10-12 lines
I got to go the airport and pick someone
up if you aint went by then I'll go
House rules apply
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10-12 lines
I got to go the airport and pick someone
up if you aint went by then I'll go
House rules apply
Yo check it out this man partially copied a name/
A check the alphabet dog you'll always B behind J/
so let me C I'm guessin you'd rather be fucked without/
talkin bout you killin verses only in suicidal bouts/
so your job is to go out and destroy the weak minded/
now he aint got no parents or friends and this kids blinded/
so eye-hova and you'll see that this fake rhyme soldier/
is realy just confessin to Jay "I dash" so time over/
don't come at me again cause some crossed eyes could trouble you/
ya tired of lost tries but ya vision aint blurry when my rhymes "double u"
I had some time...kick back
lookin thru my profile tryin to diss me, u a scared fag/
cuz ur spits wack, explode in ur face like an air-bag/
talkin bout i spit verses, nigga i spit hearses, and whats worse is/
im scrollin around, when suddenly competitors are scented/
playboy... ill leave u edible demented, u cant rap u just playin wit ur fonts-an/
...so how can u convince any1, about 187s from wisconsin/
war doesnt prove whos right only who is left/
but im ambidextre-ous, and powerful with all text/
u sittin there talkin ima fan of action, cuz the ox'll expose ya chest like janet jackson/
u came too weak... an my text's waitin/
to horrify this audience... like wess cravin/
ill end it quick, u in pain i wont stress ya,...cuz i dont play-boy so tell me whos fresher?/
Yo Hova you gon kick back or not-talkin bout i'm on so go I already went and still aint kicked back so don't be rushin me if you movin slow.
oo and im not trying to bite the last line its from 8mile the first battle with proof he says that shit.. okk fam get to votin
yo wtf did u just say lol
"Yo Hova you gon kick back or not-talkin bout i'm on so go"
yo ya'll vote on this shit and I'll apologize ahead of time for this off subject fag.
VOTE, thnx
Please vote on this battle......................uppin
This battle was weak. My vote goes to I-Hova because he just came plain harder. He attempted a personal with his Wisconsin line. (Don't diss Wisconsin :)) The flow was a basic tie, because Playboy was consisten, but I-Hova had a better just basic flow, but there was a point where he didn't rhyme. There weren't too many hard punches. A few metaphores thrown around, and not much wordplay use. Multies, none. Overall not a very impressive battle, but my vote goes to I-Hova.
(If either of you feel fine to challenge me lets do something quick with a half hour time limit. :))
yo amp ur buggin fam...if u think this battle was weak..and the punches and metaphors where there too. appreciate the vote but voters look more closely outty
UPPINNNNNNN
ill make this quick, i was feelin play boys more
v/ playboy
Quote:
Originally Posted by I-Hova
u bit it? is it the same exact line?
no its different and if need be i wont use it but i was just sayin that its kinda like the one in 8mile and im not tryin to act like oo yeh its all mine thats all
Yo Show thanx fa votin ( wish it was explained more) uppin.
This battle was weak..
Playboy had a couple of better concepts, but I thought both came pretty blah. okay wordplay, but bad structure and bad punches. U need to hit up the tutorials, there should not be a battle verse without streong punches. ]
vOTE: Playboy
uppin...lets get some votes in here...last up fa me
I-Hova - The thing about Janet Jackson was good. The rest wasn't. You have no flow, your structure was confusing and off and really your punches weren't very good anyway. Work on making your verse make more sense and having direct punches on your opponent.
Playboy - Not great, but enough to take this. You had very simple punches that didn't hit very hard, but they were punches at least while I-Hova was just rambling. The letters thing was an okay concept though it didn't really hit hard.. you thought of the idea of "eye-hova", but you didn't really write a punch having to do with eyes so work on making your setups and punches relate. However, your punches still hit harder.
Vote - Playboy
You both have to elevate... I-Hova... yuo have some ok ideas but your sturcture was horrible... alot of it was juft fillers... and your confusing structure alone was enough for you to lose this battle... work on your structure...
Play-Boy you also didint come very hard... but alot harder than I-Hova had some ok punches structure was on target.... vocab was alright.... not bad... but lots of room for elevation...
overall - whack... but play boy comes out on top...
Vote - PB
yup..this was actually semi-close in my mind...
Ihova you attempted alot more metaphors, but honestly man, they weren't really that beneficial to your verse. A couple metas like in PB's verse (and more punches, personals) is better in a battle verse. I felt PB's verse wasa little more direct, not much.. but a little bit. More direct with punches and personals, and just felt he simply came harder. The wisconsin line wasa nice try... but don't think it came off well.
vote-pb