10-20 lines
blind spit
30min after check in
no hatin
no d/r
no pre writting
holla
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10-20 lines
blind spit
30min after check in
no hatin
no d/r
no pre writting
holla
checking in
waiting for u tragik
so holla bak when u do
*liquid(acid)* a.k.a common sense
Aiight Doggie This My Check In Lets Do Dis And G'luck 2 You
Your A Disaster,quit Now,avoid The Laughter/
You Poor Basterd,you Couldnt Get Ya Ass Kicked Faster/
Liquid Acid,ya Flow Drops More Like Blotter,its Weak/
Ima A Heavy Weight,u Need A Spotter,why Bother Ta Speak/
Fuck This Geek,also Known As Common Sence/
Dont Worry,you Will Soon Be Known In Past Tence/
You Could Use An Acid Bath,your Garbage, Do The Math/
Feel My Wrath,wreck You Like A Hurricane,get Out My Path/
You Got Beat Down,u Fuckin Klown/
Name Is Liquid,and Still Able To Drown/
.................................................. .................................................. ....
Oh Well Theres Alittle Quick Spit
liquid acid,get burned u bastard,cause im bio-hazard//
welcome 2 textual territory,it's always the same god dam story//(pre-writter)
you faking more then strippers on 20 in stalettoes,writting shit with ur hollow pencil//(i sense-so)
the message i sent it 2 hours ago,point blank cause ur ego's gone//
am i wrong or right, u fight ur dick and palm in the night//
spit so hard u have overdose attacks,1-2 punchline,or murder like the texas massacer with a axe//
are u mentally unstabeled,or just another mc i have 2 label//
shit ur rhyming fable's,am king auther,and ur my round table//
cause my knight just took ur rook,so turn the page on ur record book//
to find me go across the 7 seas,25 grams of cc injected in thee//
u entered some quicksand,and already 6 feet under,just woke up the sand man from he's slumber//
ur structure just like thunder,so i wonder did u knock on lumber//(before this battle)
come on jackass let me put the sattle,they sold u those weak ass rhymes,less then the amish did there cattle//
cause ur tragik,i guess u are and thats sum sad shit//
good battle holla back
tragik got straight to the point and liquid flow was harder to read from a reader's stand point so it was hard to peice together
uppin for som votes...take a min and drop a vote...good lookin
u want to wait for ppl 2 vote on this round
or just spit round 2 and let them vote on both
holla wit ur anwser
*liquid(acid)* a.k.a. common sense
lets wait a bit and see if anyone gonna vote...then we can do round 2...i already did that topical i wanted to do....you could vote on that battle fo who you think won...and iwill vote on one of yours..~1~
uppin 4 sum votes
post and ill return the favor
so holla plz
*liquid(acid)* a.k.a. common sense
vote = tragik
liquids verse wasnt too good at all. could have been way better. tragik, even ur verse could have hit harder, but was still better layed out, and stronger.
one.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145450
Vote - tragik
Reason:
liquid's verse was just ass honestly...he had stretched lines and nothing hard in his verse...while the other guy at least had a better structure with a good attempt at something ok....I suggest you both drop the "//" & ~~~ & """"" and even out your structures for better effects of punches....
Both verses weren't good. I felt tragik came better, better everything honestly, both need to elevate.
I wasn't feelin' Liquid's verse at all, you need to do better, read tutorials, battle more, read battle, etc.
Other dude came ok, it wasn't bad and was enough to win this battle, which is why he gets my vote.
V/Tragik for an overall better everything, structure, flow, punches, etc.
uppin ...2 more votes to finish this ....come on ya'll help me get this closed...i will now have enough post to vote ...so iwill return favors...~1
Aiight. Neither verse came very hard, but Tragik came of better as his lines werent stretched and liquids were all over the place, also liquid took too long to attempt any punches so I found the spit a lil dull (no offense)
Vote// Tragik
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Liquid: Your structure was a task following, your flow was weird. (Only each line enternally rhyming) You hardly made sense, and just sounded like you were rabbling on.
Tragik: Easy structure to follow, the multies made a lot of the verse seemed force, you should risk stretching and making sense then what you did. Punches were okay, no real personals.
Vote: Tragik
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