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10-15 lines
due 2morrow midnight eastern time
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House Rules
10-15 lines
due 2morrow midnight eastern time
ayo man i didnt get this until now.. i just got back...check
when u reach the top its suppose to be great, i witnissed the core
but u wud only be the reelist if your lines were actually yours
shit urban? man all you got is a quilt and cardboard walls
thinks he can rap but all he does is stand there and feel his balls
he musta been duckin, because ive been callin him out before
bitch thinks hes fuckin a hottie, but his mom's the whore!
if hes a follower of the disciples he must dickride "his god"
lays on the beach, because this "hunk" thinks huns like "his daz"
with the flag in his sig, no one knows how really old he is
from the looks of it hes old, but he still cant produce a lil chiz
if u dont get the lines dont vote.. since we both broke the deadline, o well we'll move it today mignight eastern time
Dont count this as an up, but UrbanReelist No-Showed
Never mind.. verses due friday..
plain to see ya whole verse ain't got no fresh ideas, no doubt 15
it's like ya mind is in jail and the guard is saying "lights out"
you suck, ya gabage, you punk ass really ain't worth my damn time
that's 3 ways i said it, and you still won't get the damn punchline
you didn't touch on my avy, you trying to be superstar
naw you rapping, easy to see you want to be a blackstar
but you gonna get ya ass to stehpon(stepped on) and another star
will be buried(starbury), you aint shit that's sumthing is fucking "real"
cuz my rhymes will plant ya ass in holy fields without the "deal"
it was good, and straight decision to change that corny ass name
not knowing ya whack was a Failure To Commuicate to ya brain
No show... You choose if you want the votes to continue, Acryonym. By the way, Acryonym, your name is spelled wrong. It's Acronym. :thumbup:
when did i fail to no show, i explain i had to spent the night in a high school and i would drop in the morn, god you said it was okay so how did i no show
Oh, I did? I don't remember. Okay, then, I guess it's excused, although I'm sure he woulda agreed anyways.
Blah hurry up and get this over with Urb.
Damn...
You two need to step it up.
This battle kinda hurt to read.
when u reach the top its suppose to be great, i witnissed the core
but u wud only be the reelist if your lines were actually yours
You had one good/decent bar in ya verse and that was it. The rest was 'momma' shit and another bar didn't even rhyme..."god/daz" do not rhyme!!!
plain to see ya whole verse ain't got no fresh ideas, no doubt
it's like ya mind is in jail and the guard is saying "lights out"
it was good, and straight decision to change that corny ass name
not knowing ya whack was a Failure To Commuicate to ya brain
That last bar was worded badly, but I'll give ya points for effort, that could have been a dope ass punch if you hadn't screwed the wording.
Seriously, practice...get better...both of you.
Read LLL battles to see how it's done.
UR wins for having the better verse and more quotables.
Peace
Wow.. yea, I definitely agree here.
Wasn't much good of a battle, was a lil disappointed in both.
Acrn really only had one Okay/decent punch, and that was his opener. Even though, it could've been worded alot better. The rest was really blah.. to read in my mind. Mom punches just don't work..
UR closer would've been nice.. but like btk said, it was bad wording choice... but still the attempts at better punches and personals were there in your verse. They weren't there in Ac's.... better alll around verse.
vote-UR
Please return fav. here... needs closing..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141655
Vote - UrbanReelist
Reason:
This was a pretty decent battle from Urban....he does better here than LLL Jr. you bastard....anyway....FTC had like one punch I could remember being pretty good...the rest just seemed to have a weak effect or almost no effect honestly....Urban was at least able to have a few more DECENT punches and he held the consistency in this....therefore he gets my vote...not bad from both...but you both need work on harder concepts....
Wow... Ac came wack.
You need to work on your punches. Try being creative a bit. Do somethin' so that the reader won't notice what's comin' next. Coz all your lines seemed really simple. Keep elevating, read more battles, and battle more at the same time.
UrbanReelist came good actually. I really liked 3 of his punches, which were more than enough to win this battle. I liked another 1, which was average. And the rest needed better wording, kinda like if you flipped one of those concepts to make it surprising, it'll hit hard as a punch.
Good verse though.
V/UR
Peace
blah... i didnt like neither verses much at all
though urban can come better then this.
havnt seen much fron cin but i think urban takes this
with a better overall verse...punches/ personals ect...
both of you can use some improving a bit...lol...seriously
after readin this urban common now...i know you can do
better then this.
pz
Urban has 5 explained votes...
Battle closed.