10-12 lines
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Spit as soon as you can!
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10-12 lines
House rules
Spit as soon as you can!
check, i'll drop right after you, or wenever i get back home..
one. good luck
iight YES THIS IS AN INER-CREW BATTLE... But Its Just For Braggin Rights
check in
yo hit this with a vote..thx..........
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140938
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u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
peace.
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drop... 8th line should be
*for U its the wisest comment*
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
Ambitious
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
-wasnt feeling it
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
-nice
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
-decent
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for U thats the wisest comment!
-weak
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
-weak
Liquid Content
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
-nah
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
-decent
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
-nice
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
-wasnt feeling this
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
-nice closer
Ambitious... your verse was OK, your best line i thought was the bounty/liquid content line, i was feeling that. You had a good structure and flow, personals were OK, some punches though i thought just didnt attack him well enough and were weak.
LC... your verse was OK too, good structure and flow, i liked your rhyme scheme at the end of your lines, i thought your closer was the best line, personals were good and you stayed on topic.
V/LC for more consitant hitting punches and personals
Nice battle to the both of you...
...hit up my links in sig...
^ yea ok.
uppn.
ambitious
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
nice word play
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
nice
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
blah weak
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
emm..no
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
nice closer
liquid content
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
no man
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
okay
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
nice stuff
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
didnt ryme right
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
decent
this was a really close battle,both verses were okay,but im gonna say ambitious barely and i mean barely get this with better punches
v/ambitious
i agree this was a close battle.....ambi you and i will have to do this for a third time sometime and this time we will go all out:thumbup:
Uppin
amb...
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
decent
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
not too bad
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
lol nice
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
nah
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
lol
L..
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
nah
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
nah
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
nah
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
nah
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
nah
v/amb... better verse.
One word replies to each bar is not a valid vote. Vote gone. -Token
elwood your ufcking wack man.....do you not no how to read wordplay..... get the fuck outa here
should have put the post amount to vote at 600
then there would be no Herb votes
uppppp......
vote.
Ambitious - I liked your verse a lot, very nice. Every time someone uses a lot of multies on FL it's a newbie who doesn't know how to do it properly, but yours just added to the content and flow, not took away from it. The god line about liquid content was probably the best bar of this battle. The opener was really good too and most of this was decent, well done.
Liquid - Not a bad verse by any means, but not as hard hitting. He had the multies and flow going for him, but I think his punches were harder hitting anyway. The eliminitation ambitions line was good, but some of the others I didn't like like the AM line and i'm not sure if anarchy and fantasy rhyme.. eh, I guess they do, but not really and it wasn't a great punch anyway. Not bad at all, you had some good ideas in this, but they weren't as hard hitting as Ambitious so he takes this.
Vote - Ambitious
Please return the favor fellas
alright uppin for more votes
and plese if you dont understand the wordplay DONT FUCKING VOTE
u spit bars tender n tired holmes...all I needs a bottle tequilia...
ur wits car fenders n firestones...I just pull the throttle ta peel'ya!
nice rhyming
I honestly feel ya...but ur gifts un-wrapped....& u isn't god sent...
shit...I'll put bounty on'is head just ta soak up it's liquid content!
second is nice
ya brain broke up I ripped its contents, opened skull & lifted objects
bleed my mind? u live the projects..i'll beat u wit ur own scripture logic!
complew but decent
depictin my death?...instead of ur hometown......ur lies describe it....
never battle amby again..................for thas the wisest comment!
decent
my pride is domnint..u show up 2 watch the fight n get sonned fa days...
cuz I walk up and drop a verse, he drops the mic n then runs off stage!
second part is blah
you got no path to follow, i'll diminish tracks in
have him stressing each letter like British accents
soso not hard though
you started it but now ya can't even finish ya shots
i'll put AM to snooze like these damn digital clocks
nice wordplay
told me he was ill but i'm descriminating the liars
put a stop to your ambitions like eliminating desire
lol nice
i only see you goin back in time like braggin of anarchy
ambitious doesnt even exist, hes just a fragment of fantasy
didnt rhyme but soso
get turned sideways till you catchin the right drift
cuz i'll work through AM like a fuckin night shift
this was a dope punch second part is tight
Overall amby came with more witty punches but liquid came with harder hitting punches, Although Ambys was a lil stretched, it was nice and so was Liquid. Vot Liquid for harder punches with personals in them.
This was a good battle
Ambitious had a good opener I liked that most throughout the battle. You had good punches that hit hard and it matched nice with the flow. The flow wasnt broken into fragments and it was constant. You had alot of good personals that showed you had a decent vocabulary.The closer was nice
Liquid i think that you had a good verse also. I think that you could of had a better opener. You had alot of good punches, but they didnt hit as hard as Ambs did. You had alot of good personals but the flow with them was kinda off. The structure wasnt that well set up. I think that the closer was pretty good. Im not familar with you work so I cant say what you should improve on
good battle from both
vote...Amb
This was a good battle.....Really close
Ambitious-You had a solid verse.....Your punches was there and they hit hard......only thing that i would say is that you could have reworded a couple of your punches to make them hit harder and you would have gotten the KO in this battle.......Flow was good and onpoint and your structure was a little stretched but thats okay
7.3/10
Liquid Content-you also had a solid verse.....Punches was there i felt that yours was more witty then Ambitious and you had better wordplay and metaphores in your verse......your structure was better then his although you had one stretched line and your flow also was on point......overall a solid verse
7.5/10
very close battle but i gotta give it to LC
v/LC
eh.... bastards...
uppn.
Content got this
Strcuture:This don't even need to looked at cuz you both had strcuture verses, so that's a tie
Personals:Content Got This, the nameplays both were dope, second one was dimished tho, cuz you should have found a new way to diss his name
Punches:This came down to who had the betta closer and openers, and since i was not feeling none of the openers and ambitious closer was weak, and content's closer was strong
vote/Content
^ wow. im amazed at some of these voters/votes. lol, its all good nice battle
dawg.
every voter seems to keep saying i have no personals?? :huh:
wow.
Uppin
i polled urbanreelists vote
hit this first brother man
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140938
^ stop freepostin in this shit.
already banned him for 1 week because he did that in like 5 other battles
Vote - Ambitious
Reason:
You both did a pretty good job...and Liquid had the better structure...but honestly most of your punches were a bit weak...and nothing too solid..some were personal...but Ambitious won this because he had harder punches and a little bit extra wit in his verse...not a bad job from either....but I think you could both do better...
ambitious had a very interesting comples flow that i really liked
liquid's flo was simple but tight
ambitious had some nice disses and one personal
liquid's disses were extremely generic, not creative and really kinda weak
ambitious really had no opener...liquid had a weak one
both closers were eh
ambitious had a better verse with soem ok disses
liquid's verse was kinda simple and generic...
vote - ambitious
Props to both god gift members.