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^READ & Good Luck...
Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern
I'm in...'
prepare to DIE...
j/k..
prepare to GET VOTED AGAINST...(somehow it doesn't sound as menancing...)
peace
Scriptcious vs. K. Cypha
Eclipse vs. Generic Disease
Stubby vs. Ill Kahn
Wasp vs. Quill vs. StreetzGullie
Givng him something to aspire to..
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
(*) for those who don't know...in england the word for "ciggerate" is "fag"
iight...let the voting commense
up...
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
first line was coo', didnt get the second one
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
lol, this is a nice personal
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
lol, damn nice
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
dont understand
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
lol, nice personal
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
lol haha, nice personal
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
lol, this made me laugh.. duno why
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
would be nice personal.. but his names d black :huh:
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
not feelin this sorry
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
he dropped before you, other wise this would of been quiet good
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
lol- these were played a couple of years ago
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
nice bar..quiet a nice metaphor, first line made me laugh
personals: black
punches: black
Meta's/ Wordplay: hmm- this was about even
multis: rapid - had a few
Bleh.. Vote- Mr. D Black - all around better verse... nice battle, keep elevating.
okay battle
Structure:Both of y'all had good structure, but blacks internals were better more consisent
Personals:Black got this that name Personal was hot, best bar of the battle,Rapid had good personals like b.black joint just didn't outshine his real's name personal
Punches: both emcees had good punches and they were just about even and so i can't give this catergory to any1
Black won this with good personals, structure and decnet punches and rapid just couldn't keep up in the all of the catergories
v/Black
This battle was ok.
Rapid came with a few played lines, meh, yeah just a few. Others were average, not anything great. Didn't really enjoy his verse.
D. Black came with really hard hitting punches. Good use of personals too. Plus the SmokaJoka's cousin line had me crackin' the fuck up lmfao.
V/D. Black
Nard broke it down well.
Realim hard much harder hittin punches alot of good personals and good wordplay was used. flow was ight, structure werent great, but punches win battles and realim came alot harder
v/ realim
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v/ rapidfire..... his opener killed it for me... although it did depart from there... musical chairs on deaths row.. classic
Wow@this.
RapidFire won.
Mr. B came stretched & used a William Hung line. & your last two lines didnt even rhyme. = /
I wasnt really feeling your punches or wording.
^ thought i was the only one that noticed..
Vote: ~RaPiDfIrE~
Reason: The opener killed it for me. His flow was good through the whole thing. The B. Black line was nice, but everyone says his name is D. Black. Which it is, but I think he changed it, but I dunno. Anyways, I loved Black's closer, it was tight, but it didn't rhyme. Anyways, good battle.
D black verse was wack, his punches were really weak, personals were really weak not a good read at all, all he did was brag in his verse instead of insulting his opponent not a good thing son, overall a pretty weak verse
Rapid.....your opener shut this shit down had me laughing hard son, nice way to open things up, the rest was ok you focused on him instead of hyping yourself up so I think that your verse was a lot better good drop try to stay more consistent throughout but you still took this one
Vote: Rapid
^ yes, he changed his name to Mr. D. Black....I'm not SURE if he did it after I posted my verse, but I know he did it before I wrote mine...I wrote mine on wordpad so I could look at other shit on the net while writing it, and I didn't realize the name change til I looked at votes today...kinda bitch move, but I don't care....Quote:
The B. Black line was nice, but everyone says his name is D. Black. Which it is, but I think he changed it, but I dunno.
4-4....damn it's exciting isn't it? lol
Cry me a river son, i'll tear through his 'tissue' like a fucked hymen,
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
wasn't realli feelin,decent opener..5/10
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
^it's okay personal,i wasnt realli feelin it,6/10
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
^i felt flow was kind of forced here,personal was iight..6/10
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
^hmm, decent..6/10
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
^this was iight personal,flow was more "on",6.5/10
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
^where did the flow go, and the punch wasnt so great either..6/10
Overral =35.5/60
I felt your flow was inconsistent at times, vocab was decent, meta's werent really there,as was wordplay, punches weren't that hard hitting and your personals were fine.
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
^lol, nice witty lines i liked it,8/10
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
nice personal,7/10
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
nice personal,7/10
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
played,kinda felt like it was a filler,5/10
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
nah,5/10
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
^i never knew that meant a fag,lol,good,7/10
Overral = 39/60
Better punches and personals, vocab wasn't really their but flow and structure more on point, i think you took it...
Vote = Rapidfire
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Quote:Lol.. that killed me more than his verse did. :laugh:
Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
2.
and rapid, i changed my name for other reasons.. not for this battle....
Mr B you had an ok verse.. some good creativity at times... not the best flow but on point for the most part... your punches and personals weren't all that strong but you had an ample amount of them. Rapid I enjoyed reading your verse. Your punches and personals were straight forward and right to the point. You had good creativity and you were kinda witty at times. I enjoyed reading your verse so you get my vote.
Vote - RapidFire
btw I don't care about ur name change...look at the thread title if you want to see why I called him "B. Black"...
peace
V/Mr.D Black
Very nice punches, good structure and definatly good personals
Close battle, props to both.
Cause checking your shit got me wondering why Willium Hung started Rap rhyming,
NO
All these people can't be wrong, im winnin this shit, even you on my dick,
Because it compliments your whackness, ~wHeN yOuR NamEs wRiT oUt lIke ThiS~,
even you on my dick?Need English lessons?Whackness punches have two possibilities either they're really hard hitting or they don't land at all...2nd
Don't care about your experience, 3 years taught you to flee first, (obvious personal)
Cause this cat needs to slip-off-my-balls, like the surgury got reversed,
stopped reading at the brackets....explaining is annoying and WHACK
He's an internet-thug, I'll merk his text and audio he'll try to fight me,
I'm telling you to stick to audio..... Thats why oPey doesnt like me,
decent
He feels all special, he's smoka's cousin, i swear he NEVER drops it,
But theres something he failed to tell you son.. You're adopted
ouch..could of hit a bit harder though..
Don't bitch about dickriding, because your disabled shit got you free parking,
These people aint 'bowing down to their superior MC', There just on the ground laughing..
NO RHYME..I'm sick of avatar,sig,user title and so on punches...
My verse is devastating, punches takin ya breath slow...
cuz ya shit is plain stupid, like musical chairs in death row...
ok
this kid's a wannabe, I'm pretty sure the voters see that...
cuz even w/ my verse burnin ya, you wouldn't B. Black...
he changed his name now but this was decent...
You're punches are old and played, like ancient recitals...
^^ which is the complete opposite, of your custom title...
NO
Leave you wrapped in a noose, this faggot will lose...
just no-show kid....atleast then you'll have an excuse...
didn't like
Ya girl says that ur hung....yea just keep ya dreams ahead...
cuz tha only 9 millimeter you got, is hangin between ya legs...
ouch....9mm..ouch
if semen was alcohol, then Black's liver is trashed...
cuz he's on the fag-tip, like an english ciggerate ash....*
NO...semen..nonononono...you shouldn't have to explain either
Rapid wins for having one more decent punch...
Vote Rapid Fire
vote rapidfire
Rapid takes this battle with punches and better personals. Both verses were pretty good but it seems that Rapid just came harder. Props to both and no hate.
vote Rapid