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check.... 10 lines....votings finished for me...probably the only real four votes in this entire first round...wouldnt kill people to actually explain shit
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...95#post1523395
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...97#post1524697
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...70#post1525670
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...98#post1534498
Checkin...... imma edit this post and leave the links. Boutsta go vote.10 lines it is.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post1523576
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post1527611
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post1527628
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post1527654
Whorage is automatic when i force feed heat to this faggot
get clapped bitch...
He 'posted his verse' when I said take a 'whack' at it
It really is that big? ur smallness creates womens comments
Acknowledge his sig cuz.......
Lyrisic can only spit when him and his dog lock lips
This bitch gone fighter?Well I can extort truth in many ways
Ur just an Improv biter, Whose Line Is It Anyways?
I detect ur spit cant blaze me ho, Dan Ocean goin pro bono
U couldnt get on Radio even if cuba gooding went homo
ur layin flat on the mat....
Has Been that has not yet been clapped, so i begin attacking
Ur a waterd down Sapp ,worse than Warren fasting
bastard...i've used that "whose line is it anyways" line...lol...i know your not biting, just a bitch that someone hiht me with a line i used...fucking irony...anyways...here ya go kids...
I'ma merciless savage going up against a cat thats sub-average
Basically you couldn't save yourself if you were waiting for marriage
I'll break up EA and take this simple bastard out of the game
...When i throw danny right in the middle of his last name.......(ocEAn)
And if you holding secrets, something you dont want to speak
I'll laugh and all while i crack ya skull and let your information leak
He should of never took up rap, I got this wack cat shook up
Since he knows this is more of a miss-match then a lesbian hook up!
He needs the best of healing, since this loss got his emotioins reeling
So cut your heart out , mail it overnight and express your feelings!
Vote- Danny.
Lyrisic- you came aight started good, then went down. flow was there, but u cant rhyme the same two words ' up up' word. punches were thrown, some hit. The ocean line was decent.
Danny- You came good. you came personal, whose line line was decent. flow was there. take a whack at it line was nice. those lines got you the win. lyrisic had a nice ocean line.
notta bad battle
vote- danny. pretty close
Lyrisic took this one, i thought. he had the better punches and more personals. Danny ocean had a good verse too, tho, don't get me wrong... it's just Lyrisic had harder hitting punches.
vote=Lyrisic
Hmmmm... Not bad. Danny Ocean had a pretty complex verse with nice personals. Lyrisic had goods nameplay with witty punches. But I gotta give this to the wittier one, because i enjoyed his verse more.
Vote: Lyrisic
Vote danny
Structure:Danny's Structure was overall better between the both of them, great structure from the both of y'all
Personals:Nice personals from the both y'all here it was hard to decide who got this catergory
Punches: Even tho lyrsisc had cool punches, i like that punch bout his name, so did danny and only one punch really stood out to me in this battle which was the whose lines is it anyways joint which is why i vote danny
good battle from the both y'all, but danny really got cuz of that line
Weak battle. Both came wack.
Danny's shit was just a bit better though.
V/Danny
Vote-Lyrisic
And I believed everyone has took a stab at the "Whose Line is it Anyway" line. I have atleast. Lyrisic had better punches & personals.
v/ danny
Danny- you had good punches and Whose Line is IT anyways line took it with ya. I liked ur flow. Strcuture was good.
LYrisic- i heard too many crack ya skull and ripp out ya heart lines, sounds so wack, played out. nice flow and strucutre.
GOOd battle
v/danny
I got lyrisic takin this
danny, the only line you had was
This bitch gone fighter?Well I can extort truth in many ways
Ur just an Improv biter, Whose Line Is It Anyways?
but thats kinda played, and the cuba gooden jr. line was pretty good...but besides that, it was blah
lyrisic, pretty good verse, you werent very consistant, but neither was danny, anywase, you got the better vere...
so
vote-lyrisic
Danny- your verse was decent, wasnt feelin ya structure, all i gotta really say about ur verse was mst of ur lines were played
Lyricis- your verse was pretty good, liked your consistency, your punches were harder hitting and thats what counts
My Vote- lyrisic
Vote: Lyrisic
Reason: Better punches and a little better flow. I also liked Lyrisic's structure better, don't center it ocean, it would be better. But Lyrisic gets this for a harder hitting punches.
Lyrisic: Express line was cool. Information leak was alright. West were kinda blahesque. Your flow was a little off. Came with decent wit in a few bars but not enough. So...overall an ok verse. you shoulda used an oceans eleven line.
Danny: Dont use visuals no one gives a shit if your verse is pretty. Ok. You had the better flow but you have to find a way to get rid of those little half lines. they kind of fuck it up. Work them into the punch. Dont use a "whos line is it anyways" line. Radio line was blah. Your opener was your only slightly decent line. Structure was off.
So..
Vote/lyrisic.
7-4 me...this is a damn good battle...regardless of the winner...i have to give props to Danny on this one...cant wait to see how it ends...
dannys verse was def. below average....ur punches sucked... i dont know how ne one voted for you, ya shit was basic... and didnt diss the kid good enough... wack
lyrisic.... average... flow was a little off.. punches were better than his so...
u did ok, enough to win.
vote - L
peace
danny- you should really just write in normal color, that red just looks weird. And like Jobus said, your lines were also strange...written and split in half like that. Sometimes people can pull it off ( I think M~M does something similar?) but you didnt. As far as the actual verse: you had that whose line is it anyway punch. And the rest just didnt do it for me. Not well rounded enough.
Lyrisic- Your structure was def better, no doubt. I dont think any of your punches hit like his Whose Line, but they were better than the rest of his. It made yours more well-rounded and overall better.
Vote- Lyrisic
vote danny cuz he got punches multis and humor, lyrisuc just had personals better..danby better werdplay
can i get a second opinion on that vote^^^from TheWonnishEye....i didnt have a single personal in my verse, aside from the ocean line...
weak battle..
Danny - started off well, but then came pretty whack near the end. your opening 2-3 bars were pretty tight
Lyricist - boo.. elementary shit pretty much... punches didnt hit him well... and wasnt enjoyable to read..
v/danny
lol...elementary...aiight...9-6 me....still close....
Going with Danny on this one
damn i ahte ho all the newbs vote for one person and everyone who knows wut there talking about votes for the correct winner......... lyrisic.........
V. Lyrisic
both werent the greatest. . in fact both werent great at all.. but some ones gotta win
lyrisic hit harder wit his punches
so he wins
vote..Danny was feeling his drop more in the 1st few bars he was dope but then went downhill..
Lyricsic..punches were weak and barely hit him..
pz.
it's 10-8
The realist and Dizzles vote don't count.Plus one voted for me and one voted for u.
Quote:
Originally Posted by +Danny Ocean+
I was never good at Math, but I think Lyrisic takes it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyrisic
woah woah woah....all the votes count, or we go back and strip ALL the bullshit votes...in which case it would be a lot more then two, and a slightly larger difference....i mean there was a guy that voted for you that complimented your verse with things you didnt do, and complimented my verse with things i didnt do....so we're not stripping votes until Smoka comes and says it himself....Quote:
Originally Posted by +Danny Ocean+
Not particualrly...Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyrisic
starter-lyrisic (that shit was nice)
enjoyment-lyrisic
punches-lyrisic
flow-ocean
finisher-lyrisic
best line from fom ocean:
I detect ur spit cant blaze me ho, Dan Ocean goin pro bono
U couldnt get on Radio even if cuba gooding went homo
^^^that shit had me rolling best line of the match
from lyrisic:I'ma merciless savage going up against a cat thats sub-average
Basically you couldn't save yourself if you were waiting for marriage
sry ocean although u had the best line from the match i have to vote for lyrisic
vote=lyrisic
i meant vote wise...so die...slow...Quote:
Originally Posted by God
lyrisic-12
Ocean-8
The voting sucks and to god please get stabbed in the eye.
Voting sucks in the way that theirs a lot of unexplained votes
vote lyrisic
umm danny your things didnt rhyme
or flow or have structure
you had couple punches but they were weak
lyrisic your was pretty weak too but it rhymed mostly so you take this
v/lyric
vote no my battle vs sabatoge
how dare u say my verse didn't rhyme. U must be blind. U are the cunt of all cuntesses.
14-8 me
V/Lyrisic
Flow and structure was better, good punches.
props to both, good battle.
Maybe i can't count but u know u got a bitch vote. He said my verse didn't rhyme.
well you got a couple too....one dude complimented on shit neither of us even did......i'm sure smoka is going to sort them out anyways....