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^READ & Good Luck...
Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern
alright im checkin in man.........................
Man, you been online for a long time, so spit.
I keyed a quick verse for you, and I'll edit it here when you spit.
Pz
im pullin out of this battle man, i wasnt even supposed to be in this shit, i never kept checkin in,
smoka :thumbup:
Stop postin' in here dumbass.
looks like im gonna be doin this after all no problem i can face ill kahn its goin to be hard but i will do it, checkin in for real
Word.
So ILLunatic, just shut up, and don't post in here.
It's already clogged up, so please, be quiet.
Aight check it...
Quick key, goin' 12...
Beatin' me's outta this world, it's like science fiction bitch
Here to win? U got merked by every1 on the prediction's list
I'll try 'n' make it clear coz... Rap, in general, u just lack it fool
Runnin' the rap game? Nah, only wraps u do are package foods
Wrote this in 5 minutes, plus I'll just laugh when u post ur verse
And puttin' someone under ya name is the only time u'll be the first (Sig)
Votes by dickriding, damn, in FL you'll have an army soon
Plus you're left out to dry, like the PC in your laundry room (His pic thread)
You're career's ended, basically, you're roasted so rehearse
He's a pussy by blood, he pulled out, 'fore I even posted my verse
My advice is to keep runnin', and when u do, go farther dude
And fuck sonnin', that's already done, now I'll father you! (Sonnin' = son u)
So it looks like im battlin kahn, im cool with that
but im tellin u it isnt gonna beI read the predictions, & i got one person that believes in meQuote:
ehem time to rip this cat
I got more fuckin wins than u im the one who grieves emcees
Your winnin your crew battle, only cause your battlin Stryke 9
I already won my crew battle, your lines aignt nothin like mine
Your flow is wack man and so is your crew Pandora's Box
Your punches aignt goin nowhere your like a damn flora rock
Look at the words damn im on line 9 and i got more to say
But i guess i will have to diss you on that shit another day
line 8
Flora- a living organism lacking the power of locomotion,
(so in that line i was sayin he cant diss me cause he is lacks the power to do so)
garbage from you stubby i was looking for better shit from, kahn ya verse was cool, but i know you can do better
Structure: giving this to kahn cuz stubby's internals weren't consisent thru out his verse like kahn's was
Personals:Stubby's disses were garbage dissing him and cru is cool but you gotta came more unique than the diss youw wrote
Kahn's disses were better and on point
Punches:Stubby had none worth mentioning that flora shit was whack and don't explain ya lines, kahn had punches that hit alot harder than stubby's
V/Kahn
wait a minute now i always accept the feed that i get but this shit that urban just said was all wrong, i know those are good disses on kahn,
^ Nah.. there not....
STUBBY came pretty weak.. kahn had decent lines..
v/escar
damn this sucks, well at least i tried to go against someone much less someone as good as kahn
Lol, like... DUH!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by UrbanReelist
It took me 5-10 min. Oh and STUBBY, those weren't really good disses agaisnt me.
Learn how to use personals and word them correctly so they'll be good punches :thumbup:.
Pz
Kahn -
improved since his last battle...fixed his structure and had a few better lines...still nothing was great...the "keep running" thing was kinda funny, but very very predictable....(meaning right before I read the line I was thinking "he hasn't dissed his avatar yet")...rhymes were ok...multis didn't exist...decent verse overall..
Stubby -
I've seen much worse on this board....you're verse wasn't completely horrible, but it wasn't really good...the disses were a little below average, and your closer ruined any chance of you winning this battle...but you talk about Kahn like he's god or something, he dropped an average verse and it wouldn't have taken much to capitalize on it. Anyway....just elevate, don't give up...
v/ Ill Kahn
peace
stubby, that was shit, dude. escar DID rip ya, and you fed. and BOTH verses sucked cuz ya both explained. end of story.
vote- escar/ill kahn
Yeah, I didn't have multies at all.Quote:
multis didn't exist
Beatin' me's outta this world, it's like science fiction bitch
Here to win? U got merked by every1 on the prediction's list
I'll try 'n' make it clear coz... Rap, in general, u just lack it fool
Runnin' the rap game? Nah, only wraps u do are package foods
Wrote this in 5 minutes, plus I'll just laugh when u post ur verse
And puttin' someone under ya name is the only time u'll be the first (Sig)
Votes by dickriding, damn, in FL you'll have an army soon
Plus you're left out to dry, like the PC in your laundry room (His pic thread)
You're career's ended, basically, you're roasted so rehearse
He's a pussy by blood, he pulled out, 'fore I even posted my verse
My advice is to keep runnin', and when u do, go farther dude
And fuck sonnin', that's already done, now I'll father you! (Sonnin' = son u)
Read it well before you say I didn't have multies. Or you prolly don't know what it is and mistaked it for internals?
Advice: Dont explain your shit. If we can understand it without you explaining it..its either nice or dope. If you have to explain..then that means..you dont have confidence in your attempted wordplay..or metaphor..same difference. Anyway..
Vote-Escar/Kahn
He came with punches.
Stubby, I dont know what you're doing.
Beatin' me's outta this world, it's like science fiction bitch
Here to win? U got merked by every1 on the prediction's list
---Ehh...Decent. But he didn't get merked we just predicted against him.
I'll try 'n' make it clear coz... Rap, in general, u just lack it fool
Runnin' the rap game? Nah, only wraps u do are package foods
---Eh..again decent.
Wrote this in 5 minutes, plus I'll just laugh when u post ur verse
And puttin' someone under ya name is the only time u'll be the first (Sig)
---First of all if you wrote it in 5 minutes why didnt you post it? Theres no way of proving that you did. For all I know it coulda been written in 2 days. And his name is beside someone. But strickly as a bunch. Its decent-ish.
Votes by dickriding, damn, in FL you'll have an army soon
Plus you're left out to dry, like the PC in your laundry room (His pic thread)
---He doesnt get dickriding. But as a punch...its funny.
You're career's ended, basically, you're roasted so rehearse
He's a pussy by blood, he pulled out, 'fore I even posted my verse
---I didn't like it.
My advice is to keep runnin', and when u do, go farther dude
And fuck sonnin', that's already done, now I'll father you! (Sonnin' = son u)
---Again decent.
Escar came with a decent verse. Nothing spectacular. Ehh dont use that font. Make you look like one of those people who wants to be a vet. A little bit of wit here and there. Some punches were decent. So a decent verse.
So it looks like im battlin kahn, im cool with that
but im tellin u it isnt gonna be
Quote:
ehem time to rip this cat
---Quotes are soooooo gay and this isnt even a good one. No punch.
I read the predictions, & i got one person that believes in me
I got more fuckin wins than u im the one who grieves emcees
---Wins don't mean anything. I liked the multi ....but again no punches.
Your winnin your crew battle, only cause your battlin Stryke 9
I already won my crew battle, your lines aignt nothin like mine
---Ehh stryk9 is my brother so I wont comment of his reference. But again where the fuck is the punch. Saying his lines are different isnt a punch.
Your flow is wack man and so is your crew Pandora's Box
Your punches aignt goin nowhere your like a damn flora rock
---Decent. I guesse.
Look at the words damn im on line 9 and i got more to say
But i guess i will have to diss you on that shit another day
---WARNING-NOT A CLOSER. Wack.
Ok you dropped wack. wackity wack. almost no punches. Quotes are gay. Decent multis but need always need a punch. Soooooooo.
Vote/Escar by a landslide.
^^Why the hell would it take me 2 days to write a 12 line verse?
And why I waited & didn't post immediately is coz I wrote a quick key the same time he was on MSN, so he said he's about to post soon, so I was like it's cool.
stubby i think u know u came weak but it's aight.
Flow- I think Ill Kahn had the more fluent and structured flow then Stubby. Stubby i think ur flow was ok but it was a little to simple.
Punches- Ill kahn had the more creative and wittier punches then stubby. Stubby u had to explain ur punches which is never a good thing. Im referring to the Flora thing.
Personals-Ill Kahn also had the personals over u stubby. He was dissin ur sig and talkin about the predicition list and they were actually pretty decent. the only personal I saw in ur sig was about the pandora box and it wasn't that strong.
Overall Kahn took this by a margin over Stubby. It just didnt seem like u were dissin him directly and ur dissins just werent that strong.
Uppin'
Yeah fairly simple decision here.
Kahn just outnumbered you with punches and personals. Some hit hard and some didnt and i thought tthat stubby would have a chance if he came good.
one problem, he didnt
No punches or personals results in a big fat L for dinner.
V/Kahn
Ok
Kahn - verse wasnt bad, blah bout doin in 10 mins that dont make no difference, ya should of use more time cos it werent brilliant. but you did have stronger punches and personals
stubby - not great from you man, one punch was pretty good but part from that you just lacked them, ya had plenty of time, ya should of dropped decent man, flow wasnt bad, but work on harder punches
v/ kahn
oh man I'm confused.... Escar layed it down but stubby was battlling Kahn? aww man.. But anyways on to voting.. Stubby I appreciated your punches nice job but you just didn't have the complexity and seemingly research that Kahn put into his? Props to both.
Vote-Kahn
khan your verse made me crack the fuck up. That was probably the strongest verse in personals ive ever read. Good job on that one man.. that was an admirable drop. Keep it up. Stubby this was one of the wackest drops ive seen from you. Wtf? Don't come with poor self esteem like " at least one person believes in me " it aint doin you any justice.
Vote- Ill Kahn.
Lol, thx for the votes people.
Good battle Stubby, no hate, no beef.
Props to all.
Pz
Kahn - 'Quick Key'; man that's bullshit. lol. I'm not trying to be an asshole, but let's be honest here.... Chances are, you had to do a little bit of research to get the punch on his picture. No? Your verse sounded nice, and saying you 'key'd', just makes you sound insecure. So if anyone was like 'wack verse!!!' - you could be like 'yo, i just keyed it'. Anyway, it was a good read, and you obviously won.
Stubby- I knew you were dead from the moment you said you were pulling out. You also need some net-confidence as well. Kahn is far from impossible to bet, so have some faith. Your verse stunk of writer's block... so next time take a day or two to think it out.
Vote/Kahn
There is no question who won this battle. It was one sided.
Stubby my man... you dropped completely dope. I loved the way you dissed the kid. Your personals were KILLER.. and your punches where HARDCORE. OMG you got this battle won so easily. My vote goes to you with no question.
back to reality
iLL Kahn - your punches were pretty good in some places, but a few of them i wasn't feelin. Your personals were pretty nice as well. Flow was nice. and overall you did pretty decent.
V/ *cough*Pre-writer*cough* iLL kahn
^^No, I don't, never, and never will pre-write.
I don't know why you even keep sayin' it.
Uppity up...
ok ....Kahn...ya verse was ah'ight you had some good punches, an the personals were on point, your flow was cool an structure was cool, your verse was solid all round coulda been stronger but it did its job in this one
Stubby.....you dropped a really weak verse, your punches were weak an most of your verse was you bragging not a good idea in a battle, flow was ah'ight but that was like only good thing bout ya verse so I'd say you lost this one son.
Vote: Kahn
There is no sound in text... ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Escar
This batle fawkin' sucked.
Vote: STUBBY
April Fools!
I vote for that other guy, Scare, or Races or something.
Vote: ^That guy.
Because both verses sucked, but STUBBY didn't punch at all, I don't know how you have 17 wins with verses like that.
cause i beat stupid ass bitches like you all the time GOD
v/ ill kahn
Had better punches and personals,
Stubby came weak, he can come better than that
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Escar advances to Rd.2, closed.