To Go First, So He Can Start Feeding
No Matter The Fags Still Up For A Beating
Shouldnt Have Agreed Fag, Now Pay The Consequence
U Just Cant Fuck Wit Me Like I Practice Abstinece
No Need To Throw Hints, Im Making Slanders Direct
Thats Why Batting Me Causes The Losing Effect (his Username)
This Is Just A Quick Spit, I Aint Even Concentrating
But The Only Time Youll Cum Hard Is When Ya Done Ejaculating
It Didnt Have To Be Like This, But I Love To Dominate
Dont Worry, You Can Still Rap Wit Ashley And Mary Kate
Ehhh.... Writers Block
Uppin
Got Another Fuckin No Sho Im Sick Of This Shit
fuk dawg u say u wanna battle and ya leave fuk i h8 it wen bitches do that
shut the fuck up...ive bin busy....ready to get blazed newb,
Writers block..ill agree cuase what the fuck was this
you a gorilla?.fucka sig this is were you post your pics
take a kick son..cuase none of those punches hit
gave him a bannana..but like his verse..came back with shit
thats rite prick..this is a 5 minuit keystyle..its fun
probally beat your alais..im here for that rea-son
better not run your lips..ill be nosey and see you bitch
take the set up of this punch..and quit while ur a head trick
im sick with it...your a newb who acts all thugish
ill recycle my whole shit..to clean up your rubbish.
merked.
1st............................................... .......
wtf bitch....change your sg back...he had shit bout bannanas and gorilla pic...wtf
Aiight...
Tra...
He Wants Me To Go First, So He Can Start Feeding
No Matter The Fags Still Up For A Beating
Weak opener...
Shouldnt Have Agreed Fag, Now Pay The Consequence
U Just Cant Fuck Wit Me Like I Practice Abstinece
Weak but ok
No Need To Throw Hints, Im Making Slanders Direct
Thats Why Batting Me Causes The Losing Effect
Aight personal, weak punch tho
This Is Just A Quick Spit, I Aint Even Concentrating
But The Only Time Youll Cum Hard Is When Ya Done Ejaculating
Played concept like WHOA
It Didnt Have To Be Like This, But I Love To Dominate
Dont Worry, You Can Still Rap Wit Ashley And Mary Kate
Played n weak closure.
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Judge...
Writers block..ill agree cuase what the fuck was this
you a gorilla?.fucka sig this is were you post your pics
Lol dope opener, killed him here
take a kick son..cuase none of those punches hit
gave him a bannana..but like his verse..came back with shit
Weak
thats rite prick..this is a 5 minuit keystyle..its fun
probally beat your alais..im here for that rea-son
Aiight
better not run your lips..ill be nosey and see you bitch
take the set up of this punch..and quit while ur a head trick
Lol, played but aight
im sick with it...your a newb who acts all thugish
ill recycle my whole shit..to clean up your rubbish.
Good closure.
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Tra u came madd weak n played here mayn, was expectin u to come better but we all get writers block so wont criticize u. Effect's opener won this really, madd hard personal n punch n funny too.
Vote - Effect.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
Return favor plz, link b in sig. Thanks.
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thanks.......................bounce............... ..........
4th............................................... ..................
this is where you lost Tra
No Need To Throw Hints, Im Making Slanders Direct
Thats Why Batting Me Causes The Losing Effect (his Username)
This Is Just A Quick Spit, I Aint Even Concentrating
But The Only Time Youll Cum Hard Is When Ya Done Ejaculating
It Didnt Have To Be Like This, But I Love To Dominate
Dont Worry, You Can Still Rap Wit Ashley And Mary Kate
that was meh to the fullest.Cum lines?I mean c'mon...
Effect had better punches nothing fancy but enough to burry Tra
Vote Eff
lil tra =
He Wants Me To Go First, So He Can Start Feeding
No Matter The Fags Still Up For A Beating
ok personal...rubish punch
Shouldnt Have Agreed Fag, Now Pay The Consequence
U Just Cant Fuck Wit Me Like I Practice Abstinece
na, wack
No Need To Throw Hints, Im Making Slanders Direct
Thats Why Batting Me Causes The Losing Effect (his Username)
good personal and punch!
This Is Just A Quick Spit, I Aint Even Concentrating
But The Only Time Youll Cum Hard Is When Ya Done Ejaculating
played!
It Didnt Have To Be Like This, But I Love To Dominate
Dont Worry, You Can Still Rap Wit Ashley And Mary Kate
ummm na!
Effect =
Writers block..ill agree cuase what the fuck was this
you a gorilla?.fucka sig this is were you post your pics
nice!
take a kick son..cuase none of those punches hit
gave him a bannana..but like his verse..came back with shit
lmfao!! nice!!
thats rite prick..this is a 5 minuit keystyle..its fun
probally beat your alais..im here for that rea-son
ok!
better not run your lips..ill be nosey and see you bitch
take the set up of this punch..and quit while ur a head trick
ok
im sick with it...your a newb who acts all thugish
ill recycle my whole shit..to clean up your rubbish.
nice. aint heard that before!
lil tra = not bad..flow was good, also your structure was fine...punches was o for most... you had one nice line but you need to be more consistant! vocab was ok!! not bad!
Effect = good verse - flow was spot on and so was your structure...your punches hit well nearly all the way through...fell of toward the end a little bit, but nothing majour! vocab was ok! wel dun!
Vote = effect gets this due to better punches....thats the only reason really they were just alot stronger than lil tra's!! good battle both!!
pz
Lil Tra:
He Wants Me To Go First, So He Can Start Feeding
No Matter The Fags Still Up For A Beating
weak opener
Shouldnt Have Agreed Fag, Now Pay The Consequence
U Just Cant Fuck Wit Me Like I Practice Abstinece
ok
No Need To Throw Hints, Im Making Slanders Direct
Thats Why Batting Me Causes The Losing Effect (his Username)
nice personal
This Is Just A Quick Spit, I Aint Even Concentrating
But The Only Time Youll Cum Hard Is When Ya Done Ejaculating
wow just wow worst line ever
It Didnt Have To Be Like This, But I Love To Dominate
Dont Worry, You Can Still Rap Wit Ashley And Mary Kate
lol funny but weak
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Effect:
Writers block..ill agree cuase what the fuck was this
you a gorilla?.fucka sig this is were you post your pics
lmao nice opener
take a kick son..cuase none of those punches hit
gave him a bannana..but like his verse..came back with shit
ok
thats rite prick..this is a 5 minuit keystyle..its fun
probally beat your alais..im here for that rea-son
weak
better not run your lips..ill be nosey and see you bitch
take the set up of this punch..and quit while ur a head trick
weak
im sick with it...your a newb who acts all thugish
ill recycle my whole shit..to clean up your rubbish.
weak closer
vote effect i liked the first line i think that line killed it becuase this guy stay post pics in his sig like he dont know were to post pics shit was very funny and lil tra you came weak as fuck man i thought you would have done better
please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148364
aight...
Lil Tra:
The Good- u had the punches, but...
The Bad- ...none of 'em hit...they were played ('abstinence' n 'come hard' lines are mad played)
The Ugly- the closer, i didnt like that one
Effect:
The Good- opener, okay punches
The Bad- punches could've been betta
The Ugly- .....
anywayz, both of yall DEFINITELY didnt come as hard as yall should've...n i thought this was a close battle, but i think Effect slightly edged ova Tra...
V/ Effect
also, i need an HONEST vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148295