10 lines
i set
u spit 1st
no hate
no dr
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10 lines
i set
u spit 1st
no hate
no dr
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
lol man weak verse i think LM will win this wit ease
yo homie no hate juss it was lame
sorry i just seen this............checkin........haha......your goin down son
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
ok ok easy win fa LM
N'Zyme-fix ya disses man its better to link words by last sound like for example
ur lines make me weary of a weak attack
id run u off thsi site but ud coem right back
not exactly liek that juss as a example u had some punches that were liek a fly on my food not vry effective.personalsplayed too many have used em 2 be used as anythang now.strcture could use some work.otha than that keep on goin.
LM-so so rough give em his crown fa bein tah mad scentist that he is.man u killed em no one else may think so but man i knew u had it.punches and prsonals were there liek right up on tah screen the nzyme and chromosome was nice structure great.easy win.
v-LM
bo hate on u n'zyme come harder next time owkr on personals and structure and punches
uppin 1 just leave links i will return the favor.....
uppin 2.....just leave links..................................
lm takes this easily,he came harder with punches and personals and i liked how u dissed his name good verse,nzyme came hard with his opener but thats about it,and it wasnt even ThAt hard tho it was just the best line u had,so my vote goes to LM
vote/LM
N zyme
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
.......ight closer
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
......nah not feeling
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
.....ight could have been worded better
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
.....okay its ight
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
.....okay closer
LM
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
....ha good opener
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
.....okay
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
.....Felt a bit foced at the end
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
.....Ha
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
........Ight closer
vote..........LM he came harder
Return Favor Please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146739
oh yea,LM hit my sig up plz thx,with an honest vote...............
that's cuz you guys don't check personals..but it's all good and fun, just fucking around and shit with some quick keystyles..props to LM, nice drop but i didn't realize lyrical madness was LM or I would've dropped harder...thought you were just some random kid and i was bored
n'zyme
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
*decent personal*
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
*tight personal*
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
*another tight personal with good wordplay*
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
*funny but coulda been worded better*
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
*beuno personal*
Lyrical Madness
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
*haha thats word*
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
*it rhymed.....*
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
*dude that was stupid*
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
*pretty weak man...with a lot better wording it coulda been decent
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
*ill give you that one*
n'zyme dropped some tight personals and his shit made more sense. LM you dropped some tight lines but most of it was random bullshit. id say this one was an easy win too
V/n'zyme
^^^WRONG>>>>>>haha uppin this .............just leave links i will return the favor
aight, i dont think da battle wuz as lop-sided as ppl made it seem, altho LM still took this, he just came harder
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
^^^pretty good closer
vote-LM
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
Aight opener
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
No, just, no
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
Might have been good with good wording, but not that great with current wording
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
Funny
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
Nice closer
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
Good opener, a bit played though...
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
okay... great
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
I don't understand it
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
lol
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
lol
V/LM, for wittier endings and a good opener
Lyrical:
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
creative at best.
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
vocab is too simple
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
again up your vocab.. but ok.
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
sucked dude and fuck you.. need better vocab still.....
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
if it's true then its ok but i dont see how
nzyme:
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
NO.
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
that was completely irrelevant.
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
... weak.
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
get a tan? from what? come on now.
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
this was your only decent line, period
V/ Lyrical for coming less wack, but you both need to elevate
plz hit up the johnny damen battle in my sig with an honest vote, thanks.
^^i will hit up your battle when you poll on this one....uppin 4
I polled as soon as I voted..
*N'Zyme*
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
......ok opener
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
.....wasnt feelin this one
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
.....not that good
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
......pretty good stuff
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
......real nice closer
Your ending was da best, started out real weak...
*LM*
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
......good opener
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
......couldve did this one better
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
.....u tried too hard with this one
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
.....pretty good
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
.....nice closer
Overall pretty decent, couldve did some stuff bit better tho....
Vote: LM