5-7 lines battle..no d/r..no bitin or crew votes..
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5-7 lines battle..no d/r..no bitin or crew votes..
my punches leave you 'swollen' like faces on hundred bills...
i heard you spit 'big' words naw you just feelin a 'numb' grill...
checkin ya profile you betta 'Return' to Tha westcoast...
you gon off chronic na bullets left ya chest of smoke...
from the first bar you was 'Dammed from tha start'...
I rock bitches who act 'Diesil' and tear "A Man Apart...
i only 'grazed' you wit disses like grass to 'cattle'...
jadakiss shoulda included 'WHY' i ripped ya ass in battle... :nono:
your location originally said Italy you wanna try some sausage???/
you rock bitch, naw my dicks the only thing you'll be rockin/
ur a gurl and a newbie so Imma take it easy/
heres some advice quit rappin and be Tha Returns main breezy/
ur rhymes were koo and ur similes were great/
a punch, shit i'll hit you wit two fingers like what you use to masturbate
yo the polls are fuck up i don't think n e one can vote!!!!!!!
yea i was in italy...i was living there while finishing my last few weeks in the
navy now i'm back home...two years of taking orders dam!
awwwww navy gurl nice!!!!!!!haha koo nice drop!!!!
uppin for votes...............vote please!!!!!!!!!
can someone vote or give there input or something????
erin ya had no hard punches,
an you need more of a vocab man.
return ya had some punches,
an i liked ya final,
can i ask you a question?
are you gay? ya often talk bout fuckin your opponent
wtf kinda question is that, just cuz you got fucked when we battled.........haha
erin - flow was kinda choppy, structure wasnt really good ur personals werent that good either i mean dont get me wrong i aint hatin jus statin opinion, im jus lettin u know were u lack ability at....keep doin ur thing ....elevate
return - y u gotta do her like that it aint right...had more personals n punch lines were coo i think u shittin on her though personally but dont feel too good shes a gurl not thats theres nothin wrong wit that cuz gurls cant spit to *much love* i can tell u elevatin cuz ur spittin more consistent n u have way better structure than before
do me the favor n hit my battle against suspect ...holla back
Yo G thanx for ur input !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thx for the input....nice spit by return...it was late for me anywayz and i did'nt wanna no show..
someone vote please!!!!!!!!!!
i will return the favor!!!!!!!!!!
erin- you shit was poor, no hard punches, a ok flow and structure, but need to elevate.
return- you shit was ok, good finisher, but need netter punches.
both need to elevate.
v/ return, for better punches.
can you return the favour please to my battles mentioned in my sig.
poll vote please and i will return the favor!!!!!!!!!
Rockabitch:
my punches leave you 'swollen' like faces on hundred bills...
i heard you spit 'big' words naw you just feelin a 'numb' grill...
wasnt feeling it
checkin ya profile you betta 'Return' to Tha westcoast...
you gon off chronic na bullets left ya chest of smoke...
lame, 1st line was ok, 2nd didnt connect though
from the first bar you was 'Dammed from tha start'...
I rock bitches who act 'Diesil' and tear "A Man Apart...
1st line your dissing his first bar but you spit first, 2nd line bad wording, just ok
i only 'grazed' you wit disses like grass to 'cattle'...
jadakiss shoulda included 'WHY' i ripped ya ass in battle...
the cattle/battle line is played but you had wordplay so it was decent, 2nd line was weak
Tha Return
your location originally said Italy you wanna try some sausage???/
you rock bitch, naw my dicks the only thing you'll be rockin/
bad opener, coulda hit but need to word it better
ur a gurl and a newbie so Imma take it easy/
heres some advice quit rappin and be Tha Returns main breezy/
didnt hit her
ur rhymes were koo and ur similes were great/
a punch, shit i'll hit you wit two fingers like what you use to masturbate/
first line you gave praise, dont do it again, second line a lil weak
Iight both came weak, Rockabitch you had good structure, ok wordplay but could of worded it better to hit harder. Return you need to work on that structure, your opener you coulda worded a lot better, neither of you had decent punches. Erin came more complex, Return you came with lame disses about her being a girl, i thought this was a close battle, erin just work on wording you material better and you will be fine, Return come more creative, both keep elevating.
Close but my vote is for Erin Rockabitch, for more creativity, complex, and i thought her punches landed harder.
erin_-didnt really have good punches or vocab,or wordplay,tha return had better punches and wordplay.vote tha return.
tha return DQ'd for upping to many times