Ten Lines
No Crew
No Dickriding
No Hate
No Feeding
No Recycled
Spit 45 mins after check in
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Ten Lines
No Crew
No Dickriding
No Hate
No Feeding
No Recycled
Spit 45 mins after check in
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...................im ready and checkin in....................
threpac, battlin you is like a felony
your a joke like your name, mockin makaveli
you beg me to spit first, im gonna rip you so bad you'll leave in a hearse
we allready know you'll be worse, don't even botter spittin a verse
this guys so lame, he can't back up his name
if tu pac was still alive, he'd hang his head in shame
judging by your grammer, your education musta cut off in grade four
or are you just a mistake from a condom break, cause your mothers a fuckin whore
your shits just wack, leave this site, don't come back
and shut the fuck up, you've just been bitch slapped
That was seriously some good shit man, I don't know where the hell Threpac is though, maybe he chickened out.
Well maybe he did chicken out, but Opinion, you're structure is whack..some good hits and a few nice punchlines...need to elevate
soz im late, i had 2 go offline, i'll spit my rap in alf an hour
opinion, you aint got tha right to say my name,
its you tha 1 puttin tupac to shame,
why did u even bother wid a battle,
coz i'm gonna kick your ass 2 seattle,
i asked you 2 spit first so i could see your shitty verse,
and now im sure u'll b tha 1 comin off worse,
i never thought spittin could be so easy,
coz this niggers shit is just so sleazy,
You don't belong on this forum, this shit is my dominion,
Your pic and name are wack, n' thats everyone's opinion.
hahaha well dude all i can say is your extremely late and you fed off my whole verse when there was no feeding but whatever let the polls begin...uppin 1
Threpac man, a pretty good fucking verse man, a big improvement on our battle. You still need to work on flow but I big improvement
wack wack battle
opinion- your shit was terrible man worse than your last....your shit was way way way way played, and you were real basic...your structure was terrible...your flow was in different directions
Threpac- your shit was also very basic, but you did good in this battle with keepin your structure in line, and your shit rhymed a lil better, and your flow was evevn
V/Threpac/ for comin more consistent in flow
weakest battle, I've read in a while........
Punches and Personals-Tie, both pathetically weak............Juss elevate and try to come harder than this shit, or else ya screwed........
Flow and Structure-Both horrible and not good flows, at all, elevate on this too.........
Finally-Wordplay and vocabulary-This goes to Opinion, barely but he got it.............elevate on this too, both of you.........
Conclusion-weak battle and please try to up your skills like maybe 80 percent more..................
Vote/Opinion
Se7en's vote pretty much says it all lmfao. Really weak you guys need to step up ya game. Elevate. Try new concepts, learn how to write good punches. Coz both verses were weak, none had hard hitting punches. Both were structued badly, meh, didn't enjoy this battle alot. Go to the elevation center thingy, I think they can help yp\ou out there. Anyway this was honestly weak. Elevate, both of you. Work on your punches, flow and structure.
V/Opinion
Pz
Very wack battle, man...I donno who do give the win here...another guy reppin a Pac name like me...lol, or a guy who ironicly rhymed the same to things (hearse and verse) as me.
Opinion...you asked me in another one of my battles to drop a vote on this battle of yours...but I feel you took a line outta my spit...so Threpac gets my vote even tho yours was better, sorry bro...But its all right here... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...16#post1554016
V/threpac..........
When I get to 100 posts I'll vote this.
Wack battle man, Threpac has come alog way but his punches were the shits man, nice structure although feeding was evident.
Opinion man, weak structure but you told me on msn why your verse was shitty, I think you'll regret not going hard ass on a newb.
V/ Opinion very close though.
this is a one sided battle....
opinion - your structure was pretty wack man, pretty wack....but you had some fuckin solid punches, great insults comming from you, just put your punches into place
threpac - WTF was that???? jesus fuckin christ that was so shitty man, you fed the whole fuckin verse, and...coz i'm gonna kick your ass 2 seattle,???? wow weak punches, horrible verse
v/Opinion for way harder punches
this was another weak battle
opinion- you could have came harder on ya opener. Ya flow and structure was very off. Punches were just plain lame and you didnt have barely any personals in ya verse. Work on wordplay, look at other battles to get the idea. Also, work on vocabulary and multis it will give you an advantage.
threpac- you could have came harder too. But ya flow and structure was ok. At least it was betta. Ya rhymes are basically too corny and simple, increase ya word choice and rhyme complexity. Punches and personals wasnt doin it either in ya verse. But i do think that ya closure got u the advantage. Still a weak verse though.
v/threpac
WACK BATTLE WOW THIS WAS WACK
opinion - you had better punches then threpac but your structure man was so horrible you gotta work on that totally
threpac - weak ass punches, it was all feeding and just bad bad bad rapping, wack structure too..its hard to chose a winner for this one it was so badly done, but im gonna go with opinion because he had way harder punches then yours and yours was all fed pac