10 lines on each opponent
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck
10 lines on each opponent
No hate, crew, D/R votes
No feeding
Good luck
Checkin' in this... I'll write ur euology, STUBBY. And your's too, _Ralkavelli_.
Check..1..2..Check..1..2
In.
and you guys r fucked...
lyrical violaters?...r u kidding me?...
Word.
checkin in, and who cares if we lose man, shit im just droppin to get better, and to shut you and daedal up........................
Aight, check it...
STUBBY? It's creative of you the way your name fits your career
Cause it's short, pathetic, flimsy and I'm sure it will soon disappear!
He got a 17-14 record? That's horrible, son, but it's nothin' new
Talks shit bout how he can beat me but got voted out my crew!
STUBBY used to PM me askin' if I couyld please help him elevate
I pulled him through to his 31st battle and yet still he's 2nd rate!
Started a crew with all herbs, but hey, I made the same mistake
In recruitin' u. This is your party? Well, bitch, I'm eatin' your cake
STUBBY's tryin' to grow taller, but he can't, he's under my feet
And STUBBS is the result of RB merging the slightly Elevated w/ Elite
Later
Aight, check it...
_Ralkavelli_, you just suck son, I mean Stubby recruited ya so it's a fact
Got banned once & ran into the Lyrical Violaters, in time to get smacked
I would help eliminate the crap from ur verse, but then it would be gone
So instead I'll crush your dreams with the endless punches in this song
You suck, kid, and to think I used to say newbies showed promise here
Daedal told me he wanted to crush an ant so I invited him, but don't fear
You'll be done long before Daedal brings the fight to your doorstep, son
If I thought ya'll were a cahllenge, I would have dropped a decent one
And it must be admitted that I pretty much came like crap w/ bad wordplay
But in reality, my half-assed verses will win this, more than you can say
Later
*If you don't know I wasn't tryin' here, than you should be shot. Shit's not worth the effort, and I wanna hurry so I can go see Ancorman. :)*
God
This stupid ass bitch called out my entire crew
and it all went through
By the end this weak ass bitch only took on two
Set it up, startin with the worst endin with the best
for you thats the test
Cause you already fuckin denied taking on all the rest
He's dissin on my crew, because "God" thinks he's tight
something aignt right
Its polled God & Rascal,but Rascal ducked out in fright
So God went and got Daedal to take his co-leaders place
That right there is a disgrace
He kicked me out of his crew, but its him that I embraced
Man God when you kicked my ass out, shit i didnt even care
Dont be in despair
I was glad to be out of your crew, cause there's nothin there
Daedal
This fool keeps talkin shit cause he thinks hes got game
Look at his name, hes a pussy without- shit to proclaim
This fool had the balls to come on RB with the name Daedal
That shits suicidal, your wacker than Hung from American Idol
You tellin peeps that you merked me, but really i just go DQ'd
And i think he knew, hes a little baby so PEEKA BOO i see you
And something worse hes in Pandora's Box, no wonder he sucks
That crews a wack deluxe, all of your mother fuckin wins were luck
You got yourself into this battle man, you said that you can hang
boom boom bang, you will lose so bad even merked would be slang
Sorry it took me so long to spit, but i was at work, so here it is.
P.S. Were gunna K.O. you bitches!
God:
Yo, Why's this fucker think that he can defeat me?
you can't beat me, I been Rappin since B.C.*
My name is Ralkavelli, I'ma lyrical surgeon
Did God have a wife? Naw, hes always been a virgin
I'm urgin you to make me start, to rip ya chest apart
digest ya heart, an cut up every body part
In the name of the father, the son,and the holy fuckin spirits
The almighty God's gettin worked,and merked through my lyrics
So try an battle me, and give it everything you got
Let the smiting commence because I sense you'll need a lot.
Daedal:
Why should I rhyme, or waste my time on Daedal
Don't whine cause it's a crime,when my lyrics get fatal
I hear he likes it anal, but can't tell cause he's a fraud
While im sittin here bustin,hes busy thrustin it wit God
you say your spittin ill, but ima kill, you know i mean this
That avatars your favourite, cause it looks like God's penis
you see this? your losing and I'm spoiling your plans
Cause your punches are thrown, like a boxer wit broken hands
Lyrically Violating Ya'll, like a mad cow disease
The crowd will freeze, when we annihilate these wannabe's
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice drops ralk lol, now we are just waitin on Daedal
hey yo its like officially Sunday here lol, where are you at Daedal, your verse is due on Saturday remember lol
ehh..y waste time on these faggots?...half ass shit...
STUBBY
its my turn b...i cant believe ur actually battling...me and God just burn gs
but y does stub battle in front lines...
...he couldn't even pass the first round of the tourney!
u can learn from me bitch...ur wack...thats the reason ima give u brusing
even in his check in stub talks shit...
...but before that he already made an excuse for losing!
u had bad choosing...acceptin me and God in this...hoe, ur gonna get left
cause everyone knows l.v. is wack...
...they only get an audience cause they rep to da deaf!
u cant mess with the best...who cares where ur from, this whores dumb
and u can diss the mondos hoe...
...but 4 of our guys dont rap and we beat u to a forum!
fuck a sore thumb...im destroyin ur shit son...cause u always lose shit
and STUBBY's already washed up...
...he even put his comp in the laundry room to prove it!
_Ralkavelli_
that was a smooth spit...but ur next hoe...i already have u booked bitch
but just look at ur fuckin sig...
...how u gonna beat me?...ur flame still aint cookin shit!
i took ur wits...ur garbage hoe...tryin to be tight, but ur losin the fight
and seriously now ralkavelli...
...even ur fuckin avatar can barely get a shot in the light!
ur just gonna rot on this site...u try and be hip...but even ur cribs dull
and hows ralk steppin to me...
...when he even admits all of of shit is just flipped scribbles!
ill strip ur ribs and skull...im wastin u bitch...winnin, u wont even last dude
but ralk wont even count his loss...
....cause in his check in ralk couldnt even count past two!
ur fast to lose...see now ur screwed as i keep goin and shit on ur views
but whats the point of dissin ralk...
...in the callout thread he said he was the worst in his crew!
*his MSN is skribbleflip@hotmail.com
yall r some wack mothafuckas...thinkin ull win...ha ha...u bitches is dead...and thats word...
uppin 1 on this shit.......................................
god- your structure and flows were good. your personals and punches were ok, but u got a little weak towards the end......
And it must be admitted that I pretty much came like crap w/ bad wordplay
But in reality, my half-assed verses will win this, more than you can say
....stop talkin about your 'half ass' verses, u repeated that too much, it sounds like their all you've got.
daedal- i think that whole thing was wack. you repeat yourself too much....wack...hoe...whore. i mean, seriously, is that all u got? i think u should go out and by yourself a dictionary.
stubby- this verse was good, it was personal and it hit hard....
He's dissin on my crew, because "God" thinks he's tight
something aignt right
Its polled God & Rascal,but Rascal ducked out in fright
So God went and got Daedal to take his co-leaders place
That right there is a disgrace
He kicked me out of his crew, but its him that I embraced.
...that was like a major slap in the face for him.
ralk- In the name of the father, the son,and the holy fuckin spirits
The almighty God's gettin worked,and merked through my lyrics
So try an battle me, and give it everything you got
Let the smiting commence because I sense you'll need a lot...
...that was tight. it had a good flow, and the personals and punches, i think he's gonna have to go to the E.R, lol. this is some of your better shit, props.
v/ stubby and ralkavelli, good job guys
oooohhhhkaaaaaayyy....wow.. damn..too many lines for a break down so here goes the simple voting:
God- lmao @ that opener.. good shit..props to ya :thumbup:
nice personals in there, matter fact the whole verse had superb personals..you fell off towards the end of your first verse, nice wordplay in the second verse, decent flow, you ryhming was a lil simple, i could guess the last word, but overall well done..
Stubby-opener was blah, (stubby u can do better)..oh my god..second stanza or whatever that was , ....it was blah...seemed like throught ya whole verse u were just trying to ryhme words together instead of actually focusing on dissing The Next Level.
...moving on
Ralk..wow! damn..didnt know u had it in ya....that was something hot right there.. good hard hitting punches, nice flow..nice vocab u got goin there. ......
ANYWAYS.. I'LL DROP HALF MY VOTE NOW AND HALF LATER when the other kid post his shit...
dont ever have another crew battle...this is just too much typing..
okay..damn..daedal verse was aight.. this is tough to vote on because both teams only had one person that spit something hot... makes it hard to judge..
stubby's verse was just blah..but then ralk spit that fiyah...
god's verse was good but then his partner fucked it up for him..
shit i 'm gonna go with stubby and ralk....
dude escar i dont even care that you put in your opinion, cause im just interested in battlin bro, i mean dont get me wrong i would love to win this, but the drops comin from me are just for practice man, i dont care about the wins and losses, but thanks for your opinion anyways
:laugh: :roll: :laugh:Quote:
Originally Posted by kandy
But thanks for votin' anyways.
hey god, how come it isnt showin the polls like it does in a usual battle
I only said that once. :mad:Quote:
Originally Posted by crazyrapper14
But it's all good.
so on the poll its 1-1 even though it should be 1-0 cause escar and daedal are in the same crew
Ok nice battle.
God: great verse hit hard with punches ... how odd that you only put a half-assed job into it. Structure was there too. You did a good job. Props to you. At least your consistent.
Stubby: Strangely good verse from you LoL I was not expecting that but it was tight gods was better but yours was really good. Props to you. Consistency wise that was wack one day your "thee" shit and one day your "the" shit. LoL
Ralk: Your verse was tight as fuck. You and God were right up there. Some killa punches and personals. Props to you.
Daedal: ummm.....good job I suppose...? If the idea was to go as wack with your structure and verse as possible. Come on your a hell of a lot better than that? What happened???Writers block? all I can say is ouch...
Vote- Stubby and Ralk because Ralk matched God and Stubbys was better than Daedals.
You could vote. :thumbup:
iight heres my view....
Stubby:
I really thought you verse against god was weak, the only decent punch i liked was the closer. You had personals but the punchs with them were weak. Against daedal i think you came even weaker.. "wacker then hung from american idol" was ok, nothin special. Other than that i thought your opener and closer was weak, the opener about his name didnt hit. On your structure against god it was the first time ive seen you use that structure but it seemed like you did it pretty well.
Ralk:
You came pretty nice this battle, against god i liked the God/virgin line.. that punch really hit hard, but that was about the only thing that really stood out to me, everything else wasnt bad either but it was just OK. Your closer against him was decent too playing off that line in his sig. Just like stubby, against daedal you came a little weak. Theres nothing specific that stood out but you had a nice flow, structure was alright, In both your verses against God and Daedal you had some inner ryhming which shows that youve been elevating, overall you had a ok verse, i think you did came stronger then stubby against both God and Daedal. Keep elevating.
God:
Your opener was really nice, good personal and punch hit hard. It was also good to hear better use of the word "stubby" then relating to his dick like ive seen in the past. You came with alot of personals about kicking him out of your crew, him PMing you about elevating, and the punchs with them connected, you merked stubby in this battle. Against Ralk, you came alot weaker, flow and structure was nice. You opener was decent, a personal about him getting banned, commin back to get smacked. Other than that nothing really hit hard in my opinion.
Daedal:
Against stubby you had a nice opener, punch against him not making it past the first round that hit. All the way through your verse you had personals and punches that connected, your closer was alright, But the one that stood out and killed him was the Rep to the Deaf line. Now against Ralk, your opener was decent playing off his sig with the burner, punch hit. Wasnt feeling the avy/shot in the light punch, the line about flipped scribbles was good but your set up took away from the punch. Closer was a nice personal and set for a nice punch about him being the worst in the crew. Some advice i wasnt feeling throughout your verse with ralk the name calling, u called him a hoe and a bitch to many times, got annoying, just insult him by beating him with your verse.
For me this was a pretty easy battle to decide, Stubby you came weak as fuck, God and Daedal merked you. Ralk you came pretty nice but it just wasnt enough, i give you cred though, the verse against god was probly the best ive seen from you. God and Daedal came at you with more personals and consistent throught out thier verses with punches that in the end won it for them. Good job though, keep elevating.
V/ God and Daedal
Please return the favor with an honest vote
wtf is that vote about...are u hatin cause my crew beat yours in our crew battle or what...cause it seems your the only one to think that i sucked
^^^^^ Stubbs dont come at me like that, if you thought i was hating you should of PMed me but im tired of you whining, crying, dickriding so we gonna make this public... You need to check yourself dawg, 4 people have voted and out of those 4, 3 werent feeling you, so dont come at me like im hating, mmmm.... lets see....
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kandy
Then the only person that voted that said they were feeling you was Black Magic who tryed out for your Crew, hmmmm can someone say Dickriding???Quote:
Originally Posted by Escar
Black Magics tryout for lyrical violaters(Stubbys crew)
Even on top of that i have voted for you after we lost the crew battle,
My vote for Stubby against Phoenix
So get the fuck outta here with your bitching and dickriding dawg, seriously, dont come at me like that ever again
dude i asked if you were hatin dawg i wasnt sayin that you were so dont be goin and doin shit like that to try and sway the vote
ralk you dropped like no other there man, fuck wicked job
I didn't really try out for the crew LoL stubby just asked me to drop a verse... don't be hatin...
Yo, thanks for everyones input up to this point. Its still 2-2 and we need some more voters. Uppin<<<<<<<<
LMMFAO!!! :laugh:Quote:
Originally Posted by Jammin' Jobus
Hahaha read the battle you idiot.
Then you'll know who won.
uppin 3 on this peice...................................
You can vote for him but you don't have to sway.Quote:
Originally Posted by Escar
Uppin #4...
Vote, Jobus.
Uppin.............................................
bitch ass crew*** apart
^^Wana bet I can take your whole crew down single handedly?
I already K.O.'ed your leader, somethin' like, 30-0 in the FL tourney.
So don't talk shit, or I will have to call you stupid fucks out for a crew battle, and trust me we'll whore you.
Omfg, you guys actually got denied a forum! LMAO!
uppin 5 on this bitch..............................
after 46 posts it's only 2-2 ?!?!? WTF....................................
i can't really make a dision but i thing god took it im not gona vote because its out of hate for stubby but vote gizzard & tomers battle