Gizzard vs ~ILL~

lets do it no one hour shit like 10 minute spits

nope you did it wrong man, you got to click yes i want to ----this emcee which is at the bottom of the page where you make the battle

Rules-
10 Lines
no d.r
no hate
no feedin
no btitin
no recyclin
Blind Spit

u still up for diss shit maine no crew votes no fuckin gay shat

what are ytou talking about stubby

Oh never mind you set this shit up right that was my fault i missed the shit at the top i thought you forgot about it, so are you still up to battle me also or no

will see i gota rip diss mc first though

you ~ILL~ you 9 1/2 gaping ass hole swollen colin think your big balling im like a bungy cord without me your freefalling ripin mcs like a rail smokin them like buds im white and i aint no thug you can't conpete with gizzard im a verbal blizzard im i descrasing you verbaly dispace you the mic is like my life line put my verbs and nouns runnin mcs out of town, hey ill swallow the mc pill because your not gona makit so your struggle and fake it. you Can't handle billy G your not the first mc who tried to over trow me because when it comes down to it your softer than my bitches tits

aight check It...
Gizzard's like 3 Years Old Hanging With the Girls and not the Big Boys..
Everyone Gizzard arent a Big Guy, He still Likes to Play With his Tonka Toys..
Stubby Said he will battle him if he votes in his battle and make is snappy
Sorry to tell you ya flows is Crappy, I can give you a pop Cycle to make him happy
I know you cant battle by the looks of it you miles well get you Sweet Gay Faction
Because Masterbating to his avatarhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/images/avatars/sc3.gifIs the only way that Will Give him Some action
Theres only a difference between you and them, Your Gey and not them
if this Nigga got Kid Napped he wouldnt be found even if the Navy was lookin for him
Murking you some much Have left you with Sweet when you walk, You Bend
Somebody need some flows to lend, Did you get it or Do I have to click Resend

hey buddy if your gona battle make up your own rymes and if your gona call someone gay spell it right and your lippin my aviator maby your the gay one homeboy i an't no "NIGGA" because im white so get your shit straite and think before you hate

vote anyway you like i don't care but Ill is hatin and he riped rymes off the underground

OMG Kid Why are you upset, I didnt Say nothing to you, Your a cool person
Its a battle and im suppose to Say something about you..What am I suppose to do say good things and No kid I didnt Bite from the Underground Please Have proof..The Undergound sont Battle Kid and Hey

Why are you hating on My Because I was battling against you..Im am not suppose to say something good like this

Gizzard battling me you will kIll me so for you its just a test
nobody can compare you Because you know Why? Your the best

No Kid? So please stop fucking running your mouf to me after I didnt say nothing
to you kid and I Just was dropping my verse and Out..You know What

I cant take this shit Anymore MODs Can you do something about this piece of shit Herb

uppin

Vote Ill

I gotta vote for ill for having a better verse than gizzards. Ills punches hit harder, although it was hard to read, his verse was still better.

uppin

Good Verse Ill you won this due to your harder punches. And Gizzard..... Dont' be such a pussy seriously you were battling. Not to good of a verse by either but Ill took it because of his harder hitting punches.

uppin...Vote and I will return the favor

uhh...gizzard you got some messed up structure and your closer didn't rhyme wtf? Go 2 the RB elevation thread and learn how to battle... 4 fux sakes... kinda funny at times tho... so u had that going 4 you but thats it. few punches but not strong... ill you took this one with flow alone.. you didnt even need to throw a punch to beat this rookie. . . but u had a few decent ones none the less... work on your creativity man... seemed like some of your lines were kinda played


vote - ~ILL~

one sided-

gizzard- upu havent ellevated at all since your last battle man, work on your structure mainly and try to focus more on your opponent, cause all you did was shit talk none of it was directed towards ill

Ill- like sab said it didnt take much to beat gizzard but to me is still feel that you should throw up all you got in every battle man dont do half spits and shti, but in this battle you still did have some descent punches

V/ill

This battle was very one sided.

Ill: Yeah sabotage said it, some of your lines were kind of played. It didnt take much to beat Gizzard, but even so, a little creativity would definately improve your style.

Gizzard: Try to actually have punches aimed at your opponent as opposed to just writing random stuff. Your drop was too hard to read and lacked in knowledge of how to battle.

Ill wins hands down for a readable structure and better punches.

Vote// ~ILL~

I took the time to vote on yours, hit up one of the battles in my sig with an honest vote. Thanks :thumbup:

RETURN THE FAVOR

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136704

uppin for the last vote, Drop link I will return the favor

gizzard..couldnt find your flow...structure was terrible..its hard to read..
the structure should be like this...
line 1 xxxxxx
line 2 xxxxxx

^see makes the flow on point..and plus you had no punches...you should diss the person..not say your gonna kill them...you had metas..you have potential..just elevate..

ill..structure and flow was point..had some punches that were weak..but you didnt need anything to hard to win..kep it up..

v/ill
for overall better verse