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8-16 lines
BLIND SPIT
verses due 30min after both check in
n i'm checkin in right now
checked in nowQuote:
Originally Posted by unXtatic
When i lay my lines down, that means u cant trespass
--no, not even a guest pass will let u get past
u'll get blasted to particles wit my articles blazin
u a zero, looked u up in the dictionary n u far from amazin
what u state is stupid, so ya place is useless
do i gotta bang ya head against a radio to make u face the music?
n girls gon love me insteada u in this shoot-off of words
u'll git no love, like ya 'knob' says do not disturb
yeah, i'm amongst grown women, lookin fo one ta' settle wit
while u at a farm in the coop, chasin undeveloped chicks
i'm a lil defensive, diss ma' game n u gone man
the only time u sick is when u give brain to the wrong man
ya fail to connect, so how u expect to git respect?
--son, u need to follow Nike n git ya shit in check
dawg, u got till 10:44 to drop ya verse...........
your just a newjack actor, bitch slash fagot rapper
i come to wrap ya up in plaster, i'm a one of a kind attacker
i took your static, attacked it, and stored it in my fuckin attic
you want it well i have it, its sad that you can't even grab it
it's tragic, tell me now, wut the fuck are you without it
this is the realest, you feel this? the only soil you can't till ( it's)
i'm the strongest, be honest, are you astonished,i'm on this
no mercy, you're vocab seems like the smallest, so i left ya tarnished
now if you diss my name man, "wow that shits so original"
your raps primival, by visual it looks like a kid wrote, so predictable
below the surface where my metaphor's at, look deeper than the shore's for my raps
my stacks are stacked, and i'm topin all stats
so to conclude this verse, i'll curse, "fuck you, fuck me, fuck this Earth!!"
you're a fuckin bitch, i'll stitch you open, now all you need is a purse
aight.....we uppin (#1) fo votes...
we need some votes from yall...uppin #2
yall need ta' quit sleepin...uppin #3
uppin #4
both came ok...
unXtatic-your verse was straight man..you had good flow and good structure...overall your punches were descent...nothin to bad wrong with them...but your personals mostly reeked
pink-your shit was off man...your flow was ok..but your structure build up was wack..and you had too many subjects bein talked about...you didnt really show any directness with your shit...
v/unXtatic
please return the favor and vote on this
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iigh this was a pretty weak battle but ima have to give this on to UnXtic
pINK:
your just a newjack actor, bitch slash fagot rapper
i come to wrap ya up in plaster, i'm a one of a kind attacker
weak opener
i took your static, attacked it, and stored it in my fuckin attic
you want it well i have it, its sad that you can't even grab it
hmmm nice try at multies.. but really wasnt feelin the secend line
it's tragic, tell me now, wut the fuck are you without it
this is the realest, you feel this? the only soil you can't till ( it's)
naw
i'm the strongest, be honest, are you astonished,i'm on this
no mercy, you're vocab seems like the smallest, so i left ya tarnished
decent
now if you diss my name man, "wow that shits so original"
your raps primival, by visual it looks like a kid wrote, so predictable
okay i guess
below the surface where my metaphor's at, look deeper than the shore's for my raps
my stacks are stacked, and i'm topin all stats
self confindent?
so to conclude this verse, i'll curse, "fuck you, fuck me, fuck this Earth!!"
you're a fuckin bitch, i'll stitch you open, now all you need is a purse
okay?
unXtatic
When i lay my lines down, that means u cant trespass
--no, not even a guest pass will let u get past
weak opener
u'll get blasted to particles wit my articles blazin
u a zero, looked u up in the dictionary n u far from amazin
decent
what u state is stupid, so ya place is useless
do i gotta bang ya head against a radio to make u face the music?
okay..alittle played
n girls gon love me insteada u in this shoot-off of words
u'll git no love, like ya 'knob' says do not disturb
not feelin this
yeah, i'm amongst grown women, lookin fo one ta' settle wit
while u at a farm in the coop, chasin undeveloped chicks
okay
i'm a lil defensive, diss ma' game n u gone man
the only time u sick is when u give brain to the wrong man
........
ya fail to connect, so how u expect to git respect?
--son, u need to follow Nike n git ya shit in check
decent closer
overall this was a pretty weak battle but easily UnXtatic wins easiy
vote-UnXtatic
unxtac w.e takes this, with wordplay and punches his personals were ass but mehh...w.e u didnt need much to take this one word\
v/unx.
sorry but a cant vote but unxtatic was easily the best. i liked his lines and it had a nice flow. vote wooda gone to unxtatic. sick spittas til i die
Aiight...
Unx...
When i lay my lines down, that means u cant trespass
--no, not even a guest pass will let u get past
Weak opener...
u'll get blasted to particles wit my articles blazin
u a zero, looked u up in the dictionary n u far from amazin
Ok, c where u comin from...
what u state is stupid, so ya place is useless
do i gotta bang ya head against a radio to make u face the music?
Ok, played tho...
n girls gon love me insteada u in this shoot-off of words
u'll git no love, like ya 'knob' says do not disturb
Same as above
yeah, i'm amongst grown women, lookin fo one ta' settle wit
while u at a farm in the coop, chasin undeveloped chicks
Same as above
i'm a lil defensive, diss ma' game n u gone man
the only time u sick is when u give brain to the wrong man
Nah, played
ya fail to connect, so how u expect to git respect?
--son, u need to follow Nike n git ya shit in check
Poor closure.
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Pink...
your just a newjack actor, bitch slash fagot rapper
i come to wrap ya up in plaster, i'm a one of a kind attacker
Shit opener...
i took your static, attacked it, and stored it in my fuckin attic
you want it well i have it, its sad that you can't even grab it
Aight attempt at multis, poor punch
it's tragic, tell me now, wut the fuck are you without it
this is the realest, you feel this? the only soil you can't till ( it's)
What?
i'm the strongest, be honest, are you astonished,i'm on this
no mercy, you're vocab seems like the smallest, so i left ya tarnished
Nah
now if you diss my name man, "wow that shits so original"
your raps primival, by visual it looks like a kid wrote, so predictable
Weak
below the surface where my metaphor's at, look deeper than the shore's for my raps
my stacks are stacked, and i'm topin all stats
No self gloryfying
so to conclude this verse, i'll curse, "fuck you, fuck me, fuck this Earth!!"
you're a fuckin bitch, i'll stitch you open, now all you need is a purse
Whack closure.
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Simple, Unxtatic wins for better punches and flow. Pink tried multis which b cool n everythin', but no punches/whack punches let him down badd. Keep elevating y'all.
Vote - Unxtatic
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
Plz return favor, links b in sig yo. Thanks.
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unxtatic: good punches...a few played lines tho...good flow i think....you also had good personals and i think the 3rd-4th lines was the best (far from amazin)...nice punches
pink: i cant really say much apart from............you had loads of self glorification in there like nearly every line,,,,if you wasnt praising yaself you was just saying shit....bad punches bad personals ok flow good structure
vote/unxtatic had better punches