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..gotta come strong on acount of this bitches d/r votes..
..i watch him spit his verse and i think arent those my quotes?..
..ima merk this cat, and he still cant see me, you look into an eclipse?..
..ever taste the feeling of merked? you gunna feel it better then ya moms lips..
..as we said, ten lines, all it takes to take down this wannabe rapper..
..hes gunna scream when your elimnated your sister, i already heard her..
..ass thread finalist? no wonder i got alot punches, u must be hated..
..his punches cant be harder then mj ever even tried maturbated..
..it takes more then 100% to beat me, ima bring it to you 120 percent..
..u gunna give up fasta then 40 days and 40 nights, givin up sex for lent..
quick spit, ill wait for yours...
ackkkk fuck my 4th line is stretched... rb posting is wacked.
it doesnt matter how it looks
it matters how it sounds
and it sounds stretched
n the posting aint whack, you are :)
Like the MTV show, Your out in Round One, Dismissed
Kid's got a generic diease, Professional Name: Wackness!
You got no predictions, Nobody thinks your rhymes are outrageous
And if I'm just maulling him, I hope his disease isn't contagious!
Been here over a year, Your Boring, have no appeal to the reader
Needs help to win, so get on your knees and pray to your crew leader!
His feet are bare, Cuz my punches simply knock off his socks
Trying to get to the Next Level, But still stuck on Building Blocks!
He has Mood Swings, Headaches, Body feels like 150 Degrees
In that case, Call me Vaccine, The Way I'm Killing this disease!
Votes.
Eclipse came much better with punches. They hit much harder. Generic came with played and wack lines. Didn't like 'em at all.
Oh and Generic used mom jokes, OMFG, they are so played, and whenever I see one in a verse, I just fuckin' laugh my ass off.
V/Eclipse
Pz
Generic came terrible. & Eclipse won with one line. The building blocks line.
Vote-...Eclipse...
^word...vote eclipse...he came much nice generic isnt back into it yet.
I havent battled in more then 6 months...i guess theres my disadvantage.
excuses....anywase
vote-elipse
you werent that great, but you came with enough to beat disease
He has Mood Swings, Headaches, Body feels like 150 Degrees
In that case, Call me Vaccine, The Way I'm Killing this disease!
that was pretty much the only decent line
bad verse generic
Structure:This goes to Eclipse, cuz generic structure confused me and didn't look 2 great
Personals:Eclipse, like kahn or whoever said ya mama jokes are played especially if they are yours generic
Punches:Okay punches about him praying to his crew, and a bunches of other shit i don't generic had any worth mentioning punches at all
v/Eclipse
Generic Disease-
Ehhh...wack...'nuff said...but since I'll feel guilty if I don't give you proper criticism, I'll go more indepth...you're flow was awful..you're rhymes sucked..no punchlines (even tho you rapped about how many punches you have)..nothing made this anything but wack...elevate alot...
Eclipse-
Damn....you killed him....you're second line won the battle for you...every bit of nameplay that u used was dope....pretty good verse here....
V/ Eclipse
Generic, Blah. Had no good lines, or even half decent punch attempts. Wasn't feeling it at all.
Eclipse, had no good shit either, but at least he attempted shit. The closer could have been dope, and the god line too. Horrible wording, but he still gets the vote.
Vote: Eclipse
-W1
Punches- Eclipse
Personals- Ecliipse
flow- Eclipse
Multis- neither
Overall- Eclipse just came harder in every catergory
My vote- Eclipse
Blah I assume Generic disease was decent with a 8-0 record or whatever.
But....Just no.
Came played stretched with little wit. Ehh....Nothing really attempted. I didnt like a single line. Mom line was blah sister line was blah, MJ line was blah. Try to come with fresh concepts.
Eclipse: Dont finish lines with exclamation marks. Ehh Closer was nice. The rest were average. ...Wasnt really feeling the rhyme scheme but you did beat generic.
Vote/eclipse.
Vote: ...Eclipse...
Reason: WAY better punches and a little better flow. Generic had some ok punches, but nothing that stood out. Eclipse had some good punches, nothing outstanding, but hard enough to take the win.
yea, generic could have came stronger...there was no real stand out lines...this is a tournament, you need to kill your opponent in every round...
Eclipse...not a real strong verse either...i think you backed off when you saw his verse, but you backed off waaay too much...still your punches were better,
You got no predictions, Nobody thinks your rhymes are outrageous
And if I'm just maulling him, I hope his disease isn't contagious!
that was decent...could have flipped it better, but it won you this one...
vote...Eclipse...
disease- stretched. Poor punches with no real creative touch in them. Overall a real weak verse...
Eclipse- ive seen better from you but you didnt really have to put up quality against him. Just enough to win. And thats what you did. You had some punches that could have been worded better, but no big deal.
Vote- Eclipse
bleh. gineric came out wack in this one. he had some weak punches, and even the ok ones he had didn't really hit. eclipse took this wit the more consistant/harder punches, and the great wordplay.
vote= Eclipse
You guys stop voting on this. Eclipse wins. Wait until others drop and vote on those battles.
good opener eclipses, nice punch buh didnt rhyhme buh the other dude came hsit
vote eclipse
vote-elipse
had a whole better verse then Gen..
pz.
whoohoo im losing 15-0. ahh i knew i came weak and i deserve the loss.
v/ eclipse.... pretty much all the reasong above.
Eclipse, with ease
Eclipse mudered him.. the punches he used off of his name were pretty good.. hit hard.. his verse was consistent and never fell off.. that good opener was a good way to start things off and closer was great and finished the verse nicely
G.D. - ya came played basically.. wit the mom shit, and all ya punches period.. you were also streached and had no flow at all.. cut down ya lines a bit, and start battling again.. fuck that 6month shit.. i aint seriously battled in around 8 months.. yet when i key a verse or 2 i still murder kids
anyway.. enough was said ..
V/ Eclipse... he mudered the kid wit his nice verse.. i wonder who taught him to write this well..
*ehummm*
*Looks Around*
*Finds My User Name*
*Chuckles*
*Walks Out Of Thread*
gee....... this is the first battle ive seen the winner getting all the votes....... *giggles*
*then looks at battle and thinks*
*this guys must almost be off, cuz his dicks been ridden so much*
lol jk....... anyways v/ elcipse
ayo if u beefin ill battle you in EFL or FL
v/ eclipse for comin harder in everything, basicallly generics flow was way off, and his lines came out strectch in some places props 2 eclipse though
Its uncountable
i win.
Lol, it's like 30-0 or somethin' lmfao.
Stop Voting Of This Battle. He Ouviously Wins. 1 More Vote Wont Do Anything!!!!
Bah!!!
my vote Eclipse
Flow- Generic ur flow seemed stretched out. Like u said. Eclipse ur flow was smooth and well structured. Nothing too complex.
Punches- Generic ur punches didn't seem too effective. They just didn't seem creative. Like the MJ one. It's been used a million times and u didn't flip it differently. Eclipse ur punches were on point. I was crackin up at ur opener about his generic disease is whackness. Ur punches were creative and strong.
Personals- The generic disease line where u called him whackness actually goes here. Eclipse u obviously outmatched Generic in personals because almost every line was a personal. The crew one and ur ending also. By the way th closing was played.Generic I maybe might have seen one personal in ur verse.
Well overall Eclipse just came stronger.
who the hell is generic disease?
anyway generic you had absolutely no punches,
you came styretched and whack...then you made an excuse
about not battlign for 6 months...used a momjoke also n it awsnt remotely funny
Eclipse=Vote Why? he had some personals actually alot also he came wiht actual punches and no mom jokes so yeah he one note.he didnt make excuses either
Bugz Bunny is that you..?
cmon i want 30 votes..
Lol
yeah this wasn't a very good battle.. both came pretty weak... generic your verse hardly held my attention. You had no good punches or personals. Your flow went off point alot too. Just wasn't really feeling your verse man. elevate. Eclipse you kept on flow and held my attention more than generic did but still didn't really have anything spectacular. I'd say your punches and personals were definately stronger than generics but you weren't going over the top. You did what you had to.. on flow... you took this one hands down.
btw please vote on me vs stryk9 its getting slept on.
Vote - ...Eclipse...
...Eclipse... advances to Rd.2, closed.