he already did a verse in bitch slapped so ...
10 - 20 lines
house rules
i will spit by tonight
good luck
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he already did a verse in bitch slapped so ...
10 - 20 lines
house rules
i will spit by tonight
good luck
all you gotta do is copy it. whats takin so long ?
that was his verse ^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by Will'G
and now heres mine ....
This kids name is will’g. He thinks the “g” in his name is for “gangster”,
Seriously tho, it stands for “Gaylord”, his shit so rare like a surname “sangster”,
Gonna kill this bitch with just twenty of my deadly lyrical lines,
In that callout you should have posted “this battle will’g declines”,
This was over before it had begun, other prospectiv had won,
It happened so quick you were like “I don’t know what goin on”,
Don’t think that your first battle will be a win, cus it just won’t happen,
Just like the next best rapper aint gonna come from fuckin Japan,
My verse will infect you so bad that you won’t be able to function,
You confused little mind is at a live or die kind of junction,
Too late for you to choose so I will for you, I choose live,
So you have a chance to persuade your momma to forgive,
All those pussy ass things that you kid when you was a kid,
So good that I should but in a offer for a takeover bid,
This battle is now over no need for you to even spit your verse,
You’ll be dead in a box after this, ill drive you to the funeral in a hearse.
Nice lil'battle hommi... but we gone see who the fans feelin tho.
come on peeps lets get some votes ...
just give feedback if ya want ....
do summit on this ....
pretty weak battle
will-u came too selfglorifying which is common for newbs,i had the same problem too,try dissing him and only him,dont say anything about ureself bein cool or anything like that,overall the punches were played out weak verse
prospectiv-ure pucnhes were a lil played out and not hittin hard,u need to add multis and wordplay that connects with punches(just a tip).....so ure verse was weak as well but slightly harder than will......
so my vote goes to prospectiv...-1-
pretty weak from both but other prospectiv came out better. he had better flow and structure and his punches, all tho they werent the best, hit harder of the two. will'g your verse was too much self glorification and not enough dissin. work on it and you will get better.
vote goes to prospectiv
aite battle not da best, but will g had some structure and he had sum vocab but his punches juss werent hard enuff, but propectiv u did good, u hard enuff punches and u had sum basic vocab but ur structure was betta
v/prospectiv
uppin on this shit. keep up the votes guys. thanks to The MC, fourpac and Rook-Killa for your feedback.
nothing to special
other prospective got this... his punches were harder, no hate keep doin yur thing boys.... jus keep spittin and elevate..
vote/other
can both of yall vote on tha-joka v/s skrollz and third_king v/s skrollz
yo yo uppin on this. guys come on and vote on this .....
yo yo im gonna save prospectiv a up and up for him. yo uppin for these guys man come on there new.
Other prospective won this
he had better lines and his rhymes were just better
but good battle to the both of yous
will'g'- hard to read and didnt make much sense, no personals and
who's this? a question yall ask, Im Young'Tex Bitchh//
no silver spoon hommi, I was raisd with a young Tech bitch
surely u cooda got sumthin else to rhyme.
other perspective- u have definitely elevated since i battled u even tho u beat me. u had real gd rhymin every line rhymed perfect, although a had heard sum of it b4 bit to much self glory. but u still get my vote.
peace out yall :thumbup: no hate :thumbup:
both pretty weak but other prospectiv's was better. he had better flow and structure and his punches were better although some were weak.will'g your verse was self glorification and not enough dissin.
v/ other prospectiv
Will'g...
Yo, yall cats should just stop spittin and just quit with it//
yall need to just practice on yall pipe game, yo girl said you (Quick Wi It)//
What? this is a wack opener.
why yall waistin time with the battle yo? yes do this!//
yall lines must be stair-roll, cause yall verses gone be useless//
Weak, played punch.
who's this? a question yall ask, Im Young'Tex Bitchh//
no silver spoon hommi, I was raisd with a young Tech bitch//
WACK WACK WACK, and to add to it, it rhymed the same word virtually.
Yo son, I put that heat on you//
yall fans must take Night- quill, cause when yo verse comes up, they spleep on you//
Weak again, flow way off.
Efusive, yo kid your name sounds wack//
I should just drop a slug in yo hip, rocca (Walk) way and whach yo ass "Lean Back"//
Why you trying to diss Efusive?
Young'Tex doggi, and thats just the 1st round//
Ima have it where yall dont want to come back to the site, heres a excusse, just say yo severs down//
Wack closer, not even a good concept.
Other prospective...
This kids name is will’g. He thinks the “g” in his name is for “gangster”,
Seriously tho, it stands for “Gaylord”, his shit so rare like a surname “sangster”,
Meh...weak.
Gonna kill this bitch with just twenty of my deadly lyrical lines,
In that callout you should have posted “this battle will’g declines”,
Not too bad.
This was over before it had begun, other prospectiv had won,
It happened so quick you were like “I don’t know what goin on”,
Weak, not really dissing him.
Don’t think that your first battle will be a win, cus it just won’t happen,
Just like the next best rapper aint gonna come from fuckin Japan,
Ok, but try and aim punches at the other person more.
My verse will infect you so bad that you won’t be able to function,
You confused little mind is at a live or die kind of junction,
No, self glory and no punch.
Too late for you to choose so I will for you, I choose live,
So you have a chance to persuade your momma to forgive,
No. "Your momma" lines are wack and played to fuck.
All those pussy ass things that you kid when you was a kid,
So good that I should but in a offer for a takeover bid,
Huh? weak and didn't really understand it.
This battle is now over no need for you to even spit your verse,
You’ll be dead in a box after this, ill drive you to the funeral in a hearse.
Played.
This battle was weak, not many real punches in either verse, Will'g didn't seem to make any punches and his flow was wack, especially towards the end when he was putting loads of syllables in each line. other prospective just came harder overall with his punches, although most of them were fairly played; and he had better flow and structure, with more equal amounts of syllables in each bar.
v/ other prospective