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^READ & Good Luck...
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Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern
Signing in..
Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
checkin in............................................
here's my four. http://http://www.rapbattles.com/for...36#post1524136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136111
it's obvious...
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
*fi'ty: i shortened fifty to make it rhyme with shitty.
*"Take ya thoughts Outside the box" = a play on his sig. (...Take this Outside)
No good punches from Script. Wack structure. K had no good punches, and the full of shit line is rediculously played. The quotations and stars are retarded. He tried to throw an outside the box line. Outside the box lines are played as fuck, and his made no sense. Both verses were weak, but I'm voting for Script, because K fed with his first 4 lines.
Vote: Script
-W1
Vote-K cypha.
Scriptious punches were blah. Both of the people's wording was eh, but I think K cypha was a little better than Script's.
Both verses sucked. K you had to much about his verse, which sucked. 4 lines about he line limit and shit, wack. Scriptous flow was horrible.. saw some punches all of them were weak.. none appealed to me..
Scriptious had more wordplay/vocab.
Vote-Scriptous.
This wasnt too strong of a battle...Scriptious had some things that hit....but nothing big at all....everything was just kind of blah...
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
Best hit by far...still not too great though...should elevate...we're trying to get KO's every round, remember that....
K actually had him at first....all he had to was keep it up....
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
that was a strong opener...you could have rode on that alone....but you dropped a line that made your verse look horrible....
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
that murdered your verse three times over.....
vote...Scriptious.....
This wasn't very good.
Flow-Scrip ur verse didn't flow too well. Ur lines were uneven.
K ur verse flowed decent.
Punches- Both came weak in this aspect. Like scrip ur planet line made no sense. U tried to use a word and turn it into sumin else. Ur punches were weak and played.K all ur punches were played. Well not the negative three one.
Personals-Also very weak here. Scrip I didn't see any in ur verse. K u fed off scrips verse ur first four lines and on top of that u didn't do it very strong.
Originality- U too seemed like u were trying to come original, but it just didn't work out that way. Stay up on battles and see what kind of lines are played.
my votes= Scrip, I just feel like his punches connected more. This by all means wasnt a landslide tho.
boo@ this battle..
Scrip - Punches were pretty gay, and didnt hit him very well...
K - No real punches, pretty weak and nothing hit..
v/scrip
scrip wins
cus other dude was mad played
mad played
and his personals were weak
plus he explained his punches
n00b :rolleyes:
V/ scrip
the other guy fed :)
and expla ined his punches.
This battle was meh. I know Script didn't really take it seriously, coz he would've done much better if his opponent wasn't that wack :p lol.
V/Script
K Cypha wins this, cats...
Script had stretched lines, slow flow on account of it.
K was shorter, quicker to the point, used metas better.
Nothing great from either of them, nothing even very good...
But all around, K threw the better read.
Winner: K Cypha
Peace
Ehh both verses sucked. But i think it was clear who won.
Scriptious had better punches in my opinion. he has 1 while cypha had none. Work on structure and flow to both. Both need to work on punches and personals.
V/Scriptious
Vote- Cypha
Script, that was whack no offence. structure was whack. flow fell off at points. punches were not thrown.
Cypha- that was ok. you used personals. dont use shit lines. you had the hype in ur verse, threw punches.
vote- cypha
WTF?
K Cypha came witty and had some good multis and punches. It wasa actually not a bad verse, but never explain your punches, newbie. :)
Scriptious had an okay verse, but it wasn't personal at all and wasn't very witty.
Vote: K Cypha
vote-cypha
neither really had anything that good, but cypha's was better
boo at this
weak battle yall...
this could have been good but both were lacking...
Scriptious had a nice rhyme scheme...structure wasn't too good tho..and had no punches....forced wordplay with the "planets" "Planned hits"....nothing was too good in this verse...sorry
K cypha...had decent rhymes too, and structure was better...but holy fuck did you ever play off of his verse? damn seriously, that should be an auto dq...but since ur not dq'd then I won't look at it like that...the "full of shit" line was kinda played...and nothing else really stood out....but you still attempted more punches...soooo
V/ K Cypha
Scrip - lines were kinda stretched and alot of your lines didnt even rhyme to me like planets and kids...down and amount.....punches werent great, some were ight, some just didnt connect. No good personals in the verse.
cyph - wasnt bad, some lines were ight, some were kinda played out like the diapa line..but yours did hit harder, more easy to read and some personals were attempted...but dont explain ya punches.
votin cyph as he had a better attempt..
wohhhh lol..10 mins is all it took..i got 5 votes anyway..why are all use voting?
blap blap bang
Nah i think votin doesnt end till Sunday man
Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
---Not a good opener at all...
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
---Eh...Not bad I guesse...Didnt rhyme very good.
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
---No. Wack
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
No no no..
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
Eh...not bad I gueese.
Ok you came fairly wack. Dont use that structure. Uhh closer and planet lines were decent. Rest werent good at all. Try to come with more wit.
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
---Not bad....Flowed nicely.
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
---No consdearing you used the same structure as him right below.
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
---I dont like it when people break into 3 line bars but strictly as a punch it decent.
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
---Amazingly played punch. Im guessing the script thing is probably pretty played aswell.
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
---No.
You had one hypocrital line...Box and limit lines where coo....but the rest were kinda below coo...like minus good. You flowed nicer with the rhyme scheme though so...
Vote/k cypha
Vote: Scriptious
Reason: Better punches, even though both were lacking in these. But Scriptious also had better flow which gave him the win in my eyes.
not too great a battle....
i dunno y ppl are voting for script, his verse was shit, and K, u fed a little bit but ur verse was actually decent with some OK punches, nuthin great...
vote - K
^that's rightQuote:
Originally Posted by MCeePJ
Not quite. There's still voting allowed, and he's gettin' votes fast.Quote:
Originally Posted by Scriptious
script had tight flow, ok punches, k had ok punches but crap flow, nice scheme in scriptz but overall multis came to ti down and criptz got that
vote scriptz
Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
hmmm
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
meh, your bars are too stretched, the punch comes from nowere
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
ehhh
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
filler
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
nah
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
meh
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
meh.. fity and shitty... nice rhyming words :thumbup:
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
decent, didnt you just bash on this structure?
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
pretty decent
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
meh
i forgot whos verse is whos so..
.. i vote this second guy.... first verse wasnt good, at all.
Scrip - Punches were pretty wack and didnt hit that well..
K - No hard punches, all were missing..
v/scrip
Script wins
...yes...all battles stay open till Sunday...^And YOU need to give better than one sentence explanations...at least do a two sentence one..lol
its like this.........
punches-Script
flo-Script
structure-Script
vocab-Script
lopsided battle.............
vote-Script
line length dont win battles.Quote:
Originally Posted by Born To Kill
punches do.
and script had better punches.
K cypha came to basic, and lol, he had to change words around so they can rhyme.
that means no vocab either.
v/script, better punches.
Lol, and this kid comes in my battle and say its wack?Quote:
Originally Posted by K cypha
when me and Ill's verse could have ripped this shit to shreds.
Nothing great in this battle...
Neither side was all that witty.. punches and personals were bait... no double meanings or anything... just plain ol' playedness... you guys should think a lil more before you post.. script just cause you dropped in 20 minutes doesn't make you dope.. I think scrip had better creativity in his verse. Cypha got right to the point though ... I think this was the more potent approach... soo all things considering i think cyph took this one.
Vote - K cypha
Scriptious advances to Rd.2, closed.