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Please follow the basic house rules- If you don't know them, look them up now.
We'll both check in, and the post soon after. We're both online right now, so there's no reason to take forever.
Good luck.
This is my check-in. I'd also like to remind voters that he challanged me, so I'm not picking on newbs.
hey whats up im checking in and ill spit now......
aight im right here and u from america junior the home af the fags/ that dress in rags/ and think they all gangsta/ when me and my crew look at them all we see is wankstas/split em in half/ and stretch em like a calf /sit back and laugh/ when when u try to rap/ cuz up to me ur verses are crap/ u need a map son cuz u lost ur fucking with a true crim boss/ ive already suffered my loss/ the day they put jesus up on the cross/ your raps dont make no sense/ u need to make ur raps just a lil more dense/ when my legend is still immense/ ill kill ur faimly just to pay my faimlys rents.
*Shakes head*
You're a waste of bandwidth.
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This kid’s soft, a liquid, in other words he’s in no shape,
…. Write this battle and then get locked up for Statutory rape!
So please say your prayers, before I merk this pimp to be,
Peel his skin off in layers, he's nothing but a shrimp to me.
This players having rough sex daily, yes I fully understand,
That all that loving, and none of it's getting out of hand!
And I'm a dangerous motherfucker, stay on the look kid,
I'll drop an aerosol can in your microwave and hit cook kid.
Let me give you credit, you've dropped science in the past...
But not in your rhymes, I was refering to chemistry class.
ahahaha.
aight uppin for votes so how old r u karl markes..?
Do i really gotta explain my vote? lol.
Killa, ur structure is newbish put it into lines. Ur punches was madd weak newbish concepts. Cant really tell flow in it. Gotta work on them to elevate.
Karl ur opener killed him. Word. The rest wasnt too hard but u aint need it really.
Vote - Karl.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
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vote merks everytime
easy merk killa sucks perios
no structure no flowjust a mess
to be honest he didnt bring
ne heat at all no real consepots
karl came alot nicer....alot better concepts
and atleast a few nice punches
good shit.............................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148522
please hit thgat man as i took the time.
Up.
Best believe I leave good feedback.
Ahahahahha.. that was actually a funny closer to an obvious half assed verse. Could be its fuckin almost midnight here, but w/eQuote:
Originally Posted by Karl Merks
Marl Kerks won this for obvious reasons.. other dude was writing a paragraph or some shit. Prolly still in homework mode eh? Ha. killa, work on... uh.. everything. Best advice I can give ya is read the tutorials and other battles in Elite or somethin. Karl, cant really be too strict cus you obviously didnt try that hard, but you had more than enough to win.
Vote / killa32.. for the loss ;)
check sig plz.. muchos gracias
I'm gonna up this again. Cause i'm like that.
This can be upped again, so i'll do that. Stop being pussys and vote.
Punches - Merks
Personnals - Merks
Flow - Merks
Enjoyment - Merks
Wordplay - Merks
Opener -Merks
Closer - Merks
Humour - Merks
Vocab - Merks
Structure - Merks
Creativity - Merks
Originality - Merks
Complexity - Merks
Content - Merks
Sense - Merks
..or I could have just said Merks took all those!
Vote - KARL MERKS
ONE SIDED SHIT!!
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Merks
Oubviously came more complex and wiitier than killa, harder rhymscheme and better flow. Nothing suprising but it was consistent and enough to beat killa... nothin much more to say...
Killa
Real Basic Rhyming and no Hard punches man, looks like your the average or beginning noob around here.. but just keep practicin' cause theres not that much to say bout yours since Karl Merks is an oubvious winner...
Vote: Merks
lets try this again
killa32:
aight im right here and u from america junior the home af the fags/
that dress in rags/
WTF? STRETCHED AS HELL! AND YOUR A BITCH!
and think they all gangsta/
when me and my crew look at them all we see is wankstas/
also whack! and there is more gangsters in the UK!?
split em in half/
and stretch em like a calf /
yeah...how bout a NO!
sit back and laugh when when u try to rap/
cuz up to me ur verses are crap/
PLAYED AS FUCK! AND EVEN WHEN IT WAS A BRAND NEW RHYME IT WAS WHACK AS FUCK
u need a map son cuz u lost ur fucking with a true crim boss/ i
ve already suffered my loss/
the day they put jesus up on the cross/
3 line bar? STRETCHED AND WHACK!!
your raps dont make no sense/
u need to make ur raps just a lil more dense/
sadly...best bar of the verse
when my legend is still immense/
ill kill ur faimly just to pay my faimlys rents.
NOPE..WHACK
overall- YOU SUCK!! ELEVATE YOU LIL BITCH!! AND IF YOU WANA BATTLE ME THEN SURE I'D GLADLY BATTLE YOU BECUZ OF THE FACT THAT YOU SUCK!! AND YES I DO HAVE A BEEF WITH YOU BECUZ YOU DISSED THE U.S. ON A SITE MADE IN THE U.S. AT LEAST MOST FROM THE PEOPLE FROM THE U.K. DON'T DISS US
Karl Merks:
This kid’s soft, a liquid, in other words he’s in no shape,
…. Write this battle and then get locked up for Statutory rape!
Dope opener
So please say your prayers, before I merk this pimp to be,
Peel his skin off in layers, he's nothing but a shrimp to me.
nice use of the multie...dope bar
This players having rough sex daily, yes I fully understand,
That all that loving, and none of it's getting out of hand!
lol...nice punch
And I'm a dangerous motherfucker, stay on the look kid,
I'll drop an aerosol can in your microwave and hit cook kid.
nother multie...and dope
Let me give you credit, you've dropped science in the past...
But not in your rhymes, I was refering to chemistry class.
lol..dope closer too
overall: DOPE SHIT...WAY TO PUT THE KID IN HIS PLACE
VOTE: KARL MERKS (OF COURSE)
v/ karl merks
aight im right here and u from america junior the home af the fags
that dress in rags
[b]is america really 'the home of the fags'?
and think they all gangsta
when me and my crew look at them all we see is wankstas
they don't 'think they all gangsta. . who cares what your crew sees. . ?
split em in half
and stretch em like a calf. . sit back and laugh
is 'stretching them like a calf' an insult?
when when u try to rap
cuz up to me ur verses are crap
it's not up to you though.
u need a map son cuz u lost ur fucking with a true crim boss
ive already suffered my loss the day they put jesus up on the cross
wthf was that jesus line about?
your raps dont make no sense. . u need to make ur raps just a lil more dense
when my legend is still immense. . ill kill ur faimly just to pay my faimlys rents
no one's heard of you so no, you're not a legend. . an how would killing his family (dude, it's the net) pay your familys rents?
^ an that as me being kind. . i re-structured it an everything! karl was mad played at times but at least it insulted his opponent an was easy to follow. .
links in sig.